Friday, August 3, 2007

im back!
hi everyone!!!! well i made it back alive^^ though that wasn't the best week of camp of ever had, actually it was probably the worst-_-" there was more drama then fun! our counselor was a newbie, and always blamed us for her problems. and she made me cry 5 freaking times!! (and i don't cry very often). now my parents just got out of lecturing me about one of my friends. that really pissed me off>_< ok i gotta stop before i get way too depressed! well at least the games were fun and one of my friends has a sexy new bfXD but anyway ya. thnx for all the comments on my prologue. i'll do some discussions then post up the 1st chapter^^




Discussions

ok th first one is from Rei-syn,, and she said "cars r evil" lol! yes cars are truely evil! ok the next one is from TaintedWhiteRose, and she says "*laughs* When you said drove, my eyes got wide because my first thought was, "You're only 13!!" Then I read on and you were talking about your 4-wheeler and I was like, "Oh, okay..." ^^; Tee hee." lol! ya^^' i actually tried driving my sister's car and ended up ginving her whip-lashes. ok the last one is from Kry, and he says "Hm...hasn't the whole demon portal, demon slayer thing been done?
Sounds a lot like Inuyasha.
Sry, not trying to be mean -_-'" nah its ok^^ i no its kinda been done before, but i like my version. so ya! ok i'll add chapter 1 now^^




Chapter 1

I woke up one morning on the floor next to my bed. “…that must have been one heck of a party.” I said to myself as I stretched out lazily. I finally got up and took a nice hot shower. It was ten O-clock in the morning when the phone rang. I jumped into a pair of jeans and a T-shirt and headed for the front room. I picked up the phone and said “Sorry, but business doesn’t start till eleven.” Then I hung up and slumped into my chair. I grabbed a slice o pizza and put my feet on my desk. “Man, what a hang over!” I groaned, as I rubbed my temples.

I went and got myself dressed. I put on my favorite black buckle boots; leather pants and tucks them into my knee high boots. I then put on a skin tight belly tank. All of a sudden I hear someone at the front door and head back out; I sit back at my desk saying “We don’t open till eleven!” it’s a voice of a man, and he said, “This isn’t business.”

“Well then you have less of a reason to come by then.”

“I think you really should hear me out!” The man said.
“Would you just leave already?!” I yelled.

“Okay, I tried being nice.” He said in a defeated tone.

All of a sudden the front door came flying off its hinges. Still at my desk my mouth drops open in disbelief. Now I was ticked! “You did not just take out my door!” the man stepped inside. He was about six foot. And was wearing brown, flat, leather, boots that went to his calves; his pants were brown and baggy. He wore no shirt and had a scar running across his left peck. The only thing that covered some of his upper body was a dark brown over coat with three-quarter sleeves and it went down to the top of his boots. He had two swords that crossed across his back, and a belt full of dagger-like blades.

“Look I was being polite, and you didn’t even
care! So I decided to let myself in.” he told me.

Still in shock about my door I said, “So you broke my door?!”

“I guess so.” He simply said.

I stood up and walked towards him. Fuming! I got right up in his face and said, “I hope you have enough to cover that!!”

“Whoa, hey! Easy! I didn’t come here to start a fight with you.” He said, with his hands up in front of him. “I just merely came to give you a message.”

Still ticked off I said, “Well, you could have said that through the door! You didn’t have to BREAK it!!”

“Actually, no I couldn’t.”

Now I was more curious than ticked. “Okay… So what this ‘message.’”

His gaze suddenly intensified. “Get ready. You have five minutes, and then we leave!”

“But what’s the message that I need to hear so badly?!” I yelled.

He sighed and said, “My brother Miguel asks for you. So I am going to bring you to him. Now would you hurry up?!”

As soon as I heard that name I backed away into my room. I quickly threw on my tan over coat. Its sleeves have cuffs at the end of each; it goes down to my calves. I swung my sword over my back then placed my guns on my hips.

I went through the back door. I barely took two steps before several level 2 demons appeared. These beasts used to be murderers and possessed people. As they surrounded me, Setto steps through the door. Smiling. “You still have two minutes you know. If you need to get anything you can.”

I twirled around to face him. “Okay, what right do you have to take me somewhere against my will? I’m not even interested in him! Besides, what did I ever do to you?!”

God! Are all chicks so whiny?!” he moaned. “Look, one: I can take you to him because I don’t really care about your willingness. Two: YOU might not be interested, but him… he’s more than just interested in you. Third: Nothing at all. I’m just following orders.”

I drew my sword. “Well, you can tell that slime ball that he can come here if he needs to see me. Because I’m not going!!”

He sighed. “I hate to use force on such a young, sexy, beauty such as you. But…”

In an instant something hit me in the back of the neck. I fell to the ground, and darkness started to close in around me. Before I lost consciousness I heard him say, “Orders are orders.” Then I blacked out.




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