Friday, March 2, 2007

chapter 2 part one
YAY!! i finally got more up!! ^^ tell me wat u think, k? ^^

Chapter Two—The Training Begins!!


“Garr… Where IS he??”
Sazaki glared around the training fields that she and Sasuke had trained earlier that morning. She was SUPPOSED to be meeting her new teacher here, like Iruka said. Also like Iruka had said, she came right on time, only to find him NOT here.
“And Iruka says that I’M bad with time…”
She tried to quell her nerves as she waited. Exasperated, she sat down on the ground and allowed her eyes to become unfocused, knowing that her senses would alert her if anyone approached.
What am I going to do…? She thought, If this guy is any thing like that old hag of a teacher, Zima, I’m gonna have to face him off head on… I’m DONE crying and running away. Naruto taught me what it is to be strong… the first person who ever talked to me when I first came here… he’s still one of the only people who ever do…
Her thoughts wandered, thinking about her first days coming into Iruka’s classroom.


“Come on, Sazaki. It’s ok. Come say hello to my class.”
Three—year—old Sazaki kept her place behind the door, peering cautiously in at the other students.
“Who is that?”
“Is she new?”
“Boy, she must be really shy…”
Whispers wafted into her line of hearing, making her shiver. She turned her piercing blue eyes to Iruka’s warm, friendly brown eyes and shook her head nervously.
“Come in, Sazaki,” he said, taking her by the hand and pulling her in the room, “There’s nothing to be afraid of. See? Everything’s fine.”
She gulped as she felt everyone’s eyes on her as she walked in, and slid closer to Iruka’s body for protection.
“Class, this is Sazaki Otushima. She’s being transferred into our class, so I hope that you make her feel welcomed.”
He turned to her and smiled warmly at her.
“Go on. Go take a seat next to Naruto, the blonde in the back over there.”
He propelled her gently with a push from behind. She stepped cautiously forward, walking to her seat with her eyes on the ground, and sat down.
“Hi!” the blonde whispered enthusiastically, “So you’re the new girl that everyone’s been talking about. I’m Naruto Uzimaki.”
“H—hi…” she stammered shyly, meeting his gaze for a split second, and then looking back down at the desk.
She played with a lose thread on her right sleeve nervously.
“So…?”
She glanced back at him, taking in the features of his face with great interest. His blonde hair was spiked, going in all places. He also had three, thin stripes running down both cheeks, but the thing that interested her most were his eyes.
His eyes… they’re like…. Mine…. They’re the same color as mine…
He grinned at her and whispered, “Not much of a talker, are you? That’s ok. You’re gonna stick with me, m’kay? I’m pretty sure you don’t have friends, so I’m gonna be your first one!”
“NARUTO!”
The boy jumped as a piece of chalk bounced off his head and fell to the floor.
“HEY!!! WHAT’S THE BIG IDEA???”
“SHUT UP AND PAY ATTENTION!!! HOW DO YOU EXPECT TO LEARN ANYTHING IF YOU SIT THERE RUNNING YOUR MOUTH??”
A small giggle escaped Sazaki’s throat as teacher and student shouted at each other.
“NARUTO!!! SHUT UP OR ELSE I’LL FAIL YOU FOR THE REST OF THE YEAR!!”
The blonde flopped back down in his seat, scowling. Sazaki cut up in silent laughter, another small giggle escaping her throat. Naruto’s eyes went wide and he stared at her in shock.
“You… You laughed! I heard you! You laughed!”
Her face flushed and she stared intently down at the desk. Presently, she heard Naruto laughing.
“S—stop laughing at me…!” she stammered.
“I’m not laughing at you! Well, I am in a way… I’m laughing at your reaction. You looked so cute when you did that!! Hahaha you’re a funny one.”
She stared at the blonde in amazement, then after a moment, a broad smile spread across her small face.
Maybe… she thought, Just maybe, this won’t turn out to be… so bad… after all…
The thought that she might have finally found a friend warmed her and broke through her fear.
Just maybe…

wat do u think? ^^
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Thursday, March 1, 2007

not much today, so....
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Sunday, February 25, 2007

i have the rest of chapter one of Sazaki's story!! ^^
it took awhile, but here it is!!

