Friday, August 5, 2005

   Hi There!
I guess this will be a big bit of good news for yas! I will just post my last chapter rigth about now!

Chapter 33: I’m Gonna Die Another Day
Madame Massey disappeared and reappeared outside her building to watch the spectacular sight. All of her lights were failing and sparks were flying everywhere, all different colours. A fire was starting and was becoming bigger and bigger. Slowly everything was coming down, and to think she’d left 16 children in there to die! But that was not true. Everyone had made it outside, but Chelsea hadn’t. She’d been overcome with smoke and fainted. Brooklyn was also inside, but he was moving Chelsea away from the exit. Diana had gone out of the back, and was far away from her friends.
“This has got to happen. She must die, even if it means I’m going to die too,” he murmured to himself as he placed her body down. Then he moved one of the rafters with his psychic powers down onto her gently. “That should do it.” He ran out of the building and was greeted with his three friends, only Ashley knowing what he had done.
“What did you do with Chelsea and Diana?” Nicole asked as the building became just about covered in flames.
“I didn’t do anything.”
“Did too!” she screamed and ran inside. She found Chelsea quickly and heaved her out, just in time before a support fell down covered in flames where she was moments ago. She gave her to her friends and rushed back to the building.
“What are you doing?” DC shouted and she stopped.
“I’ve got to do this! I must get Diana out too!” said Nicole as she ran back into the building.
“No!” DC yelled and ran after her and Brooklyn started to laugh as he watched them both disappear.
“Shut up!” Kai said towards Brooklyn.
“Make me.”
“Give me the ingredients and I will,” Kai retorted.
“Since when did Kai know stuff like that?” Tyson asked Max.
“Don’t know, don’t care,” Max replied.
“One cup of evil, a spoon full of salt, a pinch of sugar, half a cup of milk and a cup of flour.”
“Great, now I know why you look so bad, smell so bad, and are just rotten.”
“Excuse me! Don’t insult me!” Brooklyn fired back.
“I do what I want!” Kai yelled back. But it was then when the whole building burst into flames.
“It’s gonna blow!” Kenny shouted.
“I think we know that!” Ray said back. “Run!”
”But what about Diana, DC and Nicole?” Voke asked as he ran alongside the others.
“We can’t help them,” Madame Massey said.
“But I can,” Brooklyn said and ran back to the building.
“No! Brooklyn! Come back! I love you!” Ashley screamed and the cried. She knew he was going to die. Brooklyn couldn’t stop his feet and soon enough, just when the others had got cover, the building blew up.
*A week later*
“Star’s Ashes?
Although the witnesses say that four people were in the building at the time, there were no bodies found. Only traces of blood remain, matching the DNA of the four people suspected dead.
‘I don’t think that anyone could have survived that explosion, even though it wasn’t that big. The witnesses were lucky enough to come out without any injuries, but the four would have had to be far away to have lived,’ Detective Brown reported. ‘The four people are Nicole, Diana and DC from The Thuganomics and Brooklyn, a world famous beyblader. Their blood was found, but no evidence that they are still alive or dead.’ Investigators inspected the land around the scene and discovered Diana in the forest near by. She had injuries and was rushed to the hospital. Doctors say that she will live. No other bodies have been found, but the other three are suspected dead,” Kai read out off the newspaper and put it down. Back at his grandfather’s mansion they were chilling after knowing that their friends were dead. He finished just as the last song Nicole and DC had sung stopped playing with all six singing I’m Gonna Die Another Day.
“I am zo zorry,” Risa said.
“Me too,” Ryan said.
“Cause she’s dead, I think you guys might want to know something. I think Nicole would like you to know,” Kai said quietly. “She-“
“No Kai! Don’t! They don’t need to know!” said a voice, echoing the room. It was speaking very softly, but was speaking as if it could barely speak. “That’s our secret!” Now the voice started to take huge breaths, as if it couldn’t breath.
“Nicole where are you?” Chelsea yelled.
“C’mon Nicole! Tell us where you are!” Eddie shouted. “We can help you!”
“Can’t, say. Must, live. Can’t, live. Bye guys…”

Hope you all liked it! Comments please! And by the way, join the club to get my next story! ONLY PLACE WHERE YOU CAN FIND IT!!!!!!!!!

BISC
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Wednesday, July 20, 2005

   The Beyblade Is So Cool Club
Hi everyone! I am starting a club. It's not really meant to be named after me, it's just true. Beylade is so cool right?! Well, anyone who wants to join, just PM me! I ask a few questions to see who can join. Once a member, I will guid you through a few simple steps and everyweek you will recieve a newsletter throguh PM about some stuff. Mainly about Beyblade. It will also be the only place to view my next story! So, do ya wanna join? Do it now! Why not?

BISC

P.S. Read below below for my story!
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   redvixen
To redvixen.

I can't send you the descriptions. It says that you have to reached the number of PMs you can have. Maybe you have to delete a few so it will reach you.

Heres the description that redvixen wanted, for everyone.


Chelsea: Dark skin, curly dark brown hair to her waist, brown eyes, average height for her age. *
DC: Normal coloured skin, maroon hair spiked up, brown eyes, quite tall for his age (tallest of the group). * **
Diana: Very pale skin, very light blonde hair to middle of her back, blue eyes, about between short and average height for her age (shortest of the group). *
Eddie: Pale skin (not as pale as Diana), short dark brown hair (just about black) with blonde streaks in it, dark green eyes, average height for his age (shortest of the boys, only Nicole is taller than him). * **
Nicole: Normal coloured skin, brown hair down to just lower than the middle of her back, blue-green eyes, a bit taller than average height for her age (tallest of the girls). *
Voke: Normal coloured skin, blue eyes, jet-black hair (sometimes spiked up), a bit taller than average height for his age. * **

Heights (tallest to shortest): DC, Voke, Nicole and Eddie (about the same height), Chelsea, Diana.

* = Usually wears hooded top and either jeans or track pants. You decide what they’re wearing.

** = Has a muscular build.

Don’t forget to add other people actually from Beyblade so it is added in to the Beyblade area. Any pose you want, I don’t care. Can’t wait to see how it turns out!


BISC
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Saturday, July 16, 2005

   ARTWORK WANTED!!!!!
ARTWORK IS WANTED

I would like to see any of my friends who can draw send in pics of charecters in Beyblade G-Revolution Rewritten to The Otaku under Beyblade. Lets just say you draw The Thuganomics. Make sure someone else is in there too, like Tyson or Kai or Ray or Max or someone in the real story. Below is the rest of my story (next post) and you need to get 10 good friends to comment before the last chapter comes and the next story begins.....

