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Sunday, March 13, 2005
Other half...Yaaaaaah!!
I've been told the truth... I've written better! Of course I have but does that really matter? I'll accept this constructive critism and move forth. I've already written 10 episode though...*sigh*. Oh well... enjoy people, enjoy.
Episode 5
Inuyasha: I’ve finally got close enough to you… Wind scar!!
(Carmine watches it)
Carmine: (Curled up) Owwww!!
Inuyasha: He survived it? Wait a minute… he smells human, it shouldn’t have even worked; what’s going on? Let’s see you survive this!! (Gets closer) Iron Reavor Soul-
Carmaine: I activate noxious gas… all the stuff that comes out of the exhaust of a car in one depth defying smell… lets see how you like that towards your sensitive nose.
(Inuyasha become stunned)
Carmine:… ah, yes Hannah, you sure have been waiting there a long time.
Hannah: To relish every moment of the pain I’m about to deliver to you…
Miroku: Now all we have to do is get to Carmine.
Carmine: I must warn each and every one of you… I have placed Guarantied kill, Kawaii death, disgraceful sacrifice, and make shift suicide on the field… who wants to try them out!!
Maxwell: Okay Vynd… go with God.
Vynd: Why me?
Maxwell: You are one of the most important, so you must go sacrifice your life, to get Carmine killed.
Vynd: (Frightened) Okay then…. (He keeps attempting but is too afraid)
Miroku: I’ll go but there is just one thing I have to ask…
(They all look at him)
Miroku: (Gets on one knee) Patricia, would you mind bearing my child?
Patricia: umm… well… this was kinda sudden a-and…
(Sango appears on Kilala and hits him over the head with the boomerang)
Sango: I can’t believe what you just did Miroku!!
Miroku: ahh… surely you misunderstood what I said.
Sango: Save it buster! (Goes after Carmine)
Carmine: Ah… a variable has appeared on the field. (Looks through his hand) … must believe in the heart of the cards. (Pulls one out of his deck) *sigh* one has actually caught me I guess. (Looks up)
Sango: Hiraikotsu
Carmine: You are going to have to try a lot harder than that! Shuriken!
(Sango Blocks them with her boomerang)
Sango: You’re going down…Hiraikotsu!!
Carmine: This again… (Catches it) You’re going to have to try a bit harder th-
Hannah: Good bye!!
Inuyasha: Huh!?
(Hannah touches his heart and shoots a beam through her hand)
Carmine: WTF!! (Barely dodges tearing some flesh through his arm)… Yeeeeouch!!! (Runs)
Hannah: Get back here!! (Runs into a barrier) when did this get hear grrr… Hits slashes it repeatedly with her large sword?
Inuyasha: I saw what you did, hand it over!
Sango: Inuyasha, what’s wrong?
Inuyasha: She’s got to some shards of the sacred shikon jewel to pull that off.
Hannah: What are you talking about!?
Inuyasha: Trying to play dumb huh!
Hannah: You want a piece of me? (Turns around)
Inuyasha: Don’t mind if I do… (Clenches his fists)
Hannah: You really don’t want to mess with me!!
Inuyasha: I got you now!! (Dashes towards her)
Kagome: Sit boy!!
(Inuyasha helplessly falls to the ground)
Hannah: What!?
Kagome: Don’t worry about Inuyasha, he does that sometimes.
Sango: Miroku. Me and you have to talk…
Miroku: You just didn’t hear the whole si
(Inuyasha glaring at them)
Inuyasha: Alright… now since they’re gone I wanna know how the hell she pulled that move off! Wait a minute Kagome… you should be able to sense the jewel shards.
Kagome: *Confused*
Inuyasha: Spit it out Kagome!!
Kagome: Ummm… To be quite honest Inuyasha I don’t get it as well…
Inuyasha: Maybe if you’d decide to tell me, then I’d figure it out!!
Kagome: She actually has a whole shikon jewel.
End of chapter 5
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