Saturday, December 17, 2005

Christmas Break
Well its Christmas break, and im lovin in. Yesterday we got out at 10:30 it was pretty awsome. im not going anywhere for christmas but my moms parents are coming over for christmas and then i have some friends that are coming over for new years. Oh and i have started my new story but im trying to make it as good as posible, so look for it in the next few days
Merry Christmas everyone!!
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Wednesday, December 7, 2005

   SNOW DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY! its snowing here! i havent seen snow in a long time! because of where i previously lived. PM me if you want to know more about that, but the one time it did snow there, where were gone!
i was sooo mad, but the snows back and im excited!!!
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Monday, November 28, 2005

Thanksgiving break over
well my break was spent working and occasional computer i got to move about 3 tons of dirt for my moms huge garden then i got to work in the attic with my dad, to help lay down a floor then install a new ladder, which didnt fit at first, well that was my break what about yours?
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Sunday, November 20, 2005

another day, another post!
well i just wanted to say that i have been planning and figuring out all kinds of things for my new book! i have the map, races currency, people and for the most part the storyline, but there is one problem....since i have a new computer, the scanner is not yet hooked up, and when i can scan im not sure how it will work, so it might be a while before i can post any pictures, and the microsoft word is not installed yet so i cannot start typing, but when i can ill be ready!
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Thursday, November 17, 2005

new computer
sry i havent posted in a while for those of you who read these, my old computer died and i got a new one! so its gonna be good
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Thursday, November 3, 2005

new house
im sorry i havent posted for those of you who read the posts, the reason for that is that we just moved into our new house this past weekend (10-28-05) and we didnt have the internet installed so today is the first day it get it
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Monday, October 17, 2005

new character
My new character that i made up for my new story is Talin and yes he is supposed to be left handed, i thought it would be something different, so thats what i decided to do, more HATE.

HATE CH.4 pg.36

“Um, I think it is real,” Kayne said with a serious look on his face.

Kuo looked up at him, “Ha! Nice try kid, but I don’t believe you. I must see the blade.” Kuo began to unsheathe the sword.

“Kayne stood up quickly. “No! No! Don’t do that!”

Kuo had the sword unsheathed half way, before he began to notice something. “My arm hurts.” He looked at his arm and it began to slowly shrivel up. Kuo began to panick, “Aaaaaahhhhh!!!.” He dropped the sword immediately. “What the heck is that thing?!?!”

Nona wiped her eyes as she woke up, “What’s wrong mister? Why does your arm look like that?”

“That- that thing… is…cursed!”

“The skulls eyes on the sword started to glow a red color. The voice spoke slowly, “Soon…this world’s time will come. Ha ha ha ha!”

Nona grabbed Kayne’s shirt tight and began to whimper.

He held her tightly to comfort her. He lowered his head down near hers. “That’s not gonna happen, ok? Don’t listen to it. You’ll be safe will me.”

Quickly Chord slid it back into the sheath.

Kuo looked at Chord confused, “Why didn’t it do anything to you?”

“I don’t know, it probably didn’t have enough time.”

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Saturday, October 8, 2005

ok.....
well this last story that i showed you didnt last long, im already bored with it, im gonna stick with writing the kind of medeival stories, there more fun to write, well me and my good friend Brooke are writing a story together, when wh actually get somewhere ill start posting that too, for now heres Hate.

HATE Ch.4 P.35


Chord looked at him, “Why would I do that?”

Kayne sighed, “Nevermind.”

The store clerk looked at Kayne, “Who’s the mother?”

Kayne quickly looked at the man, “Huh!? Oh! No no no, you don’t understand; you see--.”

“Coulda fooled me. What can I do for ya?”

“Can you sharpen these?” Chord showed him the scythe and chain whip.

“Can I? I remember making those, hand them over they’ll be ready in a couple minutes.” He walked back into the back room, and began to sharpen the blades.

“This guy made those?”

“Yes, Kuo is a very skilled blacksmith. He has repaired my weapons countless times.” After a couple minutes of waiting, Kuo came back out of the room with razor sharp weapons.

“Here you go,” he looked at Kayne, “What is that on your back?”

“Oh, its nothing.”

“Well that’s a lot of nothing, let me see it.”

“Ummm, Ok. Just don’t unsheathe it.”

Kuo took the sword, sheath and all; he admired the sword as if it were a sword of the Gods. “Such handiwork, with the bones and the skull, hehe, it almost looks real.”


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Saturday, October 1, 2005

New story prologue
well im gonna give the prologue of the new story im writing so be sure to tell me what you think.

Prologue
Joel is a sophomore in high school, with his brown hair and hazelnut eyes; it gives away his soft heart. He is the kind of person who would do anything for anyone in need. But is always worried about something bad happening, although nothing bad has ever happened to him, in his lifetime. The same can’t be said for his father. When he was 10 years of age his father was hit by a drunk driver while crossing the road in a small subdivision. But in a large city as this, drunken drivers could be anywhere. Drunken drivers are the least of his problems, for this large city is on the border of a terrorist country, and the terrorist have decided to take the city hostage. Hundreds of illegal aliens snuck into the city planting bombs on some of the major buildings in the city. When they have planted all that they feel they need, they will spring up out of now where, take the city under control, and threaten to blow all of it up if anyone from outside the city tries to help, whether it be supplies or ammunition, it matters not. Nothing enters or exits the city; anyone who tries to retaliate will be killed. But one school has a secret that may be the key to retaking the city. If you have the courage to try, success may not be that far away.

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Friday, September 30, 2005

out at 10:30!!!
today at school i got out at 10:30 because we had exams, i hate exams, buut we got out early so its ok, and i dont have school for a week, its Fall break, most people dont have it, and if your wondering why i have it is because how early we started school, but i have to pack the whole week because we move into our new house on October 27!!!!


HATE Ch.4 p. 34

slowly opened the door. There lies his mother, bloodied and wide-eyed. Kayne screamed.
Kayne awoke to a complete darkness. His breathing became heavier, Kayne remembered his mother when she was happy. He could remember the smile on her face. Even though he was only four it is the only memory he had to hold on to. Tears started to fall down his face. "I'm sorry I couldn't save you mom."

Out of nowhere a voice said, "What did I tell you about crying boy."

"Shutup Chord." Kayne rolled over and went to sleep."

Kayne awoke ready and refreshed for the day ahead. He gathered all his things and got ready for anything that might be thrown at him. Once he had gathered all his things he looked over to Nona. She was sound asleep. He walked over and as gently as he could he picked her up and carried her. There was no sign of Chord anywhere. “Couldn’t you have left a note or something?” Kayne started out of the room having no ideas where he was going. As he walked down the corridors and glanced into every room he passed, he was amazed at what these people had made from scratch. He noticed that every person that passed him was different. Some looked homeless, some were elves, even some which looked like elves but had very different features. He even saw goblins, which did not care who they passed or met. As a matter of fact no one seemed to have anything against anyone of any race or color. He came along a shop that had anything you would need on a journey, herbs, swords, and shields, even armor. Kayne was interested in what they had to offer. He walked in and looked at the large variety of things to choose from.

“What took you so long boy?”

Kayne looked at the person that spoke, it was Chord. “Couldn’t you have left a messaged or something?”

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