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Saturday, June 24, 2006


   A poem I wrote
Okies, I know that there are many possible ways to critisize this poetry I've written, cause I already know it sucks, it might not make sense to anyone, but still, I wrote it and thanks to someone new for encouraging me to post it ^-^, oh well, here it is...
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A memory from long ago,
melted like the winter's snow
A dream forgotten
eyes still closed
it drifted off where no one knows
A memory that could have been;
like the spring, renewed again
untouched by presence
viewed by all
it spread like summer's change to fall
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yeah, this is pretty much the worst poem I've ever written but I wanna know what you all think, I might post another one later depending on your opinions, sry it had to be this one, it was the first one I found, okies thanks!
yay I posted it! I posted it!I posted it!

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