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Sunday, February 25, 2007


i have the rest of chapter one of Sazaki's story!! ^^
it took awhile, but here it is!!

He looked kind of uncomfortable as he spoke.
“I’m… I’m, uh… I’ll buy you lunch, ok?”
Sazaki stared at him in confusion. He never extended this kind of offer to any other student before.
“Uh, Sensei? Is that wise? I mean…” she stuttered, fumbling for the right words.
“I’m not supposed to choose favorites, I know. I want to ask you some things in private.”
So that’s what he wants… she thought, intrigued.
“Uh… sure, Sensei.”

After a while, they were sitting in the best ramen shop in the village, waiting for their food.
“Sazaki,” Iruka started, glancing at his young student, “As your mentor, you know I’m concerned about your health. It’s very important to me, because I want to see all my students succeed. However, I’m especially concerned about you right now. Ever since I took you out of that last class, I watched you recover and grow form the… abuse you took from it. “
Sazaki winced, unwillingly thinking back to her darker days in the first few years at the academy. Then, she had not been studying under Iruka, but another teacher, a man by the name of Zima Sukiyaki. He was cruel to her, picking on her in front of the whole class. The kids in the class would corner her and throw things at her like huge rocks, and they would gang up on her and beat her up, making her terrified of everyone she ever met. She became shyer than Hinata, rarely speaking to anyone unless she had to, and running away in fear form anyone who tried to talk to her. Not only that, but he had… done things to her that left her bleeding and bruised. In fact, she still had the scars from the time he beat her relentlessly on her upper back with a whip. Iruka had seen her when one of his students found her passed out in the hallway from trying to crawl to the bathroom, with blood pouring freely down her back. She had only been three or four years old at the time.
“And I know that you don’t remember anything from your past, either. You do, from what you told me, have nightmares that you can never remember that you think could be some of your memories trying to push through. You can see why I worry.”
Sazaki picked at her ramen when they set it down in front of her.
“The only problem is that I’m to busy with the other students to help, and that makes me guilty…”
“It’s not a problem, Sensei. You took this job because you wanted to teach us what you know.”
“I know, but it still makes me uneasy. Not to mention the fact that you keep having those nightmares.”
Sazaki opened her mouth and shut it again. She didn’t want to worry Iruka about the nightmares again. The last time she did that, he wouldn’t leave her alone about it for a week, which got pretty annoying.
“I can’t always be around to help you, so I’m assigning someone to you that can.”
She stared at him in shock.
“But Sensei!! I—I want to train under you…!”
“I know, but I already told you, I’m to busy, especially in dealing with Naruto. You know I have to keep a constant eye on your friend.”
She laughed in spite of her misery. She didn’t want anyone else to train her, especially if it was someone she didn’t know. Some of her old fear flickered in the pit of her stomach at the thought. Iruka looked sadly at his pupil, seeing the fear in her eyes.
“Don’t worry,” he said, putting a hand on her shoulder, “I made sure he wasn’t like Zima Sensei. He’s more than willing to help you if you let him. However, he will test you to see what you can do, but he’s nothing to be scared of.”
Sazaki picked at her ramen again, to nervous to respond.
“You are to meet him after class today at the training fields, ok? Please don’t be late, and don’t worry,” he said, tilting her chin towards him, looking her in the eyes, “I’m sure you’ll like him. He’s had a bad history like you, so he’ll understand.”
Sazaki nodded determination in her eyes.
Well, we’ll just have to see about that.

well.... wat do you think?? ^^

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