Beyblade T-Revolt

Believe me, it's way better than the last one. Not really the first bit. That just gets you used to the charecters and the setting, but soon enough they're beyblading and fighting for their lives! Whoops! Did I just spoil the story?! Anyway, does anyone know what kind of article I could make up? Any ideas? Anyone?


So get sending my friends!


BISC
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Friday, July 8, 2005

   It Is All Over - For Now . . .
Right guys, I've finally finished my story. It is 60 pages long and has 33 chapters. The good news is that there is another story coming. I have already started it and it is so gonna rock! It's like a sequal thingie to Beyblade G-Revolution Rewritten. I hope you guys like it when I post it. The bad news (kinda bad) is that I want to have 10 comments from 10 DIFFERENT people before I post the last chapter.

Chapter 30: Some Friends
Nicole tore away from the group, DC tearing up grass after him as he ran after her.
“Please Nic! Stop now!”
“No! Some friend you are!” Nicole yelled back with pain in her heart. DC had always been there for her and he swore to her that until she said he could (which she hadn’t yet) he wasn’t going to spend time with another girl. It would always be her until she felt safe. Never would he go for another girl and protect her instead. “It’s like no one cares about me any more! I have no parents, I have no family, I have nothing apart from my friends, ad now they turn on me!” She was starting to get tired and was slowing down.
“Please Nicole just stop and listen to me so I can explain to you! She likes me; I hate her. I only know her name! Actually I’ve forgotten it, but that’s beside the point!” DC saw it was working. She was barely jogging now. She stepped into the bush and slowed right down to a stop, breathing heavily and slowly.
“You mean that right?” she said through taking big breaths. DC nodded.
“Always. I promised remember. I swore to you-“
“I know.” She hugged him and let one tear out just for him. “I’m sorry.”
“Me too,” he said softly and held her tighter. “So fake story of how I got you?”
“Oh yeah,” Nicole replied and thought quickly. “Got it! I climbed up a tree, thinking that you hadn’t seen me, but you did and caught me. We talked and I decided to go back with you. Good enough?”
“Yeah, right. They’ll fall for it. Lets go.” They walked out and saw that their friends were talking to the group that DC was with, Jasmine sitting next to Ray on the bench. “See look at that. She falls for any random guy.” Nicole giggled.
“Yeah, she does.” They laughed and Jasmine saw them approaching. She then once again slipped her arm on the boy accompanying her. ‘You’re back for good now?’ Kai asked. ‘Dunno.’ ‘Who’s these idiots here? Justin, Dylan, Misty, Samantha and Jasmine?’ ‘DC’s old friends. Totally not the friends I’d want though,’ Nicole replied and Kai looked at her, a long annoyed stare. ‘What?’ she asked him. ‘Nothing.’ ‘Yes, there’s something up. What is it?’ ‘Nothing okay? Nothing!’
“Grumpy,” she muttered and walked along behind the large group of teens.
*At About 5:00*
As they wandered the streets for the last few times, they noticed they felt like they were being followed. But every time they turned around, no one was there.
“Suppose we’ll – I’ll see ya’s later,” DC said as he walked along near the front of the group. They had wound up where he had introduced everyone to his friends.
“Yeah, we’ll see ya around some day,” Justin replied. Dylan waved and they turned their backs and walked down the darkening alley with the girls behind them. ‘I hate them,’ Kai thought, but not realizing Nicole had heard it. ‘Me too,’ she replied, thinking she was meant to hear that. Silence until DC turned around.
“Hey where’s Nicole gone?” he asked.
“And Voke,” Diana said.
“And Ray,” said Tyson as he looked around. ‘Nicole? Where are you?’ ‘I don’t know. But please help me Kai. It’s cold and dark and I’m getting scared. HELP!’ Her voice shouted in his head. He winced in pain as it echoed in his head. Help, help, help, help, help. ‘Arrgh! Where do you think you are then?’ he asked. ‘I was just walking and then I felt a hand over my mouth and eyes, and I got pulled back. Don’t really know.’ Then her scream was heard.
“Nicole!” DC shouted. “Where are you?” Then a, well, boy’s scream *does that make sense??* hit them.
“Voke!” Eddie said.
“Where is he?” Diana asked herself. Then Ray had his turn, his shout echoing.
“Ray! Where’d you go?” Max yelled.
“Hils has gone too,” Kenny said and just then, her scream was heard.
“Where could they have gone?” Kai murmured to himself.
“I have all four under my control right now. You must obey if you want them back, so listen up carefully. We want to have a match with you guys. See if we are Championship material. But we also want a deal. We want to keep these four for, sorry five, for-“
“But only four of us are missing,” DC said and then looked around. “Sorry, Eddie’s missing too. My bad.”
“As I was saying,” the voice said. It was defiantly a girl’s voice and she sounded about their age. “We want to keep these five for about a week, and then you can have them back. After the match, we’ll let you see them, just so you know that they are alive. Everyday at about midday, in the bushes behind the hall, we’ll show you them to make sure you know they’re alive. We won’t harm them unless you try to find them. Then we’ll show you that we are hurting them. Remember, fight with us by the lake today, right now and we keep them for a week. They stay alive. Try to get them back and they’re dead. Don’t fight and they’re dead. Understand?” ‘Kai please help me!’ Nicole thought to him.
“C’mon lets go and fight!” Kai suddenly said.
“Good old Kai, never turns down a challenge,” said Tyson as he walked behind Kai around a couple of blocks to the lake.
“Right, we’re here! Show up now!” Chelsea yelled into the darkness. All of a sudden, the lake’s water started to lift up at the edges by the group of teens. It lifted higher until it was high enough to let an adult walk through. Sure enough, a girl appeared walking through the water, or under it. She was tall with short green hair with heaps of gel in it, keeping it stuck down nicely, pulled back away from her green eyes and pale face. She was wearing black track pants and a black t-shirt with Wanna Mess With Me? written on it in red. She stopped just out of the water and held her hands up, closing her eyes. Then another girl appeared walking behind her. She had red hair, just like fire, flowing down to her shoulders. She was tall, but not as tall as the first girl and had lovely sea blue eyes. This girl either had a tan, or was born with slightly darker, but really noticeable, skin. She wore blue shorts and a blue tank top. She also had a blue headband in her hair, keeping it pulled back out of her face. She stopped by the other girl and glared at her competition. Yet another girl appeared, the shortest of the lot. Her purple hair was down to just before the middle of her back and she had brown eyes. She was wearing a dark pink mini skirt and a light pink boob tube. Then two boys walked out. The one on the left was wearing a red T-shirt with a yellow logo on it in the middle and jeans. He had brown eyes and was a dark American. He had short brown hair matching his brown eyes. The other boy had dark orange hair and blue eyes. He was wearing a green jumper and jeans. Both boys stopped by the girls, just in front of the water line. The green haired girl lowered her hands and the water returned to normal. It was she who spoke first, and it was she who was recognized first.

