Friday, August 31, 2007

   STORY TIME!!!
ello ello! well, for starters srry i haven't been around this past week. i've just been a little lazy with the posting and visiting^^' *nervous laugh* anyway, i didn't do much this week. except go to the orthodontist, get my hair highlighted, and went shopping!!!! i have till the 5th before school starts *crys silently*. on the bright side i get to miss the 2nd day to go 4-wheelingXD then for one (i don't know which one) in september i go to...*drum role* HAWAII!!! *dances around the room* well thats it i guess. i'll try to get to everyone's sites later today^^ byez!




Discussions

The 1st one is from waywardwarrior, and he says "I didn't have much to say in my post today either...must be a trend todayXD" lol! ya. oh and thnx for advice and stuff about my story^^ i really appreciate it. anywho, the next one is from joshanime2, and he says "WHY THANKS FOR DOING THAT FOR ME even if no one I dont know reads it its still very thoughtful of you" aww thnx^^ *hugs* and no prob. its a really good story so i think ppl should enjoy as much as i did=^.^= k now the 3rd one is from LGA775, and he says "Well any way your 4th part of the story is awesome i love it..I think you should put writing in your talents section..^^" i might just do that. and thnx^^





ok since i don't have an old Q or a new Q im gonna skip again and go straight to the story k^^ this is becoming a bad habit for me0.o" k heres chapter 5 ppl! enjoy!




Chapter 5

As I went through the dark tunnel I thought “Okay… that was just freakier than I expected. I mean I expected creepy stuff, but that was just plain freaky!” When I was finally through, I saw another vast waste land. It was like a desert. Something was wrong with the sand though. It wasn’t tan colored. “The sand it’s… black?!” the sand was indeed black. It also had the smell of rotting flesh in it. “Well, I guess the smell fits the scene. Hehe.” I said, with a nervous laugh.

As I walked the foul ground I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was being watched. By now I must have been walking for at least ten minutes. Suddenly I heard the sand move. I quickly swung my sword from its hilt. “What the hell was that?!” I looked around, but saw nothing. I heard the sand shift behind me so I twisted around. Nothing was there! Now I was getting annoyed. “Stop playing hide and seek and show yourself!” I had barely finished my sentence when several bloody black demons shot out from the sand! “Oh my God!” I yelled. Not just because they surprised me, but because I had never in my life seen such monsters! When I was attacked I didn’t get a good look at them, because I was facing Setto most of the time. These had blood drizzling down their half eaten, half maggot infested flesh!

I covered my nose and said, “When was the last time any of you took a bath?!” I said. They just snarled and hissed at me.

I tried to cut one in half but it disappeared under the sand so fast that I didn’t see it happen! It came up behind me and clawed my back with its bloody maggot hand! It literally burned like Hell! “God, that hurts!” I felt my body trying to heal the wound as fast as it could.

These demons weren’t just ugly. They were fast, even faster than me! They all charged me and I did my best to fend them off. But I was soon over powered by their quickness and one of them was able to sink its fangs into my shoulder. I shot it between the eyes and it turned to dust. At least I knew they could be killed.

Suddenly, my body seemed to become lighter. As if the demon’s DNA had given me its swiftness. I struck one of the standing demons with my sword. Before I knew what happened it turned to black dust too! Now I was just as fast as them! I slashed at the remaining five. They kept popping in and out of the sand. “If you freaks would just stop going under the sand I could end this sooner!” I yelled. After thirty minutes of slaughter, I had killed all of them.

The door to level three appeared in front of me. I returned my sword to its hilt and with a smile of my face I said, “Piece of cake.” And walked right on to level three.

advice/critisms r ok^^

LOTS OF LUV<3
~Bball babe~^_^~

ps- go to joshanime2's site and check out his story, if it's not posted just pm him k^^
*turns into a tiger and plays with yarn*


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