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Sunday, June 13, 2004


   Here: --> Poem Modification

I wrote a poem to put on DevArt but it won't let me post so I'm putting it here. There's something wrong with their server that denies us the ability to post ;_;

Anyhoo, what better time to make my poetic debut here than now?! So here goes:


....:Let Me Drown:....

You lock my heart,
My body, my mind.
The key you take,
I'll never find.

You've torn my wings
And chained me down.
The drops of blood
They stain my gown.

You have her all
But still use me
A darkness here
Is all I'll be.

So now I sit
In a pool of tears.
No one will come
To take my fears.

You've killed me once,
Don't let me down.
Tear out my heart
And let me drown...



...Ok, what do you think? I'd really very much appreciate comments. Thanks.

That's all for now.

<(=^_^=)> Bye


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