Chapter 31: The Gods & Goddesses
“I am Razi, The Goddess Of Water And Minds. This is Risa, The Goddess Of Earth And Animals,” she said nodding towards the girl with red hair. This girl speaking now was clearly the girl who had spoken to them before. “She is Rachel, The Goddess Of Luck And Changes.” She indicated to the last girl wearing pink. “He is Rob.” This time she pointed to the orange haired boy. “He is The God Of Wind And Spirits. And this is Ryan, The God Of Fire And Technology.” She pointed to the last boy.
“Where’s the proof that they’re alive?” Diana asked.
”Right here,” Rob answered as he placed his hands high above his head. A picture was formed by mist and a bit of colour, showing the five captured friends.
“That’s not real proof,” DC said, starting to get worried, but not showing it.
“Getting scared now are you DC?” Razi asked with a smile.
“Here, let me show you,” said Risa. She spoke with an accent and rolled her r’s. She clicked her fingers twice and straight away growling was heard from all around the teens.
“What’s that?” Chelsea asked as she looked around her.
“Tigers,” Ray whispered softly. “But how could they end up here in the wild in a city?”
“Dude, Goddess Of Animals remember?” Tyson said.
“Come out,” Risa commanded and tigers emerged from the bushes and the water. Five of them had hovering bodies above them. The bodies were unconscious, but were defiantly the five that they were missing from their group. The other tigers growled loudly at the strangers.
“Okay, enough proof. You want a fight?” Kai asked eagerly.
“Yes, we do. But we want to keep them for a week. We swear we won’t hurt them and we will return them safely to you,” Ryan explained. Chelsea grinned just slightly. She knew she now had a crush on him. Ryan realized he was being stared at and smiled back at her. She blushed in surprise and shock and focused on the situation.
“We want to have a fight just before we give them back to you okay?” Rachel asked. “Until then, you’ll just have to wait.”
“No! We want them back now and we don’t want to fight either!” Diana yelled and lunged towards Razi. She punched her in the guts, causing Razi to fall.
“Wrong thing to say,” Razi said and jumped back onto her feet. She ran and dived into the water.
“What?!” Diana asked herself. Quickly she realized she was going to be attacked and moved away from where she had punched Razi. Water rose and headed towards Diana. “Don’t you dare get me wet! I’ve only just got my hair perfect!”
“Too bad,” hissed Razi and let water fall on all of them.
“Right, that’s it!” DC yelled and he lunged at Ryan and started fighting. All though both of them got knocked back hard and fell a few times, they kept on going.
“Fire!” Ryan said, sounding like he was calling someone called Fire. DC punched him hard.
“Aaarrrrggghhh!” DC shouted as he made contact. He looked at his fist. It had a small burn on it. ‘Whoa he’s hot!’ Chelsea thought. ‘No he’s not,’ Kai thought to her.
“What Kai?” Chelsea asked.
“Didn’t say anything,” Kai said truthfully and started to fight Rob.
“Zis will be way too easy,” Risa said and launched herself into a fight with Chelsea.
“Earth!” she yelled, also sounding like she was calling someone. Rocks lunged up in front of her, just as Chelsea was about to make contact. It rose as high as the tree beside them. Risa jumped up onto the rock and began to climb up it. Soon enough, she reached the top and laughed down at Chelsea. Chelsea got ticked off and jumped up too. Risa then clapped her hands twice quickly and a huge dog appeared out of nowhere and knocked Chelsea off the rock into Ryan. As soon as the two made contact, the dog disappeared.
“Ow!” Chelsea screamed.
“Sorry Ryan!” Risa yelled down to him and she jumped down the rock. She started to lunge kicks and punches at Chelsea. Razi and Rachel fought Diana and Tyson and Max were working on Rob with Kai. They weren’t much of a help, but they didn’t care. Kenny stayed out of it and Hiro turned up. *That’s Tyson’s big brother if you didn’t know*.
“Hey what’s this about?” he asked. All he saw was boys and girls jumping around fighting each other. Ryan punched DC hard and he ran into Hiro.
“Hey watch it you son of a *you know what comes next*” he yelled at Ryan.
*About 10 minutes later*
“Can’t, continue,” Chelsea breathed heavily as she spoke. She was lying down on the ground absolutely tired. DC shoved Ryan right next to Chelsea.
“Okay okay! Stop! Please!” Ryan shouted. DC smiled a satisfied smile.
“I give up! Stop!” yelled Diana as she got water forcefully pushed onto her. She had had enough.
“I so kicked your ass then,” Razi commented as she and Rachel walked away from Diana to meet Risa, who was also victorious.
“Enough! I can’t take it any more!” Rob said and Kai, Max and Tyson stopped beating up the poor guy.
“We want them back now!” DC said as he held up Ryan by his shirt.
“I can’t do that!” said Ryan. Chelsea stood up and smashed into Razi. She started to beat her up.
“Ow! Losing control! NO!” Razi yelled. Chelsea suddenly stopped.
“Did you guys hear that?” she asked suspiciously.
“What?” Tyson questioned.
“Hello?” a voice called.
“Any one there?” another said.
“Hello? Can any one hear me?” yet another shouted.
“That’s Ray!” Max exclaimed and ran into the bush beside them, hoping to find Ray. Everyone followed them, even the Gods and Goddesses.
“Max!” yelled Ray.
“Hey!” Ray said back as he saw his friends running towards him, and the people who had captured him. Behind Ray came Hilary, Nicole, Eddie and Voke.
“Damn!” Razi said.
“Hey Razi,” said Risa. “I quit this group.”
“What?!” Razi exclaimed. “You can’t!”
“Yeah actually, I can.” Risa smiled happily.
“Same. I quit too,” Ryan.
“Rachel, Rob? You don’t quit too, do you?” she asked panicking.
“No, but I’m taking some time off,” Rob said and he jumped up into the sky and flew away.
“Ditto. I want a break,” said Rachel. “Here’s a bit of bad luck too.” With a grin, she ran away.
“Bad luck?” Kenny asked puzzled.
“Okay, lets get out of here now please!” Eddie said as the ground started to shake. Razi just disappeared and left the teens alone helpless. *Not totally helpless though, cause they still had Ryan and Risa*. Diana screamed. A tree had fallen down beside her, missing her by a few inches. Voke jumped over it and grabbed her arm.
“Lets go,” he whispered to her and ran off in the direction that his rescuers had come.
“Run!” DC shouted and everyone did the obvious, run. As soon as they were out of the bush they continued to run until they came across Kai’s great mansion.
“Uh, can we stay with you guys?” Ryan asked.
“Pleaze?” Risa pleaded.
“Sure,” Kai replied as he walked inside. “Two rooms to choose from it you don’t wanna be alone.”
“I’ll go wiz Nicole,” Risa said.
“I’ll go in the other room then,” said Ryan. ‘Yes! He’s in my room!’ Chelsea thought to herself. Nicole walked up to Chelsea.
“Ooohhh Chelsea!” she whispered in her ear and Chelsea pushed her gently into the wall. They both giggled.
“What’s funny?” Hiro asked.
“Nothing!” the two girls said through giggles.
“Seriously girls, grow up,” Tyson said and walked into his room.
“I’ll go in the other room then. I’m not sleeping in the same room as Tyson; I can’t get to sleep,” Hiro commented and walked into the other room.
*Later On That Night When Everyone’s Asleep, Well Almost Everyone…*
“Why can’t I sleep?” Nicole hissed to herself. She sat up in her bed and looked around her. Everyone else was asleep. ‘I know!’ she thought. ‘Chelsea’s got that stuff she drinks to fall asleep! I’ll get some of that!’ She got out of her bed and crept out of her room. She opened the door slightly and found that Chelsea wasn’t there. She shut the door and then opened it again.
“Ryan’s not there either!” she whispered. As she shut the door, she thought she heard a noise. “Oh please Chelsea, don’t make out with him! He’s a freak!” She walked down some stairs and opened a door, just so she could see in the room. Sure enough, Chelsea was there with Ryan. Nicole gasped.
“Chelsea,” she whispered. Chelsea was crying. She was so upset about something. Nicole started to get annoyed. ‘She goes to a complete stranger for comfort, but not me, one of her best friends? Why?’ she asked.
“Cause its part of the future.” Nicole spun around fast. She’d been caught!
“Oh, it’s just you Kai,” she said.
“I’ve got good news and bad news,” Kai announced. “I was asleep and I had a vision-dream, make sense?”
“Yeah, carry on,” Nicole said. “I wasn’t asleep so I didn’t see it.”
“Good news is that, number one, Chelsea and Ryan play a big part in something tomorrow, don’t know yet, but they do. I think they save someone’s life or something similar. Number two, Brooklyn dies.” ‘Yes!’ she thought to herself. “Bad news is that you and DC die.”

