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Saturday, March 4, 2006

Kaian [PG]-My new manga
Hey all just looking for opinions on this plot,

Kaian The plot

Kaian takes place on the content of Arnor during the anctient times, during the times of peace after the second war there was a group of fierce dragons that came over from the lands far off to the west. They began to terrorize the people of Arnor, Eldamar, Neuro Mar, and Sereg’wethrin Hosse. So the elders of each clan banned together to talk discuss what they would do to stop these terror beasts they called, Uruloki. The elders, who were also the rulers of the clans decided they should make a separate clan for this special duty.
This clan was made of a group of specially trained men and youth from every city in the content. They called this clan The Ndengin’Uruloki, The Dragon Slayers. These men and youth were trained by the humans and N’Shanesti in extreme hand-hand combat, and how to fight with an array of weapons from swords to pikes.
They were trained by the elves, in a different way. The elves knew how to use magic. They used these skills to train these boys how to fight in their way of magic and mind deception.
The Ndengin’Uruloki fought the Uruloki for many centuries until the dragons fled from the land unable to withstand the bombardment of the Ndengin’Uruloki. Though this almost caused a third war, one between the Ndengin’Uruloki and the Uruloki.
Now in the present time one boy, Kaian, doesn’t know that before him waits an adventure as he is soon to find out that he has backgrounds and ancestors that flow all the way back in history to a very important member of the Ndengin’Uruloki.
Kaian, a half-elven boy about 18 years old, lives on his farm with his mother Elen and father Gilemar. They live outside of
Oira Me’a, the capital city of Eldamar. His life is about to take a turn
for the better or the worse, the decision is his.

Thanks for you help,
Admiral Zabi
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