He looked kind of uncomfortable as he spoke.
“I’m… I’m, uh… I’ll buy you lunch, ok?”
Sazaki stared at him in confusion. He never extended this kind of offer to any other student before.
“Uh, Sensei? Is that wise? I mean…” she stuttered, fumbling for the right words.
“I’m not supposed to choose favorites, I know. I want to ask you some things in private.”
So that’s what he wants… she thought, intrigued.
“Uh… sure, Sensei.”

After a while, they were sitting in the best ramen shop in the village, waiting for their food.
“Sazaki,” Iruka started, glancing at his young student, “As your mentor, you know I’m concerned about your health. It’s very important to me, because I want to see all my students succeed. However, I’m especially concerned about you right now. Ever since I took you out of that last class, I watched you recover and grow form the… abuse you took from it. “
Sazaki winced, unwillingly thinking back to her darker days in the first few years at the academy. Then, she had not been studying under Iruka, but another teacher, a man by the name of Zima Sukiyaki. He was cruel to her, picking on her in front of the whole class. The kids in the class would corner her and throw things at her like huge rocks, and they would gang up on her and beat her up, making her terrified of everyone she ever met. She became shyer than Hinata, rarely speaking to anyone unless she had to, and running away in fear form anyone who tried to talk to her. Not only that, but he had… done things to her that left her bleeding and bruised. In fact, she still had the scars from the time he beat her relentlessly on her upper back with a whip. Iruka had seen her when one of his students found her passed out in the hallway from trying to crawl to the bathroom, with blood pouring freely down her back. She had only been three or four years old at the time.
“And I know that you don’t remember anything from your past, either. You do, from what you told me, have nightmares that you can never remember that you think could be some of your memories trying to push through. You can see why I worry.”
Sazaki picked at her ramen when they set it down in front of her.
“The only problem is that I’m to busy with the other students to help, and that makes me guilty…”
“It’s not a problem, Sensei. You took this job because you wanted to teach us what you know.”
“I know, but it still makes me uneasy. Not to mention the fact that you keep having those nightmares.”
Sazaki opened her mouth and shut it again. She didn’t want to worry Iruka about the nightmares again. The last time she did that, he wouldn’t leave her alone about it for a week, which got pretty annoying.
“I can’t always be around to help you, so I’m assigning someone to you that can.”
She stared at him in shock.
“But Sensei!! I—I want to train under you…!”
“I know, but I already told you, I’m to busy, especially in dealing with Naruto. You know I have to keep a constant eye on your friend.”
She laughed in spite of her misery. She didn’t want anyone else to train her, especially if it was someone she didn’t know. Some of her old fear flickered in the pit of her stomach at the thought. Iruka looked sadly at his pupil, seeing the fear in her eyes.
“Don’t worry,” he said, putting a hand on her shoulder, “I made sure he wasn’t like Zima Sensei. He’s more than willing to help you if you let him. However, he will test you to see what you can do, but he’s nothing to be scared of.”
Sazaki picked at her ramen again, to nervous to respond.
“You are to meet him after class today at the training fields, ok? Please don’t be late, and don’t worry,” he said, tilting her chin towards him, looking her in the eyes, “I’m sure you’ll like him. He’s had a bad history like you, so he’ll understand.”
Sazaki nodded determination in her eyes.
Well, we’ll just have to see about that.

well.... wat do you think?? ^^
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Saturday, February 24, 2007

i'm baack!! ^^
hey guys!! the trip was AWSOME! i had a blast! ^^ anywho, i finaly managed to figure out a begining for that story i told you about!! however... i need a name for it, so... HELP PLEASE!! >> anywho, here's the beginging to it.

