Sunday, January 13, 2008

My fanfics...
Ok, here's just a few little heads up for my fanfics

*they are LONG, well the main one is anyway. I'm probably gonna post the ones I wrote when I was in 3rd and 4th grade first though so I have time to look over and clean up the tokyo mew mew one.

*I have a LOT of original characters in each of these. Like the final fantasy one I wrote in 4th grade. I saw 1 episode in Japanese with no subtitles so the fan fic is solely based off what I thought the story line was. I had a few plans of continuing it but after watching the series most of the way through I gave up on that...

*a lot of these where written as class assignments (and they were written when I was little) so I can't guarantee quality with them all. The cardcaptors one being a major example. Me and a friend wrote it around 5th grade outta boredom and it was mostly cramming our favorite episodes into one.

*All but the Final Fantasy fanfic are in play format so they are mostly dialogs between the characters.


Please remember when reading this I wrote it when I was in 4th grade. It could be worse... much, much worse......


Chapter one
The subway

“Are you sure that they ran this way Alley?” Asked Barbra. "Yes or I wouldn’t have brought you here.” Said Alley. The two sisters ran down to the old subway to find the cats that ran away from their mom’s pet shop "It’s their favorite place in the whole city." " I thought the city closed this place do to lack of solid ground." “Well so did I, but look there’s a sub right there.” Said Barbra. The girls unknowing of the dark essence that surrounded the train had slowly walked up and got in. “wow .” said the girls at the same time as they slowly stepped up into the train .”Who are these people, which is if you could even call them people?”There were tall things that looked like ogres, people, short things that look like moogles {a creature from final fantasy}, and many other things, too.” Hi.” said one of the human looking things onboard. “Hi?” They said at the same time.” I’m Lisa “said Lisa "hello “said alley “I’m alley and this is my sister Barbra “hi” said Barbra. “I was wondering were are we?” “Well you’re on the train to the land of final fantasy.” but I thought final fantasy was a game that Squre-enix had made.” well it is but were did they the idea for it from?” ok, but how did they get there?” By this train of course.” Come on I will take you on my team .as the three set off for the back of the train they heard a boy scream “wait!” is it to late to sign up for the fantasy trip? No, we aren’t supposed to leave for another ten minutes. Come on. This is josh he’s been with our group for a year and a half now. Josh this is alley and Barbra. You know you three will probably be friends by the end of the ride.

Chapter two
The ride

Beep! Five minutes until departure! Come on you guys or you will have to sit on the train the whole time we’re in final fantasy and believe me that would be the worst thing that could happen here. After being signed up josh and Barbra had struck a conversation and alley had out her gameboy advance and was playing final fantasy one and two dawn of souls. Shortly after alley beat the boss and got the crystal of earth Lisa came in “does anyone need to learn how to use magic or weapons?” all three hands shot up. ”Ok well let’s go to the training facility then.” Right now I will teach you how to use cure it’s a spell that enables you to heal yourself or a partner .after about ten minutes we had learned every spell she had to teach us down and were ready to learn how to weald a sword . “Let’s go and get ready to go now that you know how to protect yourself and others you each start off with five hundred Gil. Buckle up and prepare for a bumpy ride.” We are traveling at top speeds.” Which is?” Asked josh “two hundred forty two thousand, three hundred twelve mile per hour.” What! “Just joking we are only traveling at ninety mph.” entering gravity zone buckle up! “
Chapter three
The games of life

As we entered, the vertical train station josh had asked me what school I went to. Is he new in town or something because everyone in town knows what school I go to?” barb thought. “Oh well like I care if he’s new in town or not, he’s a friend.” Now to worry about getting off this train.” Getting off the train was hard because the sub was standing strait up. The back of the train was at least a good thirty stories high, luckily there was a stairway coming from every door and a ladder to get to the door. “Okay were is my group?” Thought Lisa. “Alley, Barbra, josh get over here before you get left behind!” As the three ran over alley was grabbed by the shirt and was taken away by a guy named Sun who would be the mega boss. No one has ever been able to beat Sun so every year one person that enters final fantasy never comes back. Who is that guy and where is he taking my sister!” Shouted Barbra.” Well Miss Captain?!” she was taken to castle oblivion and that is your first meeting with sun.” Said Lisa. “Well I’m going to go to this castle oblivion to get back my sister.” “No your not. “ Oh and who are you to be telling me what to do!” shouted Barbra.” I’m Ty and I’m guessing you care a lot about your sister, but you can’t go to the castle.” Why not?” Let’s just say you won’t come back.” said Ty. What do you mean I wouldn’t come back? “Well you know how in the video games there is a mega boss or the final boss as some call it, that’s what sun is.” He is invincible; no one has ever beaten sun except the wielder of the demon gun who was supposedly put under a spell. If you could break the spell than all you would need to do is level up, learn new spells such as toxic, and freeze so you can poison and paralyze an enemy. It makes them easier to attack them.

