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Wednesday, August 2, 2006


my story
i'm writing a story and i'm posting it up. tell me wat u think. it's called "Dragon Tamers".

Satake, now dressed in Earth clothes, stuck his hands in his pockets. He let his eyes wander around the block, watching people as they went by. Some girls giggled as they passed him, glancing at him and then giggling again.
These people sure are busy, he thought, Almost as busy like back at home…
He began to walk slowly down the street, pausing at a store to look at the maps that they sold to help him find his way around.
All I have to do now is find these kids that we are after… and that is going to be hard to do since there are so many people here…. Better get started…

“Wait up, Summer. Are we going by your house now?”
School was out, and Summer was walking towards home alone. She turned to find Anna running towards her, her black hair fluttering wildly behind her.
“You go ahead. I’m running to the store real quick to get a few things… milk… eggs… a cute boy…”
Anna giggled.
“ Sure, Summer… ok, you go get all that stuff, I’ll go and finish my science report due on Monday. See ya when you get home.”
Summer smiled and waved, then turned and started to walk to the nearest store. The bells chimed merrily as she walked in. She smiled at the people she knew and walked around, looking for the stuff that she needed. As she walked she spotted a boy with emerald colored hair, looking very confused as he stared at a few maps of the city. She smiled and walked over to him.
“You look lost, stranger,” she said, taking one of the corners and pulled them it down so she could see his face, “You not from around here?”
He looked in surprise at her, his ocean blue eyes widening a little as he stared at her.
“Uhh… not really…” he stared at her face as he spoke.
“You look familiar,” he said, looking hard into her face, “Have we met before?”
“Uhh… I don’t know, I feel like I’ve seen you before… Freak incident?”
“Maybe…” he sounded unconvinced.
“Anyway, do you need help?”
“Maybe a little… I need to find some kids, and I don’t know where to start…”
Summer smiled as they neared the cash register.
“That shouldn’t be to hard. Maybe I could help. Who do you need to find?” she asked as she paid for her groceries and the map the boy was looking at.
He blushed and looked at the floor.
“Kinda hard to explain…” he said, his face still red, as he spoke, “I’m not all that sure what their names are I’ve only met them once before, and I can only vaguely remember what they look like. Not that much help, I know, but it’s important that I find them.”
“Well,” Summer said as they walked out of the store and down the street, “I can do my best to help you, but first I gotta know your name.”
“ I’m Satake.”
Summer smiled.
“Cool. I’m Summer. Before we go off looking for your pals, lets stop by my place first place and drop these things off.”
“Ok…”
He sure is quiet… he looks so familiar… his hair, his eyes, the way he walks… its like I’ve seen it before… in a dream or something… she thought, Oh well… Lets get these back to the house…

“We should strike them now…while they are weak.”
Two dark figures stood looking down on the two teens from a near by rooftop. One of the figures had long hair tied behind her back and had her foot resting on the railing, while her companion squatted beside her. She looked down at the boy, Satake, and the crystal guardian, and then looked at her companion.
“Not yet, Irix,” she murmured, bringing a gloved hand to her chin,” The boy may not be on his own turf, but he is still a force to be reckoned with… Besides, we have our orders not to harm him or the girl. We do not want to damage our master’s prize…”
Irix huffed indignantly.
“When are we ordered to take them? I grow impatient, Astri. We have been watching her for days, and the petty prince has already got her with him. Although… he doesn’t seem to notice yet… not very bright, is he? Even from here I can feel the waves of her power.”
Astri smiled.
“Yes,” she said as her black cloak whipped around her heels, ”She is very powerful… and not all of her power has been awakened yet. She does not even know the power that she wields within her body…it is a wonder why the little prince has not felt it yet… being that close to her would probably make my mind spin, forcing me to change form to my regular body so I could stand it.”
Irix gazed down at the two teens, like a cat would its prey.
“Just watching them wets my anticipation. I want to get this over with.”
Astri smiled again, allowing her hand to drop on Irix’s shoulder.
“Patience, my old friend… The time will be soon…”

well, wat do you think?
Love,
~Lexi-chan~

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