Wednesday, July 27, 2005

Paragraphs 4&5 and also it's the end of chapter 1! (peopls i'm writing my story like this cause the other way is getting on my nerves)
That's the last thing I want.
But he is cute and I love him more
than anything in the world. If
anything were to happen to him,
I'd blame myself for not looking
after him more closely and I would
probably kill myself if he died. I
know what you're thinking, that is
way to extreme. But I love him,
he's my little bro. Anyway, I'm
getting way off track. After I
turned, I bumped into him, and
thankfully I didn't scream but he
started to cry. "Oh Chad, honey.
I'm so sorry, you know I didn't
mean to hit you. You just scared
me that's all." I comforted him
and I pulled my self over to him.
"Where does it hurt?" I requested
inspecting his face for any blood
although I knew it was impossible
with just a bump. "Right here." he
said in between sniffles and
pointing to his high left check
bone. I noticed that there was a
small bruise, so I kissed it.
"There," I said, "Now, tell me why
you're out of bed." "I heard a
noise come from the stairs and I
was heading towards your room when
I saw you come out so I followed you." he responded still half
crying. /God, this kid has super
sonic hearing or something. I
guess he gets it from yours truly\
I looked at him smiling and he
started to get a confused look on
his face. "What?" he asked me.
"Nothing. Now since you're up, you
can help me see what made the
noise. You up to it?" I inquired
nodding to the stairs. He nodded.
I started to walk to the stairs when something grabbed the back of my shirt. Instinctively, (I
had to put a big word in my story, or else it wouldn't be a
story written by me!lol) I swooped
up Chad into my arms and closed my
eyes. Chad began to cry again. I
wanted to say something comforting
but something cluthched the inside
of my throat making it hard to
swallow.
It felt like heat was seeping
into my shoes and taking control
of my body. Suddenly my eyes
thrusted (is that even a word)
open. It felt like my stomach was
churning and that I was gonna hurl
any minute. Everything around me
was swirliing into one. My hair
started to whip my face and then,
it grew dark.
And that is the end of chapter 1! and just to keep u ppl on edge I will wait um.....3 days until i write chapter 2. muahahahaha i'm evil!
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