Chapter one: An escape in the dark



A sleepy silence settled over the land of Saharan as night enclosed around every being in and around its borders. On top a tall, gently sloping hill stood the proud and majestic Castle of Floret. It, too, was affected by the silence of night, its people sleeping in the peaceful darkness. However, the peace would soon be broken, for a storm was brewing inside the castle, one that would devastate the royal family that slept inside its walls. The guards making their nighttime rounds were unaware of what was happening around them as the night weighed heavily on their sleepy bodies. As they made their last rounds, they heard a scream from inside.
“MY BABY!!! COME BACK WITH MY BABY!!!”
The guards jumped, and ran to lower the draw bridge to get inside. Just as the drawbridge was half way open, two figures on horse back sprang out over the gap.
“HEY COME BACK!!” one of the guards shouted as the horses on the other side with a heavy THUMP!!
On of the figures skited to a halt and stood in the stirrups, raising its hands. The person chanted in an ancient language, one of power, and then its hands began to glow a soft blue. The moat began to gurgle and steam as the person chanted, and the guards ran forward, shooting arrows at the intruders.
“SHI BINSANS TIAN!!!” the person shouted, its hands flashing with light.
The guards stopped short as the ground began to buck furiously beneath their feet, causing them to trip over themselves and fall to the churning ground. Suddenly, the moat water, which had been steaming and withering in its murky depths, exploded into the air one by one like columns of liquid fire. The guards cried out and scattered, trying to avoid the burning droplets that rained from the sky. The lone figure stood proudly on the far shore, looking on at the chaos that it had created. From the depths of its cloak hood, a small sad smile prickled at the corners of its mouth, and one tear ran smoothly down its neck.
“Good bye.” The figure whispered, looking one last time on the castle.
The figure jumped back on the horse, and it reared on its hind legs, turning and raced after their companion into the folds of night. If the figure had stayed, it would have noticed a lone figure of a young girl at one of the castle’s balcony, watching sadly as the horse and its mount sped away, a matching tear of pain dripping down her cheek.


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Tuesday, February 13, 2007

... I'm grounded... >>
yes, i'm grounded from my laptop or any means of internet devises for right now. i snapped at my dad cause he was getting on my nerves. you know how parents are. anywho, he grounded me. but he forgot about school!! *evil grin* ah well. i'm not going to be on all next week cause i'm going to north virginia for a ski trip (for those who don't know, cause we have a whole bunch of ppl from different countries, i live in the United States) i'm so excited!!! ^^ well i gotta go. see yall tommorrow!! ^^
Lots of love,
~Lexi-chan~
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Wednesday, February 7, 2007

   ....so tired..... -_-zzzzz
i'm so tired right now.... i dont have enough energy left... @o@ aaahh!! it feels like my brain is fried!! >> i'm gonna get it up soon, i promise...
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Monday, February 5, 2007

.......
..... i'm not in a really good mood today..... usually i'm really hyper... but.... >>.......... i'm still typeing the rest of the story... and i'm trying to come up with a begining of a new story (that's not naruto) that i'm doing... i have the main characters, but i cant come up with the begining....
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Wednesday, January 31, 2007

sorry
sorry it's taking so long in getting the rest of the stroy up here... i'm sick right now, and i almost passed out yesterday cause i was lightheaded... >> and i still need to type it... i havent been able to get to it cause i've been sick and i've also been busy... TT.TT I AM SO SORRY GUYS!! I'LL MAKE IT UP TO U LATER, K? i promise ^^
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Tuesday, January 30, 2007

   .........
i am very pissed right now. my teacher asigned us punishement homework because this one DUMB IDIOT would not SHUT UP. we have to write all the definitions for chapter 13 (18 def.) ten times each, and if we dont turn it in by tommorow, we get detention. THERE IS NO WAY IN HER FREAKIN LIFETIME I AM DOING THAT. SHE CAN KISS MY DUST FOR ALL I CARE. >>
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Friday, January 26, 2007

..... -_-zzzzzz.....
good lord i feel like sh!t right now... ach, i think i'm getting sick... anywho, i'm still working on the story. if anyone would like to see a little thing i made of when they are older, either leave it in a comment, or pm me. which ever one...
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