Wednesday, February 20, 2008

   little kids scare me!!!
I'm not mad at you Rayven ^^ Actually I don't really know why I would be...

Well here's the end of my story. I was able to finish it last night after I posted.

It's been getting really good reviews, everyone loves it but me. I still think it sound croppy. Like I cut out huge bits and pieces. I hate when I feel like that.

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So They meet and eat dinner while waiting for the sun to set...

"So...." Says Kevin, watching the sun as it slips behind some clouds, "the food was ok right?" "Yeah." She says as she looks at him and smiles, "It was great." "Ok, that's good." Says Kevin relieved, "My mom made me make everything so I didn't know how it would taste." "No, it was fine." She looks back at the sunset. "Ummm.... Alice?" "Yeah?" "Well... have I told you I'm moving yet?" Alison looks back at Kevin "You are? When??" "My mom said sometime next week," He looks down, "It sucks, I can't tell Jay that I'm moving. He isn't due back from Michigan till the seventh." He glances up and see her watching him, hesitates, then leans forward and lightly kisses her on the lips. Almost as sudden as the decision was made to kiss her, he pulls away. "I'm sorry..." He looks bad down embarrassed. "Ummm...." Alison, also embarrassed, starts "I... I can always have Sara call him for you." She glances his way, "She got his number before he left so....."

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To forget the whole kiss thing Kevin starts talking about his new house and then they move onto what their dream houses would look like. They go on like this for another hour or so before they both decide to go home.

"So....." starts Alison as she starts to get up, "Will I be seeing you again before you leave?" "Nah, probably not. I need to start packing." "Oh... Well then...." She hesitates the leans forward and kisses him then turns and runs off. "Bye!" She calls over her shoulder. Kevin sorta chuckles the starts to walk home as well. " I sure am going to miss her when I leave......"

The End ^^

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Today was SO boring. We hardly did anything today. It felt like Friday... And math is back to being easy. I'm happy about that. The crap we were doing yesterday sucked.

lol, my reading teacher, when she read the end of my story thing, kept talking about how it reminded her greatly of actual people. Like... oh what was it she said about the guy...... That he's just like a typical guy. That he doesn't even think to go after her or anything. Lol, it was so weird. No one else mentioned that. Only my teacher.

I was shocked, i had my computer lab teacher read it too earlier and she said something about me having a talent for writing. >.> Why am I the only one who doesn't think so??? Every one says that. My science teacher, my reading teacher, my computer lab teacher, my friends.....I don't get it. Why is it that every one else likes my stuff and I don't? I mean I love the way my science reports always turn out (which is weird cuz I hate science) but I hate most of my other work.

lol, I just noticed my heading has nothing to do with my post. But really they do, little kids are so WEIRD!!! I thought I was weird and my friends are all weird but little kids... *cringes at the thought* I don't like most little kids they creep me out.

well I'm outta stuff to say Bye bye for now ^^
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