Sunday, April 1, 2007

   more of teh story!!!
hi everyone! well, mirelle5 spent the night last night, and it was so much fun! we wrote some more of teh story! and for anyone who wants to read the whole thing, just tell me, and i can PM it to you! well, we left off at chapter 16, but just to refresh your memories, i'll post chapters 16 and 17! ^-^ here ya go! tell me what ya think of them!!

chapter 16
time: the morning now
place: somewhere on the island... an unknown place. oh noes!!!
YA'LL ARE SMEXIST!!!
captain unknown: we must capture the great ones!!
red unknown: who are the greatones? DUUUURRR
captain unknown: amanda and cheyenne
yellow unknown: and they are....?
captain unknown: *sigh* nevermind. we're just gonnna capture them cause they have the power to destroy the world if they wanted to.
blue unknown: how are we going to capture them?
purple unknown/king kong: OOK OOK. (i shall do the job! but i will need some minions to tie them up for me)
red unknown: why?
purple unknown/king kong: OOK OOK OKK OOOOK ( i don't know. i just saw it in a movie once.)
captain unknown: but we'll only be able to capture one at a time!
red unknown: why?
captain unknown: because i don't have enough rope you baka!!!
yellow unknown: plus by capturing one, we will lure the other one in!
blue unknown: which one are you gonna capture first?
captain unknown: amanda
red unknown: why?
captain unknown: because she''s got bigger boobies stupid!!!
yellow unknown: oh... that makes sense.
captain unknown: okay! COMMENCE MISSION!!!
*back to where everyone else is*
cheyenne: i like curtains.
amanda: i like blue curtains!!
cheyenne: i like blue bubble curtains!!
amanda: i like blue bubble curtains with duckies!!!
cheyenne: i like blue bubble curtains with duckies and shampoo~!!!
amanda: i like blue bubble curtains with duckies and shampoo and SOAP!!!
brianna: WILL YOU TWO JUST SHUT-UP?!!?!?!?!?!?! WE DON'T EVEN NEED CURTAINS!!! WE'RE ON A FREAKIN' DESERTED ISLAND FOR GOD'S SAKE!!!!!
cheyenne and amanda: oh....
amanda: i gottas go potty!!!
*goes deeper and deeper into forest*
linda: where's she going?
cheyenne: she had to go potty!!!
linda: oh....
DARKNESS!
amanda: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
everyone: what was that?!
joey: my amanda senses are tingling!!!
cheyenne: what are you, spiderman?
jonathan: spiderman!!! spiderman!!! does whatever a spidey can!!!
brianna: linda, you got yourself one hell of a boyfriend
linda: don't i know it,
jonathan: huh?
linda: nothing....
joey: forget about that! we have to go and look for amanda!
~~~meanwhile in the dark depths of the ocean... i mean island~~~
amanda: WHY THE HELL AM I TIED UP?!!?
BOOM BOOM BOOM
amanda: whas that?!
unknown purple/king kong: OOK OOK!!! (because you have the power!!)
amanda: WHAT?
unknown purple/king kong: OOK (you heard me!)
amanda: oh great. now there's a giant monkey trying to talk to me and i don't even understand him!
unknown purple/king kong: OOK OOK OKKO (oh nevermind..)
amanda: and he's still trying to talk to me!!! AH!
~back to everyone else~
*somewhere on the island*
joey: i think they went this way!
cheyenne: you guide us joey!!! cause i have no sense of direction whatsoever!!or common sense for that matter!
linda: yeah, we all know that,
brianna: hey joey, what that? *points to a shiny thing* (boy have we had a lot of shiny things pop up lately!)
joey: i dunno, let's go see!!
cheyenne: i wanna touch it!! *reaches for the SHINY thing!*
everyone: noo!!! cheyenne don't--- *they all fall on it*
*BOOM*
joey: what's happening to us?!?! *all of a sudden he turns into a link-like figure*
cheyenne: i dunnos!!! but i like it!! *she turns into a navi-like figure*
linda: i knew you shouldn't have touched that shiny thing!!! *she turns into a red zora*
brianna: it's just one weird thing after another, isn't it?!?! *she turns into a blue zora*
jonathan: WTF?! *he turns into a pink zora*
chapter 17
time: who keep track anymore?
place: do i have kill someone to get it through your thick skull??!?! you %$&@#

joey: time to find my girl!!!
cheyenne: HEY!
joey: what?
cheyenne: that way!
linda: *grabs everyone's hands* we're off to see the wizard!
jonathan: the wonderful wizard of OZ!!!!
brianna: merrily merrily merrily off to the wizard of oz!!
cheyenne: HEY!
joey: what?
cheyenne: that way!
linda: children of the corn!
jonathan: we have come to eat your brains!
brianna: your mushy- ushy brains!!!
cheyenne: HEY!!!
joey: what?
cheyenne: that way!!!
linda:i see yummy digestables
jonathan:?! where?? OMG!! i see duckies!!!
brianna:what did you say you dork?
jonathan:nevermind. they ate each other.
brianna: 0.o

BLOOOPO

cheyenne:lets eat wait i dont have a mouth damn! ke ke ke *steals jonathans mouth*
jonathan:mmmmmf (now i dont have a mouth!)

mean while.....

amanda:my food sences are tingling everyone else is eating without me DAMN YOU ALL FOR LEAVING ME
HERE ....IM HUNGRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *ECHOOOO*

everyone:what was that?
Jonathan: I got this strange feeling that someone REALLY hates us...
linda: you must be high or something.
joey: Whatever! we must find my love amanda!!
*starts walking and everyone suddnely sings*
joey and jonathan: ~I'm a barbie girl in a barbie world~
brianna and linda: ~I eat peanut butter and myself~
cheyenne: i shall engulf myself!! *glomp*
linda: Omg!! she ate herself!
joey: Hey! A hole! It's soo big! Let's jump in it! *drags everyone and they fell in the hole!*


In Heaven (dun dun dun!!!)

Angel: I hope a piggy doesn't die...then i will be very very sad...
Ann: You..Are..A...RETARD.
Angel: T.T..... Look! A new arrival!!!
cheyenne: ehhh!!! *falls on butt* Owwwie!! TT.TT
Ann: Omg! Are you hurt?? My poor baby!
cheyenne: Who the hell are you???
Angel: omg omg omfg! how are you!?
cheyenne: ummm... i'm in heaven. you know how i am. i'm dead!! WAHHHHHH!!!!! ToT
ann: aww!! poor child! you weren't destined to die yet!
angel: we must fix this horrible misjudgement!!
ann: yes!! *she uses her magical fairy powers to send cheyenne back to earth*
cheyenne: AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
ann: my duty here is done!

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