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myOtaku.com: Angel of Strife
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Thursday, March 13, 2008
wtf, editor???
yes, this is me
okay *shoots self* our art and lit club has an ediotr...and god, let me tell ya, NOTHING'S right with her unless she wrote it. i submitted a part of my horror story, and where it says how one of the antagonists (who is possessed) "stared at me like a rabid beast would." there, she said to "show don't tell" and to describe HOW a rabid beast would stare at someone...how the hell do i do that? and now she's saying that i shouldn't write the story in a first person's point of view...even though previously, she said not to write it in multiple people's point of views... *shoots self again* keep in mind that she's an editor, meaning that she's never, EVER wrong. christ, it amazes me that she admits to not being a professional editor. yeah, i think someone doesn't know what she's doing, don't you? also, she's saying how i should describe the bloodied flesh wounds found on one of the victims...okay...if they're BLOODY at ALL, there's no real point in describing them because a. the main protagonist was at a distance from her when he discovered that she was killed and b. THEY'RE BLOODIED SO YOU CAN'T CLEARLY SEE THE DETAILS OF EACH WOUND.
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