Wednesday, July 13, 2005

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Hi everyone, its me Zakuro. Sorry that I haven't updated in the past two days. Yesterday I went to the movies and saw the Fan.4 and it was awesome. Also, I tried and i tried really hard to finish up chapter.2 but I haven't because of some unexpect things going on here at home.Well I'm going to give you chapter 2 of what I wrote soo far until I finish up the ending of chapter 2. Well here you go. Chapter 2 Hello I'm Anna and I'm in the 8th grade and school is almost coming to an end. One day my life was changed forever. I saved Brian from a demon and he told me that I chosen to defend Earth from demons who have escaped. But how can I if I want to get my crush to like me, hang out with my friends and save an entire planet!! Man, how my life turned out to be. Well, lets go on with my story. *Next day- 6:30am* Anna- Man what a night. Its all been a dream thank goodmess. I really need to lay off a bit of study, and Charlene was right. Brian- Good Morning!!! Anna- Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!*she falls off the bed* Brian- Sorry didn't mean to get you soo jumpy. Anna- No its all right, I was hoping this was all a dream. Brian- What to be a dream? Anna- Never mind. Well I'm going down stairs and make breakfast and then I'm going to take a shower,k Brian- Can come down and see your house? Anna- Yeah, just be quiet. Brian- okay. *they going to the kitchen* Big place you got here. Anna- Yeah, my parents work in big places and earn big bucks. Brian- Wow *she starts to make breakfast* *they both stay quiet until she finish cooking* Anna- Here you go. * gives him a plate and takes a bite of it* How is it? Brian- Its really good. Anna- Good and now I'm going to take a shower and you can help yourself okay. Brian-*he's talking to himself* What should I teach her? She's only a beginner. Well whatever I help her out if nessacary.Right now me eat. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 20mins later Anna is out of the bathroom and putting on her shirt Brian is outside of her door and opening it. Anna- What do I need today? Brian- Hello, that was good food. Whatcha doing? Anna- Getting ready for school. Brian- Oh, can I come? Anna- I'm not sure since you're a dog after all. Brian- Can transform into a stuff animal, see. * transforms* Anna- Okay but be quiet, I need to take exams and people will get scrace seeing talking animals, k. Brian- I'll be on my best behavor. * goes inside in her backpack*She starts walking to school and starts talking to herself* Anna- This is soo werid. Me a fighter defending all of humanity agaist demons. This is so wrong and don't have time to do this.@_@ * Charlene- Hey Anna didn't you hear me calling to you. You look so tense. Are you sick? Anna- No I'm just tired from all the studying from last night. * I can't tell her that I have to fight demons, I'll just lay low for a while.* Charlene- Are you ready for Science test. Anna- Sure, I'm ready for it. Charlene- Please tell me wha the questions are and I can't study them? Anna- Sure you know I never leave a friend behind. * the first bell rung* Both: See ya later. *they both hurry up to go to class* * she bump into someone* Anna- Oh I'm soo sorry. I didn't hurt you didn't I? Dalton- No, its okay Anna. Anna- Oh hi Dalton *Oh man, I bump into him, I'm such a ditz* Dalton- Hey Anna let's go in now or we'll be late for the test. Did you study for it? Anna- Yeah, I did. * both are going to their sits now* * last Bell rung* Mr. Lopez: I hope you all study for my test, you didn't you have to guess on it. * passing out the booklet and scanron* Last name first, first name last, date, period, and title it Final Exam. After you do that you may begin Anna* This going to be really easy. *An hour and half later* Anna- Well since I'm done early, I'm going to give Charlene answers and question to the exam. * starts putting down hints and notes to them.* Mr. Lopez: Pencils down. Please pass them down to the front and seperate them into to palls. After that you can go have lunch. Anna- *stretches* That was esay. *starts walking to the hall* Dalton- Hey Anna, wait up. Anna- Hi Dalton*he's so hot* Dalton- That test was kind of hard, wasn't it, huh? Anna- Not really, to me it was easy. Dalton- Well, yeah you always have high marks on every thing. Anna- oh, yeah. Dalton- Hey wanna hang out,, later after-school, you go a get something to eat? Anna- Sure, I'll to. Dalton- Great, meet me in front of the school Anna- Okay see you later then. Dalton- Bye. * starts walking to his friends* Anna-Yes, I got a lunch date with Dalton (she's really happy) Charlene- Hey, I saw you and Dalton talking, tell em what did he told you? Anna- Well we start talking about the exam, which reminds me that I this for you. *gives her the answers to the test* Charlene- Thanks, keep on going. Anna- Oh yeah, and he aked me a date, will more of a lunch date right after school. Charlene- You have to give full and detailed on your date right after it, k. Anna- K. ~ After School~ Anna- What a day. But I get to go on a date with Dalton, yes. * starts walking to the front of the school* Dalton- Hey, Anna. Anna- Hi there. Dalton- Let's go. Where do you want to eat? Anna- Anywhere. Dalton- Let's go to this new cafe, that I want you to try out. Is that okay? Anna- Yeah, sure. Dalton- Man, I can't believe that we are almost done with the school year. Anna- Right? *also I may never see you again* Dalton- What school are you planning to go for High school? Anna- I really don't know, its between C.P and South. Dalton- Well I'm going to C.P. I heard that's were all the Scouts are looking for new players for college. Anna- I heard that they have a great Honors and A.P classes. Dalton- Here we are, look. Anna- Rose a la Luna, it's that place expensive? Dalton- Yeah, its a five star cafe with the best chefs and state-of-the equipment. Plus, my dad is the owner and head chef. Anna- Wow*she's really impressed* Dalton- Hi there Paul, is my usual table ready? Paul- Yes, and who's this wonderful young lady? Dalton- This is my friend from school, her name is Anna. Anna- Hi there. Dalton- Paul can we get a ice-cream sundae and honeyschekle tea. Paul- Okay, it will be right up. Anna-*she's still impressed with the cafe* Wow, its really big and beauiful Dalton- Yeah, my mom was the one who came up with the decorations. Anna- Your mom has... Ouch!! *something hit her* Dalton- Sorry, did I hit you? Anna- No, you didn't... Where's there's the bathroom? Dalton- Go staight and toward your left Anna- thank you. * taking her backpack & rushes tot the bathroom* *She's is in the bathroom and enters a stall and talks to Brian* Anna- You interpruted an very inportant lunch date, espcially with my crush Dalton. Brian- O your crush, huh?!! Anna- Don't change the subject. What is that you want anyways? Brian- To tell you that you need to go to the park at 5:30, so i can start train you how to defend yourself and get that power of your out. Anna- Okay, fine but don't to that again. Not until we're in the park. * Goes back to the table* Anna- Sorry about that, my mom called me. Dalton- That's okay Anna- Oh the food is here. Dalton- Well, you likre this place? Anna- Yeah, its really beauiful and gorgious. Dalton- How's the food? Anna- Yum, its really good. *they're still talking and its already 5:30* Anna- Um, I have to go now, my mom wants me to go home early because my dad is taking us out to eat. *Gets up* Dalton- okay, see you at school on Monday. Anna- bye and thank you very much for the food. * walks to the door* * she hurries up and go to the park* Brian- Are we there yet? Anna- yeah we're here. Brian- First what you have to do is forget everything you have in your mind and then focus really hard on your power. Anna- okay I'll try. **Focus on on your powers Anna. Focus**... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry everyone I tried to finish up the ending of chapter 2. Please, I want feedback on how it is and if you have any suggestions on for her idenity, names and any else you think of. Well bye everyone please continue visiting my site. bye. ^.^

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