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Wednesday, August 3, 2005


Endless Journey

this is the first chapter off my story. most ppl wanted it in two parts and im glad!! more time to write my story. sorry ayame rulz. the first chapter though will be full length but i hope u all will read it anyway, after that it'll be in two parts. just so u guys know no one in real life is portrayed in this story. this story takes place in the 19th centry so picture kimonos and old houses. lol

Amaya- picture her with long black hair a little past the shoulders and dark blue eyes almost black eyes. she wears a purple kimono and a yellow flower decorated sash. she has a young and beautiful face, about 18 years of age.
Omasaki- picture him an old man but not to old. he has brown hair and a light mustache.
Ryu- picture him with long dark brown hair that is tied back; he has cold brown eyes and a black kimono.

The End of a Life and the Birth of a New Black Heart


It all started on a cold rainy afternoon in a little but humble village....

man: *yelling into a house* Hey!!! Omasaki!! Could you help me with my horse!! He’s stuck in the mud!

Omasaki: Yeah! Sure! Wait a minute! Okay Amaya I have to help him with his horse. I’ll be back in a minute.

Amaya: Okay. But please be careful.

Omasaki: Hahaha. Don’t worry. I’ll be fine. *gives a big smilie*
*Amaya smiles back weakly*
Omasaki left his house and walked to the man and his horse.

man: Oh! Omasaki. Thank you for helping me with my horse. The stupid rain. Wait a minute please, I need to get a rope.

Omasaki: Okay sure. Ugh... I don’t think this rain will every stop. But I know Amaya loves it. Go figure. Hahaha we just had to name her “night rain.” *smiles and looks back at his house. Amaya was looking out the window*

Amaya: Hope he’ll be okay.

woman: Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! THAT MAN!! STOP HIM!! HE DIDN’T PAY HIS BILL!!!

Omasaki: Huh? What’s going on?

Ryu: Hehhehheh. I’m gonna need some money before I leave this stupid village. Ha! Perfect target! *he pulled out his sword from his sheath and ran closer and closer to Omasaki. Omasaki looks back in horror. Ryu swung one quick swift with his sword. Blood flowed from Omasaki’s back and he fell to the ground. Ryu looked at him in cold eyes and searched around his clothes.* Hahaha thanks old man. This should hold me for about two weeks. *he took a bag full of money and started running again through the village.*

Amaya: *gasps. calm tears flowed from her eyes. She stood there in total shock. Suddenly her legs moved and she bolted out the door.* FATHER!!!! FATHER!!! *tears flowed from her eyes* Father... *she reached her father and melted beside him and started crying on her father’s dead body.*

man: Someone get the police!!

woman: Poor Amaya... Her father was killed in front of her eyes.

Amaya: *Amaya lifted her head up and started to speak softly* He won’t get away with this. Father I swear, so long as I live I will avenge your death.

It was the birth of a new black heart.

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