Chapter 32: Mixed Emotions
“What? No! No that can’t happen!” she whispered and cried silently.
“I am so sorry,” Kai said and walked away.
“And tomorrow! Even worse!” Nicole said and followed him. “Stop! Are you sure I die?”
“No, but almost certain. I only saw colourful sparks flying everywhere and you saying that you must do something and running into the building generating the sparks. DC runs after you and the whole place just blows up. I’m sorry.” He continued walking away but not to his room. Nicole just cried herself to sleep.
*Next morning*
“’Morning Nic,” Diana said sleepily as she rubbed her eyes.
“’Morning,” Nicole replied.
“You tired still?” she asked her.
“Yeah,” Nicole answered and got up. ‘Real great day today. I get to die. Sweet as,’ she thought. ‘I know, I’ll cheer her up,’ Kai thought to himself. ‘Hey Nic, it was just a joke, you’re not gonna die.’
“Really?” she asked and turned to him.
“Course, I was just joking. I didn’t think you’d take it seriously though.” Nicole breathed a relieved sigh.
“Yes! I’m so happy now!”
*Late At Night That Same Day*
“Wow!”
“It’s huge!”
”It’s pretty!”
“It’s cool!” ‘It’s where Nicole and DC die,’ Kai thought in the back of his head and sighed. They were staring up at a gigantic building with beautiful paintings on it and the words ‘Madame Massey’s Building Of Magic’. They were standing on a big bank that went up and then pointed away from the building.
“Cool! Lets go in!” Tyson said and he pulled Max and Kenny along into the building behind him.
“Boys,” Chelsea whispered into Diana’s ear.
“Yeah, typical boys.” They walked inside the building and were greeted with bright lights. It was dark outside, so their eyes stung when the light first hit them.
“Welcome to Madame Massey’s Building Of Magic,” Madame Massey said. “Your goal is to reach the end of the puzzles successfully in groups of four and four only. First of all I’ll start you off with easy tricks and puzzles and then they’ll get harder and harder until there is one team left. They are the winners. Lets begin!” Walls suddenly disappeared and the floor was nowhere to be seen, and the teens were left hanging in mid air. “Form your groups!”
“Okay, ah, I’ll go with Kenny,” Tyson said and they were suddenly standing together.
“I’ll be with Tyson,” Max said and he too appeared by Kenny.
“Me too,” Hilary said and she too was transported to Kenny’s side.
“I’ll go with Nicole,” Chelsea said and was moved to Nicole’s position.
“Same,” Ryan said and appeared by Chelsea.
“Ditto,” said Kai and was moved to Ryan’s side.
“And the last group then is me, DC, Diana and Risa,” Voke said and they appeared together as a team.
“The first team to reach the box in the centre will get one point. Begin,” Madame Massey said. Suddenly walls grew up from the floor and the colours started to change.
“Great. How are we meant to get to the middle when our team was in the middle of the floor?” Nicole asked.
“Dunno, but lets stop wasting time and move,” Kai said as he ran away.
“Lets go,” Chelsea said as she followed Kai, running away. The team ran and ran until they bumped into Tyson’s team.
“Hi guys,” Kenny panted. “Am I the only one who finds this very tiring?”
“Yeah, the rest of us a really fit,” Chelsea said.
They continued running in opposite directions until all of three teams heard Madame Massey’s voice again.
“One team has finished. The other three please continue until you find the centre.”
“What? There’s only three teams playing, not four!” DC said.
“”No, there are four. Continue please,” and everyone ran off, ignoring Madame Massey’s voice. “Two teams have now finished.” This was Risa, Diana, Voke and DC. “Three teams have finished.” This one was Kai, Chelsea, Ryan and Nicole’s team. “The fourth team will appear in the room we are all in now.”
“Cool!” Tyson exclaimed as he appeared in the room filled with his friends and four shadows in the darkest corner of the room.
“The next challenge is to find four flags of different colours and collect them. The winners will get a point for their team. Splitting up your team is allowed, but isn’t the best choice. There are 16 flags in this maze, four red, four green, four blue and four yellow. There will be obstacles during this maze, so watch out! Go!” Madame Massey explained and then disappeared. Once again walls grew up high, splitting up the teams.
“Okay, lets split up,” Kai suggested.
“No! She said that’s a bad idea,” Nicole said.
“Yeah I know, but you and me won’t be together, so we can tell each other where we are and what flags we have.”
“Point taken, good idea. Lets do it,” Nicole said. “I’m going this way.” She pointed to her left.
“I’ll go that way then,” Kai said, pointing the other way.
“I’ll go with Kai,” Chelsea said and ran in the direction he was pointing at. Kai ran off after her.
“C’mon, lets go,” Ryan said pulling on Nicole’s arm and ran. Straight around the corner was a climbing wall.
“Cool, a climbing wall,” Nicole said and started to climb. Ryan raced up after her. It was quite high, and they had no safety gear on. “I think I can see a flag up there!”
“Great! What happens if we reach the top and we fall down to our deaths?” Ryan asked.
“I won’t fall. I always jump from rooftops, so I’m used to taking great risks.” She reached the top and grabbed the flag and stuffed it in her pocket. Ryan got up to, just in time to see her put it in her pocket.
“Now where?” he asked.
“Just wait, got to connect to Kai’s mind.” Nicole focused really hard and soon broke into Kai’s mind. ‘Hey Kai.’ ‘What?’ ‘We’ve got a flag,’ Nicole thought-said. ‘It’s yellow, so don’t bother getting a yellow one if you can see one.’ ‘Sweet. We don’t have one yet. Actually, I think I can see one now! Keep going. I’ll get back to you soon,’ Kai said and cut her off.
“Lets get down and continue,” Nicole said and she looked down the other side. There were moving blocks of what looked like concrete.
“How do we get down on moving blocks of concrete?” Ryan asked.
“I dunno, jump maybe.” Meanwhile, everyone had basically found a few flags. Only as Ryan, Kai, Nicole and Chelsea had found the last of their four and reappeared in the room. This time they went into the darkest corner and waited to see who the other new team was.
“One team of four has finished.” Soon, the new team finished.
“Two teams have finished.” The four appeared in the room and moved to the corner. Then they noticed that the corner was already occupied.
“Sorry this corner’s taken,” Nicole said and glanced at the four, wanting to see who they were.
“That’s just fine. We don’t care.”
“Brooklyn?” Nicole gasped. No way!
“And Ashley,” Ashley said smiling slightly. “We’re with our new friends, Zoe and Tala.” Tala’s figure steppe forward and stared Kai right in his eye. ‘Not again!’ Kai thought. ‘Yeah, again,’ Nicole said. Zoe also stepped forward. She had brown hair with blonde streak in it. The blonde in the front was pulled up high into a hair tie (one on the left, one on the right) so she had two small bits of blonde. Her hair went to a bit higher than the middle of her back, she had brown eyes, was wearing, track pants, a green t-shirt and sneakers. Nicole noticed her necklace. It was a gold chain with a love heart on it. Nicole stared at it and worked out some letters. ‘Hey Kai, her necklace has letters on it. What is it? I can see something A something A, 4, something something E.’ ‘The most obvious, Tala 4 Zoe.’ ‘Oh. Right.’
“So that’s team 4 is it?” Chelsea asked.
“Three teams have finished. The last team will appear in the room.” Madam Massey appeared and so did the last two teams; DC’s team first, and then Tyson’s.
“Oh man! We came last again!” Hilary said and then looked at the new team. “So the new teams got Kai’s mate Tala in it!”
“He’s not my friend,” Kai said.
“No?”
No,” Kai said coldly.
“Next and last challenge is like a game. You will be each given a map. It will be of another maze. In the four corners will be where each team retreats. You have to catch as much people of other teams as you can. You then must take them to your corner and then they will be locked up there. Other players can free them, but they can’t take them to their own corner. If you free someone, the team that caught that person will freeze for 10 seconds. You will also freeze for 10 seconds. Have fun, but do not get too much physical to get someone in your corner. Start now!” Madame Massey said and disappeared. Once again walls grew and everyone found themselves with maps in their hands. The teams were transported to their own corners and they started the game. The teams targeted were all of a sudden really competitive and ran away in different directions. Each and every one of them knew who they could take down, who they couldn’t take down and who could take them down. DC jumped up onto the wall and ran along it. He could see everyone and knew where his team was. Even though everyone could see him, he managed to catch many of his friends. After 10 minutes, the game was up. Madame Massey made them appear in the room again, the ones who were free in the middle and the ones who were in a corner, in a corner.
“Well done to all of you. I must say though, that we have a tie. The three teams are DC, Nicole and Brooklyn. Their teams happened to get the same score through out the whole game. Well done.” Then the lights went out and noises were heard. It was just like the sound of rafters falling down.
“I’ve heard this noise before!” Diana screamed.
“Yeah! When your house fell down remember?” Voke yelled back. “Run!” Suddenly the roof fell down, landing on everyone inside that room.

