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Monday, March 21, 2005


   New poem...

I finally hit 70 visitors... I feel accomplished... kinda... okay I guess not at all...

I finally chose a new poem to share with you guys... I just wrote it today... and I like it... so I want to see what you guys think...

"Pain"
This pain is my power
Lasting until my final hour
Until the time I die,
Until the time I fall from the sky,
As it begins to rains hell,
I begin to sell,
My forsaken soul...
That hardly feels whole...
Shattered by as iron-fist rule,
I begin to wade in a pool
Of the people's rain...
Full of the people's pain...
The people's sorrow...
The people's hopes for a better tomorrow...
My heart is already dead...
Sinking into a pool of red...
Why care...
Why share...
Why... Why...
....I just... need somewhere... that I can feel alive....


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