Chapter four
The run away

After hearing an hour long lecturer, Barbra went to speak to josh. “It may sound crazy to you but I’m leaving.” Why?” because of this.” Barbra pulls out a book she found while on the train. “What is it?” asked josh. “It’s a book of letters between Sun and Lisa.” What would Lisa mail Sun for?” well I know one thing she set my sister up.” How?” asked josh.”Well read this letter that dates back to Monday December twelfth, the day me and my sister came.
Dear Lisa,
Morning Lisa. I’m well aware that you know my son moon’s seventeenth birthday is coming up and And for the last few years you have not been bringing many girls to town. So, tonight when you come to Final fantasy you had better bring at least four girls who’s names start with a’s such as alley if not you Will marry my son instead. Just so you know they also must be in the age range of ten through fifteen, ok.
See you when you get here,
Sun

“How can someone be so heartless?! I don’t know. But I’m not stick’ in around to find out what happens next.” So the two set off to find alley and all the others who were also taken by Sun. after apraximently two hours Barbra who was not used to being on such a tight schedule like training swimming running and hiking was out cold. Her legs hurt so badly she couldn’t even get up on her knees so she rested and waited for josh to come back with the chocobo’s so they wouldn’t have to walk but that was the wrong idea. Meanwhile at castle oblivion “let me out you slimy jerk!” as Sun threw alley in the third room of the castle. “Jerk, why am I always getting kidnapped. “Shouted alley as she kicked the wall just to reveal a hidden path. The farther she got the colder it got. I’m going to miss inuyasha it’s like the hottest show on TV. As she said that she turned and saw a door appear. So she opened it. And saw a boy with an extremely weird clock hanging around his neck.” Hello.” She said .he looked at her.” Hi.” He said.
Chapter five
The newly found friendship begins


“hi he said as he went to go get up. After five seconds of being up he fell to the floor. “Are you ok? She shrieked as she ran over to him. “I’m fine. You don’t look fine you look hungry. No, really I’m fine.” Alley reached into her pocket.” here you can have the bread Sun gave me. Ten minutes later, me scared of demons don’t be ridicules there is a show I watch every night about a half demon and man are some of those demons ugly. Sun isn’t as ugly as some of them demons. Actually sun is pretty dorky compared to Naraku the bad guy of the show I watch every night. Said alley. Oh I almost forgot what is your name, I’m alley? I’m Chrono. Said the boy. Hello. Said alley again. Chrono are you from are you from here or the other world? I’m from here. Cool. Are you a demon? Were did you get that idea from? Asked Chrono. Well you asked me if I was scared of demons. Well no I’m not a full demon but I’m a half demon. Like inuyasha. Inuyasha? Who is that? Sorry I forgot to tell what the show I watch was called. Come here and wait a second. Ok? I’ll help you out if you would like. Said chrono. Why didn’t you get out yourself? Well I was under a spell and you broke it so now I can use my powers again. Oh well thanks. For what? Well your helping me out aren’t you. oh okay, well then thanks. Back to Barbra and josh who are having problems too. Help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shrieked Barbra. Help yourself. Shouted back josh. But I’m being attacked by a whole lot of chocobo. Well so am I. but we have to find this demon gun guy before Lisa can, not be attacked by chocobo.” Said Barbra. Ok, I can help you now. Just get out the packet of raisin brand and throw it over the cliff and they will jump over after it. Said josh. But that… that is our last source of food and there is absolutely no way you are going to get me to eat mushrooms. That is far beyond me. I don’t even like them on pizza and normally I’ll eat anything on pizza. So no I’d rather get eaten by some big ugly bird than throw away my food .said Barbra. Fine than I’ll save your sister who is supposed to be your responsibility.” I…I’ll find a way to save myself that doesn’t concern throwing away my food. Well, ok but I‘ll bet you my other box that you won’t another way without having to throw it away. It’s on. Shouted Barbra over all the squawking birds and as she said this she remembered knowing magic. “Firaga! She shouted as the birds toasted and ran. Thanks for the extra breakfast josh. She said beaming bu…bu…but….I…I. forgot I know magic.” Barbra finished for him. Ya. He said sort of embarrassed.

Chapter six:
The true hunt for the Demon gun Begins


After another pains taking two hour on the road the travelers come up on a town called Gaia the only town other than station town they’ve seen. ”I wonder if this place has anyone who can help us find the demon gun guy. “Well I just hope that they have a name for this guy we’re looking for because “demon gun guy” doesn’t sound right.” "Well than let’s spit up and find some information. Sure let spit up and get lost in this huge town.” Barbra said sarcastically.” We have an hour to get back here by this fountain and if one of us gets lost contact the local police which are right over there, ok Barbra.” Fine but only I can get lost, because you are the one who wants to wander around.” Fine but you still have an hour to get back here. See ya. Said josh waving.” Whatever.” Said Barbra. As Barbra started to walk around town she found a dark magic shop “I can get a magic upgrade before josh.” Thought Barbra with a devilish grin. She walks in. “josh!!! Hi.” Said josh well what a convenience do you know him? Yes ma’am, I do? Good you can pay the rest of his bill. Said the old woman who supposedly ran the shop. Josh I spent most of me money on food and water and saved the rest for here she said I was going to get a magic upgrade so you can find someone else who can for you. Man, boy you have got some bad luck. What do you mean bad luck? You have to clean up the whole shop now.” He looked around, at the same time as Barbra.” Hope ya luck.” Said Barbra. After learning flare, sleepra, and blizzra she walked out and whet to the nearest inn hoping that it was cheap.

To be continued

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