Saturday, February 18, 2006

Part 3
Now for Part 3 of the Forlorne Redemption. This is our favorit part so far. So we hope you enjoy it ^^.

Adrian gulps and clenches his fists in preperation.

JUDGE: Adrian, I've read over this list of sins and judgeing by this, your chances are slim.

Death: Oh, let me see!

She appears behind the Judge, looking at the list over his shoulder.

Death: Hmm. Someone's been a naughty boy.

Judge: You will travel through the Velley of
Death. Along the way you will meet many demons who want to stop you from getting through. They cannot hurt you and you cannot hurt them, or the result WILL be Hell. They will use any trick they can, so keep an eye out.

The judge bangs his gavel and Adrian takes the form of what he was in the Vietnam War.

JUDGE: You will do this in the form you committed the most sins in. Appearantly that was in war time. Remember my one word of advice-you sin once, and you go to Hell.

DEATH:(smiling)No preasure.

AADRIAN:(scared to death) Yeah...sure...no preasure

The judge bangs the gaval and the darkness is lifted, revealing the entrance to a thick forest.

JUDGE: You may now enter the Valley.

ADRIAN:(staring at the entrance;to the judge)But...it's a forest.

DEATH:(offended)Hey! It's my forest, and I can call it a valley if i want to!

ADRIAN:(startled)OK,ok! Don't have a cow!

DEATH:(smiling again)Alright then.

She appears behind Adrian and shoevs him into the Valley.

DEATH:No hard fellings. ^^

A wall of plants behind Adrian, focing him to move forward. As he's waling he sees many demons, each trying to scare Adrian, some jumping at him and stopping just before reaching him. Adrian then flashes back, once again, to the Vietnam War. Adrian, along with his brigade walds through the jungle, accompanied by a single tank. Adrian's closest friend in the army walks directly infromt of him.

FRIEND: Hey, Adrian. I bet those Veitnamians are gonna piss themselves when they see we got a Panzer on our side.

ADRIAN:(chuckles)You bet!

FRIEND: Let's just hope we don't get ambushed before we get to cam-

That second blood splatters on to Adrian's face. The blood of his friend. The friend falls back, onto Adrian. Adrian catches him as two more American soldiers are shot in the head. Finally, one person realizes what's going on.

SOLDIER:Sniper!

Another is sniped as the tank takes aim. The tank fires in the general direction the sniper's bullet trails are coming from. That moment, Vietnamese soldiers emerge from the grass, firing at anyone who moves. One Vietnamese man climbs the tank, while uleashing a grenade. He throws it in the tank's peep hole just before being shot to death. During all the comotion, Adrian is nicked in the ear and falls to the floor. As he watches in horror his comrades die, he finds himself frozen in fear. Adrian comes back to the present. Standing infront of him is his friend from the war.

FRIEND: Long time no see, Adrian.

That cocludes part 3! We can't wait to see what happens next. Can you? Well you'll just have to! XP

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