Tuesday, August 10, 2004

Heres some of a story i'm writing
i told InuyashaGirl8803 that i was gonna post up some of my writing. it may be a little later than i said, but heres some of the story i was thinking of starting. tell me if u think its good. i tried to be totally original, but the beginning may sound a little familiar. the rest wont though!

Chapter One
Unlucky # 13

"Can this day get any worse?" muttered Aishiteru Tadakashi as she fell flat on her face in the mud. Everyone guffawed as she stood and began to wipe the dirt off of her face.
'Let me recap this horrible day,' Aishiteru thought.
Her bad luck had started when she'd first awoke. Actually, before that. The night before she had neglected to set her alarm clock. Thus, causing her to awake 30 min. late the next morning.
After hurrying out of the house only minutes before school was about to start, Aishiteru thought that her day could get no worse, but it did.
"Ms. Tadakashi," her teacher had called, knocking Aishiteru out of her daydreams. Aishiteru glanced up at the woman. "Time to recite your report," the instructor told her, pushing her glasses back into a comfortable position on her face. Aishiteru dug through her schoolbag only to realize that she had left the paper on her bedside table. She could even picture it sitting there.
The rest of her classes until lunch were fine, except for the fact that every question she was asked, she got wrong.
'At least lunch is next,' Aishiteru pondered. She walked into the cafeteria and found her friends. "I've been having the worst day," she told them as she began to sit down. "I'd advise you not to sit there then," her friend, Hanami, warned. Before Aishiteru could reply, she could feel the ooze on her backside. She stood and inspected it to see that she had just sat down upon chocolate pudding. Now standing, the whole cafeteria could see. "Look!" one boy shouted, pointing. His group began to laugh which erupted into the whole cafeteria snickering. Embarrassed, Aishiteru raced out and into the bathroomm across the hall.
Her next 2 classes had been fairly good except for the pop quizzes she hadn't been the least bit prepared for. But now, it was gym class, Aishiteru's favorite and last class of the day. After changing into her gym uniform, Aishiteru had ran outside to be the first up at bat. She ended up being fourth to swing. Her team's game seemed to be going pretty well. Now, it was Aishiteru's turn. The bases were loaded. All she needed was an okay hit, to send at least one player home. Now, she was one of the most athletic girls in her grade so she was trying for a homerun.
"Go Aishiteru!" everyone yelled. She grinned as the ball came flying towards her. She awaited the exact right moment and struck it with all her might. The ball went soaring! I guess my day's getting better, she thought as she zoomed towards 1st base. then 2nd, then 3rd. As she raced home, Aishiteru smiled. Then, she tripped over a small outcropping just as she was about to hit home plate. She hit the ground only inches away and as soon as she did, the ball was thrown to the catcher. "Out!" hollered the umpire.
'Now, this is where I am right now,' Aishiteru brooded as she slowly made her way to the back of the line. She was covered in mud from head to toe.
When the game ended, Aishiteru slumped back to the locker rooms, drenched in sweat. She quickly changed and hurried out, too embarrassed to face any of the other girls. On her way home, Aishiteru felt a tap on the shoulder. She jerked around to see Yoji Kanno. He gave her a huge grin that made her melt inside.
"Hi Teru," Yoji greeted. "Hi," she replied, keeping her cool. 'I can't believe that Yoji is talking to me and he called me by my nickname,' Aishiteru squealed in her brain.
"Well..." he started. "What?" she asked, worriedly. "Do you smell something? It's like old socks or something," Yoji told her. She almost fell to pieces. She had forgot to pu on deoderant of at least some perfume to cover up her smelly stench. She blushed. "I got to go," Yoji remarked, hurrying away.
'That was the perfect ending to the worst day of my life,' Aishiteru thought. Little did she know that it was't over.
As she entered her home, her father greeted her and not with a welcoming smile. "I just got a call from your school," he informed. "You forgot two assignments and failed two quizzes! What's wrong with you today?" She shrugged. "Unless you can think of a better excuse, don't bother coming down for dinner tonight," Mr. Tadakashi replied. He turned and trugded away. Aishiteru raced up to her room, trying to hold back tears that were threatening to overflow. As soon as she reached her little sanctuary, she locked herself in. She raced over to her bed and plopped down on it. She snatched up her favorite stuffed bear.
"Why now, Mr. Teddy? What did I do to deserve such a horrible day?" she asked the animal. "I guess I could call this my 'Unlucky 13th Birhtday'."
All of a sudden, an unexpected rage filled Aishiteru as she flung Mr. Teddy across her bedroom. It landed on a box. She hadn't seen it there before. 'It must be a birthday present,' she realized, Maybe today won't be so bad after all! Aishiteru scampered over to it and snatched it. She went back over to her bed and began to take off the wrappings. Finally, she pulled off the lid to reveal a circular contraption. It was made of bronze. There was a bronze ring around it and a spinner like a compass on it. Aishiteru could barely carry it for this inspection because of its weight.
"I wonder what this is?" Aishiteru pondered aloud. "It's not even important. This thingy doesn't repent for the hell hole of a day my birthday has been." Then, the contraption began to shake. The ground around her began to rumble. Worried, Aishiteru ran over to her window and peered out. A big, black cloud was forming in the sky. Aishiteru gulped. This cloud morphed into a hole. All of a sudden, Aishiteru could spot little white dots flying out from it. "What could that be?" she questioned. "Teru! Are u ok?" she could hear her mother's voice ask. Aishiteru unlocked the door and let her mother in. "Look outside," she instucted. Her mother shrugged and did so. "Do you see that?" Aishiteru quizzed. "See what?" her mom retorted. Aishiteru gazed out. 'How can she not see that big hole?' Aishiteru thought. "Well, I'm just glad you're ok. That rumble was a little scary," Mrs. Takadashi voiced. She exited the room.
"What's going on?" Aishiteru asked herself.

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