Thursday, August 18, 2005

uuuhhh
well for those of you who are wondering how long my story is, there isnt a stop yet, i am still typing so far it is about 46 pages and growing, but nothing really happened in school today so, thats it i guess, but in the story (those of you that have read along)
have made it to CHAPTER 2!!!!
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Wednesday, August 17, 2005

more story
HATE page 10 CH. 1

“Sure, why not.” Kayne signed the poster then asked, “What is his name?”

“His name is Dustin.”

Kayne wrote: Dear Dustin,
Hope you have a great time in Tolain!
Kayne Maro
“Thank you so much, he’ll be so happy when he gets it.” They heard an arrow whistle through the air.

Kayne ducked and said, “Did you hear that!” There wasn’t an answer, just a thud! Kayne looked at the man and the arrow was in his neck, right where the armor did not cover. Blood seeped down into his undershirt then he said, “Please, t-take this to…” He stopped.

“Yes, I know… your son.” Kayne grabbed the rifle and the poster that the man had dropped and slide down the ladder. He saw small army advancing on the horizon. He then ran to the front of the village where the small guard team was positioned. They all went quietly into a trench where they could hear the footprints.

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Wednesday
well todays wednesday and the same girl touched me at lunch and then in science theres this other girl but... i dont know its just really wierd, where i used to live there was like no pretty girls but here...WOW! but at like 8 tonight i have to go to a youth bible study soo, ...yep
OH! i read some of your comments on the whole girl that touches me thing, and ive noticed that you dont seem to like it when people do that, to tell the truth it doesnt bother me, i mean i think its cute when girls flirt...no i think its awsome! lol! but thats my opinion
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Tuesday, August 16, 2005

More story!!!!
HATE page 9 CH.1

“Ok.” Kayne dashed to the watch tower, and as fast as he could climbed up the ladder to the top. When he was at the top he clicked on the loudspeaker, “Everyone listen! There is a great fire spreading quickly in this direction you must evacuate now! Follow the north road to the city of Tolain. Hurry, gather your family and important belongings we don’t have much time.” After a while of watching people get their things and leaving he thought good, at least they’ll be safe if they leave now. The fire will be here in a couple of hours, and we can’t do anything to stop it.

“Mister? Mister?”

Kayne heard a little voice calling from below, a familiar voice. He looked over the side and saw the little girl he had saved.

“You’re still gonna come visit me right?”

Kayne smiled, “Yes, I’ll make sure I do that.”


“Okey-dokey see you later, mister.”

Kayne just smiled and waved and thought what it is like to have the innocence of that little girl. “She is always so optimistic about everything that is how everyone should be… but their not.”


“Are you Kayne Maro?” said one of the guards at the watch tower.

“Yes, that is my name.” Kayne looked at him confused.

“You are my sons role model he loves you, could I get you to sign this poster?”

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i dont know what to say
Well the same girl walked by touched my head and said, "Hey cutie!" i just sat there and took it, but otherwise in school i have like a billion tests tommorow, so wish me luck! Well in my algebra class theres some girls that have and attitude all the time, one of them was calling me and my friends imature jerks, and all we did was laugh...i love girls to death but, guys... we just cant win... so men the sooner you learn that the better off youll be.
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Monday, August 15, 2005

More story
Hate page 8, ch. 1

“But you save helpless lives all over our country,” said a man in the crowd. The villagers lifted Kayne up on their shoulders as they continued to cheer. After a couple hours of partying and cheering everyone was tired, so they went back to their houses and rested. Kayne fell asleep in a field under the bright stars. When hey awoke the next morning the sun was already high in the sky. He sat up and rubbed his eyes as he slowly began to wake up. When he had finally regained all of his strength, he thought he should go and help others in need. When he took his last walk through the village he saw posters and banners still up, men still asleep outside on the porch. The he felt something grab his leg. Startled he turned around and saw man on the ground with an arrow was in his back.

“Demons, goblins, their c-coming h-h-here. The man then took his last sweet breath of life and passed on.

Kayne then thought to himself, “Are they real? I thought they were only in stories. He must have gotten frightened by a forest animal or something.” He then dragged the man to the field in which he slept. When he had put the man down and wiped his forehead he looked up and saw smoke in the forest. “It’s just a forest fire; it doesn’t have anything do with the demons and such.” But as he watched he noticed that it was no ordinary forest fire, this was and overwhelmingly huge fire. “Everyone must escape. We can’t put out something like that.” Kayne sprinted to the mayor’s house and knocked on the door.

The mayor answered, “Yes?”

“There is a giant forest fire in the nearby forest, it will soon reach here. Everyone must evacuate, now!”

“Yes, right, umm there is a loudspeaker up on the watch tower, use that.”