So, you liked that? One more chapter for you to read, but remember, 10 DIFFERENT people must comment on it before I will post the last chapter. Then I can start to post my next story. So, tell all of your friends to read my story, cause if there isn't 10 comments, no last chapter.

BISC

P.S. That is not a threat, it's just I want to see 10 loyal friends commenting on something that I enjoy.
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Tuesday, June 21, 2005

   NNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
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I have saved all of the info of everyone's charecters onto a document and I cant find it!!! NNNNOOOOOO!!!!!!! I have also deleted the PMs holding the information!!!!
But their is good news. Next chapters are ready (see below) and I am about to end the story. I know what I'm doing ok? I have decided on a finish and it will happen at about Chapter 30 something i think. I will write a bit after that, like a story following what has happened in the other story. It will be when they are all 20. Don't wanna give it all away though.
I won't add any of my friends in it ok? So don't re-send me the info. I've added too much people in it anyway. Please PM me any comments and JUST CHILL

Chapter 25: Just Chill
“And Nicole wins! The Thuganomics take the victory over all of the participating teams! We have new world champions!” Zap said excitingly.
“You’re probably the strongest opponent I’ve faced Kai. Sorry you had to loose,” Nicole congratulated him.
“Yeah well. You’re strong too you know. Can we battle again soon?”
“Sure. Any time,” she replied and was attacked by her happy friends.
“We won! We won!” Diana was screaming.
“Yes!”
“We rule!”
“Totally!”
“Will The Thuganomics please come up here to receive their prize?” Mr Dickenson’s voice said and everyone’s attention turned to the old man that was now standing by Zap. The happy team walked up to him and received loads of prizes.
“Thank you for joining in this Championship series. Please join us again next time,” Mr D said and he watched the six walked over to BBA Revolution. The others congratulated them too and they exited the building together. Outside Brooklyn and Ashley waited. Nicole noticed and stopped walking and faced them.
“So Nicole, you’ve found a partner yet?” Brooklyn asked.
“You don’t know?” Her voice was cold.
“Oh yeah, we do. You know why we’re here?” Ashley asked. She had long, thin, blonde hair, blue eyes, a small figure and was quite tall. She was like Nicole in a way, but totally opposite in another way.
“A bad vision. Too obvious,” she replied, keeping her voice flat and cold.
“Guess who’s going. Like, as in ‘dead’ going?” Brooklyn asked with a slight smile. Suddenly Nicole had a ‘vision’ and so did Kai.
“No! That’s not happening!” she yelled.
“Oh yeah, it is,” Ashley said and clapped her hands once. Ninjas came out of cars and jumped out from alleys and faced them with weapons. “Say your goodbyes to Chelsea. She’s going for a little death ride.”
“No! I won’t let you!” Nicole screamed.
“You gonna change your mind?” Brooklyn asked as ninjas pointed guns at her.
“No way!” Nicole shrieked and ran towards Chelsea. She stepped in front of her and started to glow.
“What?!” Kenny said.
“Unbelievable!” Max said as he watched ninjas fire at the two. Bullets seemed to stop about a few inches from her and drop to the ground.
“It’s impossible!” Daichi said.
“No it’s not! What are we seeing then? Duh!” Tyson said and didn’t get chased. Soon, her feet were covered in bullets. She started to fall to her knees and bullets kept on firing at her. The others edged away and reached a phone. They dialled the police and looked back at the action. Nicole was barely glowing and was starting to fall. Kai wondered what to do. He suddenly felt magical. He looked at his hands and saw he was glowing too. He stepped in front of Nicole. She fell down and he felt the bullets hit him even though they never reached him. Chelsea was still standing behind them, scared to death. Brooklyn and Ashley rapidly moved away and got in a car. The firing stopped and police came around the corner just as the cars were out of sight. Kai fell to his knees and looked at Nicole. She was unconscious. Chelsea was pale and frightened. Their friends came running around the corner and saw police looking at the amount of bullets that they were by. One called for an ambulance and a detective talked to Kai and Chelsea, trying to find out who had done this. Kai wouldn’t talk though.
“I don’t know anything. Nicole knows who they were,” he said and didn’t talk again. Chelsea was just describing how she had felt when everything had happened so fast.
“I heard guns going off and saw Nicole protecting me. She passed out and Kai protected me. Then you guys came and that’s it,” was mainly all she could say. Kai and Chelsea were taken to the police station and Nicole to the hospital.
*The Next Day*
Nicole stirred. She opened her eyes and looked around the room and sat up. She was very tired, but still wanted to know where she was. She wasn’t where she was last time she was awake; she knew that. She got out of the bed she was in and walked out of the room. A nurse forced her to stop.
“Sorry dear, you can’t leave yet. You aren’t well.”
“Am so. I’m fine,” Nicole replied as she walked away and out of the hospital. She walked to Tyson’s house and found that he was around the back beyblading with his friends. The boys were dressed in a t-shirt and jeans or trousers and the girls in a tank top or t-shirt and skirt or shorts. When they saw her, they hurried over to her. Kai and Chelsea were also back from questioning.
“Aren’t you meant to be in the hospital?” Chelsea asked.
”Are you still alive?” Nicole asked as she poked Chelsea. She giggled.
“Yeah, I am thanks.”
“You too Kai?” He nodded in reply. “Thanks for covering for me.”
”No prob.”
“Aaaaaaaaaw man!” Daichi yelled as his beyblade landed at his feet. Tyson started to dance around in happiness and yelling ‘I won! I won!’
“Weird!” Eddie said.
“Yeah, I’d say!” Nicole said, finally speaking again to Eddie. All of a sudden Nicole felt dizzy and started to sway. Diana and Eddie held her still.
“Get a chair someone!” Diana shouted and Voke ran to get one.
“Really, I’m fine guys,” Nicole said weakly.
“No you aren’t. Here sit,” Eddie said as Voke put the chair down beside her. “What is the matter anyway?”
“I think I used up too much energy protecting Chelsea. I don’t really know. I’ll probably miss visions now. I am so stupid! I should have saved some energy for me,” Nicole said clearly annoyed with herself.
“You saved my life Nicole. That’s all that matters now,” Chelsea said comfortingly.
“Yeah I know, but Brooklyn and Ashley will attack when I’m weak. They know my partner isn’t strong enough yet, still in training, and probably can’t use the powers right yet,” Nicole replied to her and sighed quite loud. “Chelsea, you’ll die if we aren’t strong enough together. I’m sorry, but if I don’t have at least half of my full energy, I’m useless.”
“Can’t he give you some of his energy?” DC suggested.
“Yeah, but he’ll be weaker and he needs to get stronger. We can just wait until they attack again.” Nicole said. ‘Just fine,’ Kai thought. ‘Yeah, it’ll work I hope,’ Nicole thought back.
“What?” Kai asked out loud. ‘I thought that stupid,’ Nicole thought.
“Uh Kai, no one talked to you. Duh!” Tyson said and Kai chased him away up a tree. ‘Okay, we just chill until they make their move right?’ Nicole thought to Kai. ‘Right. Just chill,’ he thought back with a smile.

