Friday, August 24, 2007

   CHAPTER 4!!!
hi everyone!!! not much else to say...for once...lol!




Discussion

ok the 1st one is from akebaneamino, and he says "yup its boring but i still say boredom beats school hands down yup" true true!! still it is pretty bad... anywho 2nd one is from joshanime2, and he says "You keep on reminding me to work on my story lol" lol! and u should! its a very good story! k the 3rd one is from randomized05, and she says "ooo i LUV shopping! ha i jus started school *sarcastic smile* its goin alright for me though..." i have like a week leftT.T *sobs*...k im over it^^




Q's & A's

Old Q
1.)did u miss chapters 1-3?
A: nope! i have them in a file on my computer^^

SEX.AND.CANDY: I didn't even know you were writing a story haha. I would like to read it =]

randomized05: nope *innocent smile* PLEASE DONT HURT ME!!! *hides behind couch* (lol!!!)

ok instead of a new Q im jsut gonna skip it and go straight to chapter 4^^ enjoy!!!


Chapter 4

The first layer of hell didn’t seem that bad. It was a field of grass for crying out loud! “Okay… other than the fact that there’s a beautiful grass land in Hell, this place doesn’t seem too creepy or weird.” I walked a ways with no sign of the exit. The weirdest part was that I hadn’t seen any white demons. “Okay, since this is the land of the white demons…where the heck are they?!” I looked around. Nothing. I walked for another two hours. Still nothing. “Okay this is ridiculous!” I groaned in aggravation. It was about five minutes later when I heard voices all around me.

I looked around me but saw nothing. Until I looked down. Several tiny white demons the sizes of hamsters were sitting around me. “Aww! How cute. Besides the fact that your hell’s evil residents.” They said nothing. I started to walk away when more popped up. Soon I had hundreds of the little creatures following me. I spun around to face them. “Okay if you have something to say then say it!” I yelled.

All of a sudden tiny tooth pointed smiles came across each demon’s face. One by one they named lies I had said in my early and recent past. I denied every one I could hear (they were all talking at the same time so I didn’t hear many). As soon as I denied the truth they began to grow! They weren’t so cute and white anymore. They were browner and looked like crazed hyenas! They kept on going with the lies non-stop! It lasted for hours! I couldn’t even hear myself think anymore!

I kept screaming. Telling them, “Stop! Just stop it! Leave me alone!” but they didn’t. I tried to cut them. They regenerated. I tried shooting them. They didn’t die! Endless mind torture! Finally I closed my eyes; I fell to my knees screaming, “Okay! Okay, I admit it! I did all those things! I did them, I got drunk every night, I killed innocent people, and I did it all! Just leave me alone!” all at once the noise stopped.

I opened my eyes and looked around. All the white lie monsters disappeared. The only thing left was a door. The door to level two. “This isn’t just some test… it’s Hell made real!” I pulled myself together and walked into the bitter darkness. Wondering what evil awaited me on the other side.

LOTS OF LUV<3
~Bball Babe~
ps-check out joshanime2's story, it rocksXD and if u missed ony of the chapters (prologue-4) pm me k^^

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