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Tuesday, March 14, 2006


Poem#03 Update


Hello, friends.

I haven't been here for a while. Hmmm... since I haven't checked Myo for two or three days... I actually think much more clearly. (^_^;

I got my first comic page almost finished yesterday. I mean drawing it and then I will edited it on the computer with a disgrading colour thing to put text on it. In the process I need to SAVE, at least, three times before actually becoming 'finished'. Oh well, I haven't PHOTOSHOP, or ILLUSTRATOR so... I make dos, right?

And so... I get WAIT to get it finished. Not today, but tomorrow. (^_^'
Hmmm what else??? (=-=; Hm... My little home is in the nicest feel about homeliness I have ever lived to be. Everything SO close together I haven't REALLY got much space to MOVE about.
(=_=; "yep, the things I stacked up in the years"


What else??? Hmmm... Oh this poem... is for someone special I know. I doubt 'it' would know, so, I'm gonna keep it a secret. (^_^; I put alot of thought in the poem to make it interesting and repeatingly structured but I don't think I've achieved it what I want... (_ _||

But yes, I guess that's all. I'm at college right now typing and... yeh, poem time. (^ ^;



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7 lines of a broken home


Do I dream of your wonderful inside
Do I wish I was with you in washing tide
. . .
Yes, I do

Do I want to say all I want to say
Do I say what ! needed to say
. . .
No, I don't

Do you ever wonder what I'll be like
when I'm different, weak, broken to bits
. . .
Do you?

Do want to see what the Light in me
the Light that brings peace and sure
. . .
Don't you. . . want to see?

Do you love me or do you like
I'll be slashed either way
. . .
Do you understand?

Do you think I'm a sin
Do you think I'm nothing now
. . .
No, I don't suppose you see?

Do I love you more than my heart feels
Do I want to die because it's a sin
. . .
Yes, now you see?


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Patrick

~HelpOUT,GodIN~



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