Chapter 26: Kai’s Announcement
“You are kidding?!” DC asked and practically yelled.
“No,” Nicole replied.
“I am so not going to school!” Diana shouted.
“I like getting stuff posted to me okay!?” Chelsea screamed back.
“Look, I thought that we might just settle down for once and just go to school for a while. You guys can even chose what one we go to okay? We can go to the same one instead of an all girls and all boys school,” Nicole said quieter than the others.
“Hey c’mon guys. We’ll be really popular and stuff,” Voke said.
“Yeah, but I’m sick of signing autographs for everyone!” Chelsea fired back.
“Look, it’ll be a change and we can be like ordinary teenagers for once,” Eddie said.
“Uh, ordinary? We’ll never be ordinary teenagers,” DC said.
“Well I think we’re ready to make a change!” Nicole said.
“Please guys!” Voke pleaded.
“Fine, I’ll go.” Diana gave into Voke.
“Suppose so,” Chelsea said.
“Don’t look at me like that!” DC said suddenly. “Okay, whatever.”
“What school then?” Eddie asked.
“Lets see then,” Nicole said and phoned Tyson. “Hi. One question for you. What school do you go to?… Uh huh… right, thanks. Bye!”
“Well?” Diana asked.
“He goes to the public high school.”
“So we are going there then?” DC asked.
“I’d say so,” Voke said and walked out of the room.
“What’s with him?”
”Dunno. I’ll go and see it you want,” Diana said and went out after him. ‘Well see ya’s tomorrow then,’ Nicole thought as she rang up the public high school.
*After The School Holidays*
“First day at school! Get up!” Tyson’s voice shouted through out his house, waking up everyone inside it. At the same time, The Thuganomics’ alarm went off. They all got up and got ready for school and walked to the corner where their friends had promised to meet them. They met up and walked together to the public high school.
“This is it?” DC asked.
“Yeah,” Kenny replied.
“Hey, didn’t Kai say that when he first saw it?” Tyson asked.
“Yeah, he did,” Hilary said as she walked up to the door.
“Oh well, no Daichi for a while,” Tyson said as he opened his locker door and pulled out a few books.
“Hey, I’ll show you guys your lockers,” Max offered. He walked around a few corners and said that they would have had the numbers told to them by the headmaster. They placed their books inside and grabbed the books they’d need for the first subject. They survived the morning and went outside for lunch. Leaves were falling because it was getting into autumn and a chilly breeze left many teenagers freezing.
“Hey there’s Sophie and Anna! Hey guys! Over here!” Hilary yelled over the wind. Her two friends ignored her and walked past. “Okay, that was weird.”
”They’re jealous Hils, just ignore it,” Diana said. The twelve great friends walked around, six showing the other six around. After the afternoon’s lessons, they walked back to the corner where they had to split up. The thugs asked them for advice on a house where they could stay.
“I could ask my grandpa what he thinks about having some thugs staying at his house. He lets everyone else stay there too, so I don’t see why you six would be any different,” Tyson said and smiled at them. “I’m sure he won’t say no.”
“Uh, can I say something important?” Kai asked.
“Sure, go ahead,” Ray replied.
“Well, next week I’m going to Russia to visit my grandfather. I’m staying for about a month.”
“WHAT!?”

