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Tuesday, June 13, 2006
Kinda Stuck
I am kinda stuck in my story right now. I have a little idea of what should happen, but I just don't know how to get it to that point. It really stresses me out like that.
I'll tell you a bit of what it's like.
A passive girl gets bullied. She knows she needs to stand up for herself, but she can't find the courage to do so. She has no parents and her guardian, Aunt, just died. She makes a friend at school.
The friend is a boy that is a cheerful and also assertive. The opposite of the girl. The boy and girl both become friends with another assertive, helpful girl.
After a few things happened the bully is out of the picture. The passive girl is becoming a bit more assertive everyday.
Now a "evil force" is after both of them, the boy and the girl.
Here is where I need your help. Finally after many failures, the evil force succeeds in making them pass out. I don't know whether to make them pass out and dream, or go into a coma, or make it seem like no time went by or...
Well yeah, I'd be glad if you helped me out.
Any suggestions?
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