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Monday
Well it was back to school today and i was tired, i woke up at 5:45 and then i forgot lunch money so i didnt get lunch then my 3rd period class ( i only have 4 periods) seemed to take forever. But those of you that are wondering about the girl i was talking about last time, i think shes pretty cute but i think she has a boyfriend and if she wants to go out with me she will have to break up with him, i dont do the whole cheating thing, even if it is her whos cheating.
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Sunday, August 14, 2005

One more day
well its sunday again and tommorow i have to go back to school, ooh booy.... man i am not excited at all about school, theres this one girl already hitting on me, touching my hair when she walks by, whispering how cute i am, always talking to me, that kind of stuff, but enough about me. heres some of the story,
HATE page 7, Ch. 1

“Well I’m not quite sure really, my parents went to bed one night and the next morning before any one was up I went to play behind the house. When I went back I saw shadows in the house and ran in fear. Afterward I found my mother in the closet, completely Torn up.”

“And your father?”

“I would think they took him and tortured him to death.”

“”How old were you when this happened?”

“Maybe four or so.”

“That’s quite a large thing for a four year old to live through and except.”

“Yes, but the forest and the animals were my friends they helped me through it. I know that is hard to believe but it is true.”

“Well I’m sorry for what happened in your past, but thank you once again. Now, what I called you here for.”

A man walked in and said, “Mayor we are ready.” Then he shut the door and went off.

“Kayne would you please walk outside.”

“Ummmm… sure.” He got up confused but curious of what was outside. He slowly opened the door and peeked out, he saw nothing. Slowly he completely opened the door and people sprang out from every direction, a banner of thanks was raised. Everyone was screaming, whistling could be heard and Kayne was very pleased.

“You didn’t have to do this I just saved a little girl not much for what else happens in this country.”

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Saturday, August 13, 2005

Saturday!!
ok todays my first saturday of the school year YAY!!!! well dont know what to say so heres more of the story
Hate Page 6 ch 1


As he walked out the door he said one more goodbye and waved. When he was waving he noticed the hotel sign at the top of the building. “Oh, that’s where I was.” When he had been walking for a while, he took the band he found in his pocket and pulled his long hair back put the band on to hold it. On his way to the mayor’s house he looked at the card. On the front was a picture of Nona and Kayne, colored as a child would. The names were over each of the people. Over the smaller character was, Nona. And the other character, nice mister. He opened the card and it read:

Thank you for saving me, I realy apreciate it.
i hope yu like the coine, its my favorit one
I wont forget yu becaus yur realy nice.
Please don’t forget me
I hope yu like the present I gaved to yu
Love yur friend,
Nona

He folded up the card and put it in his pocket, and continued on his way. As he arrived at the mayor’s house he rang the doorbell and waited for an answer.

“There you are Kayne I was just about ready, but its okay ill finish what I was doing later. So, yet another life saved by the brave Kayne. You’re making a great known name for yourself here, especially for your age, aren’t you only eighteen?

“Yes, but I have trained with the best because after my parents were taken from me I had to stay in the forest. It may not seem like much but the ways of the forest can teach you much. I learned many things from the forest and its inhabitants. I don’t want anyone else to have the same fate my parents did or even have to grow up the way I have.”

“Hmmmm, I can understand that. Could you tell me what happened?”

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Friday, August 12, 2005

Friday!!!!
Yay! its friday and the first week of school is done, so i have gotten to sort of liking this school so hope you all enjoy your school, heres some more of the story.
Page 3, ch. 1

in his office. He told me whenever you wake up to see him at least an hour later.”

“Umm, if you don’t mind me asking what time is it now.”

“Oh, you don’t have to worry its only eight forty-five. You have plenty of time. If you are hungry breakfast is in the kitchen.” The kind lady smiled and walked off.

“Hmmm, nice people.” The boy got changed and went down and ate breakfast. “Thank you for your consideration, and the new clothes.”

“No, thank you Nona wouldn’t be here if it weren’t for you.”

Kayne and the family that was taking care of him visited and laughed as they talked about whatever came on their mind. So for almost and hour they ate and talked, enjoying themselves very much. But the time came when the it was time to leave.

“Well… I better get going it’s almost ten o’clock.” He stood up pushed his chair in and took the dishes to the sink. “Thank you again for everything.”

“No need to thank me, you deserved it.”

“Well I’m going to head to the mayor’s house, bye.

“Hey mister, wait,” said the little girl as she gave him a card that she had drawn. “Thank you for saving me, there’s my favorite coin in there so don’t lose it. Will you come back and see me?”

“Yes I will come back and see you after I see the mayor, ok.”

“Ok,” the little girl smiled and skipped back to her mother.


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