Chapter 27: We’re Coming Too!
“You have got to be joking!” Max said.
“Yeah, must be!” Kenny agreed.
“That is stupid anyway! I mean really, one month!” Tyson practically shouted.
“Hey! I’m not joking! I really am going to Russia for a month. I’ve got my ticket to prove it too.” Mouths opened and everyone stared at him as he pulled out his ticket to Russia. ‘You can’t go Kai,’ Nicole mind-spoke to him. ‘You just can’t go.’ ‘I must,’ Kai replied.
“So you are really going to Russia then?” Eddie asked. Kai nodded.
“It’s not that long, one month. It’s not like you guy’s would miss me anyway.” ‘Yeah, whatever Kai. I’d miss you,’ Nicole thought to him. ‘Really?’ ‘Yeah.’
“Kai, what if Brooklyn and Ashley attack while you’re gone? I’ll be dead!” Nicole exclaimed.
“Well, I can’t change that. My grandfather would be really angry if I don’t go. It’s only for a month anyway.”
“I’ve had an idea!” Tyson called out.
“Finally,” Hilary muttered.
“Well what could happen is we could all go with Kai to Russia and stay there for a month and then come back! Genius eh?”
“Hate to break it to ya kid, but one of the reasons I really look forward to going to Russia is to get away from you,” Kai said with a smirk.
“Ha ha, really funny,” he replied to the comment.
“Hey, at least let us go, please,” Nicole pleaded. The thugs nodded in agreement.
“Fine,” Kai said giving in.
“And us too please!” Max asked.
“And we’ll leave Daichi behind eh?” Tyson asked.
“Sure, sounds great,” Kenny answered back.
“I’d say,” Kai said.
“So we’re going to?” Diana asked him. Kai nodded.
“If you want to, but you’ll have to pay for your own tickets.” Everyone gave moans and groans to him and they said their goodbyes and walked to their own ‘house’.
*One Week Later*
“Flight 123 to Russia taking off in five minutes. Please turn off all electric devices and be seated,” said the captain of the plane. The twelve obeyed and waited for the plane to take off. There were rows of four seats and one isle through the middle of the plane. The plane took off and they were told they could switch electric devices on again. Most of the thugs switched on Discmans and/or the cell phones. The other six put on their cell phones too and maybe another device. Before they knew it, they were in Moscow, Russia. After getting their luggage, they caught a few taxis and got them to take them to where Kai’s grandfather lived. It was a breathtaking mansion and would definitely have an overwhelming view of the sunset and sunrise. Kai walked up casually and knocked on the door. His grandfather answered it and saw his grandson standing there.
“Oh Kai, you’re here. I see you’ve brought some friends too. How much?”
“Ten.”
“Oh, well, we’ll definitely have room here won’t we? Come in children,” he said and moved away from the door and let them in. Kai led the way up to a room that he called ‘his room’, even though it wasn’t really his. He said that they could either stay in his room (his room was huge and had 10 beds in it) or they could go into the room next door (also had 10 beds in it).
“Remember, we’re here for a month,” he said as he sat on the end of a bed that everyone knew suddenly that it was his. “I figured five and six, but if you guys want 7 and 4 or whatever, that’s fine with me.” ‘So Kai, who do you want in each room?’ Nicole thought-spoke to him. ‘I don’t really care,’ he answered her. ‘As long as Tyson isn’t in this room. He can go in the other one.’ ‘Tell him that then.’
“Okay, we’ll flip a coin to see who goes in where okay?” Nicole asked. ‘What are you thinking?’ Kai thought to her. ‘Watch me.’ “Okay, heads is in here and tails is in the other room. Who first?”
“Suppose me,” Ray answered. She flipped the coin.
“Heads. Who next?”
“Me,” Hilary said.
“Tails.”
“Me,” Tyson said. Nicole flipped it and concentrated. Tails, tails, tails, she thought.
“Also tails. Now who?”
“Do me,” Diana suggested.
“Right,” Nicole said as she flipped the coin. She focused and it landed on heads. “Heads. Now who? Tell you what, I’ll do me.” She flipped it again, not concentrating, just plain 50/50 chance. “Heads again.”
“How about me?” Max asked. She flipped it again.
“You’re tails Max,” she replied.
“Yeah, me,” Chelsea said and she flipped it again.
“Tails too. Now who?”
“Me,” Voke said. She flipped it, thinking heads.
“Heads.” Diana smiled slightly and only Nicole noticed.
“Me please,” Kenny said. It was tails.
“And Eddie?” Eddie nodded and she flipped the coin again. “Heads. DC?” He also nodded and she flipped it again. “Tails. That’s it. Six and a five, look at that.” ‘We can control a coin?’ Kai thought-asked. ‘Yeah, but on some I didn’t okay? Hope that the groups are okay,’ Nicole thought back. ‘Fine.’
“Okay, I’m going in the next room now,” Tyson announced and walked out.
”I get the bed by the window!” Max yelled.
“No, I do!” Tyson shouted back and knew that Max was running after him.
“Crazy,” Diana commented as she watched them exit the room. She knew that Nicole had purposely put her and Voke together. ‘Thank you Nic,’ she thought to herself.
“No prob girl,” Nicole replied out loud and Diana smiled back at her. She chose a bed and Voke chose the one next to her. The was the window, a spare bed, Diana, Voke, three spare beds, Eddie, Nicole, Kai and then another spare bed. In the other room there was the window Max, two spare beds, DC, a spare bed, Kenny, Tyson, spare bed, Hilary and then Chelsea. That was the way that they had decided it would be. Kai’s grandfather then suggested to them that a new movie was showing tonight and they could go and see it. They agreed and went to see 2 Cool? They paid for the tickets and went inside the theatre. After it they went back to the mansion and got ready for bed. Tyson noticed that Kai seemed to be happier and not so anti-social. Tyson suddenly had a bad thought about Kai and quickly got it out of his head.
“He’s not gay,” he said.
“Who isn’t?” Kai asked. He was right behind Tyson, arms crossed, frown on his face and eyes focused on him.
“It’s none of your business Kai,” he quickly retorted.
“Tyson, I’m not gay.”
“I know, and I never said that you were.”
”You thought that though,” Kai said as he walked away.
“What?!” Tyson said. “I only slightly thought that for a few seconds! Freaky!” He walked around the corner and crashed into Hilary. “Sorry! It was an accident I swear!”
“Whatever,” Hilary said and walked off in a bad mood. Tyson continued to walk around the corner and once again banged into another girl. “Accident again, I swear!”
“Uh, whatever. Have you seen Hilary? I think I’ve upset her,” Nicole asked.
“Yeah, uh, she went that way,” Tyson said turning around and pointing straight ahead. ‘Man! I’m really short! She’s taller than me!’ Tyson thought as she watched her walk away.
“Great, real help Tyson,” she said and walked off in that direction. Soon he heard Hilary and Nicole yelling at each other.
“Cat fight,” Ray commented. Tyson jumped. He hadn’t realised Ray was standing next to him. He realised then that he was shorter than him too.
“I’ll be taller than you soon,” he said.
“I doubt it,” Ray said back. “Wanna watch the girls fight?” Just as he said that, Nicole came around the corner all annoyed and walked past the two boys. Ray grabbed her arm. “What’s wrong?”
“You don’t want to know,” she replied.
“I do actually. Explain,” Ray said.
“Totally a Ray comment,” Tyson said. “In other words, only Ray will ever say that to you.”
“Look Ray, that’s really sweet of you, but I really don’t want to talk right now okay?”
“Promise you’ll talk about it later then?” he asked her.
“Whatever,” she answered and pulled her arm out of his grip and walked off. ‘Kai, where are you?’ she thought to him.
“Right here,” he replied to her. She spun around and saw Kai standing behind her.
“Great I really-“
“Need to talk, I know,” he finished.
“You’re getting-“
“Better, I know.”
“I guess I, not interruptions? Good. I guess I misjudged you Kai. I really didn’t think you’d get control of, you know, so quick. I really amazed. Congrats.”
“Thanks. You need to talk?” he asked as he walked into the room that they were sharing.
“Uh, can you do me a favour Kai?”
“Maybe.”
”Can you, um, sort out stuff between Hilary and me? We need to have a great relationship. It must have been a vision that Brooklyn and Ashley had. They knew what Hilary would say to me would really-“
“Piss you off and you’d go after her. Been there done that. Time will take control. Just wait until you guys make up. Only advice I have. Sorry if-“
“It’s not what I wanted,” she said with a smile. “It is Kai, thanks.” She walked out of the room. ‘Why me?’ she thought. ‘Cause it’s meant to happen,’ Kai replied.

Chapter 28: A Simple Russian Day
Kai woke up and looked around. He remembered he was in Russia, his home country. He sat up and then also remembered he had bought along ten great friends. ‘What am I thinking? Great friends? I’m going crazy,’ he thought.
“No you’re not. It’s good to have great friends. There is no problem with having them Kai. You’re just not used to it yet.” Nicole replied to his thoughts as she sat up and opened her eyes. She yawned and Ray also woke up soon after she’d finished. Kai, who hadn’t sat up, pretended to be asleep.
“Morning,” Ray said to Nicole.
“Sup?” she replied. Kai then sat up and Nicole got out of her bed.
“You gonna talk yet?” Ray asked as she got new clothes to wear.
“No, not yet Ray,” she answered him and walked off to a shower.
“I hope you don’t mind this, but I’ve set us up for a few beyblade battles. Some random people asked me, and I said yes. Okay with you?” Kai asked as he got out of his bed too.
“Fine. Better tell Tyson though, he’ll want to know.”
“Um, yeah. The time they want us there is 11 am.”
“Well then, we better get going then!” Ray said as he jumped out of his bed. He ran into Tyson’s room and woke him up and told him the news. About one hour later, everyone was ready to fight.
“This way,” Kai said as he led the way. They walked down an alley and came face to face with a new group.
“So, you did turn up after all,” a girl with brown hair that stopped at the middle of her back, had hazel-blue eyes and was wearing jeans and a t-shirt. “We are the Fallen Angels. I’m Amber and she’s Rosa.” She indicated one of the girls beside her. She had red hair and green eyes and was also wearing a t-shirt and jeans. “And this is Suger.” She pointed to the other girl who was on her left. She had long blonde hair to her butt and blue eyes. She was wearing a skirt and a t-shirt.
“Great, girls. I thought there would at least be one boy in the team,” Tyson remarked and got looks from the three girls facing them.
“We want to battle,” Suger said. “Follow me and I’ll take you to beyblade dish.” She led them through lots of alleys and entered a big space where in the middle was a beyblade dish. It had lots of scratches on it and looked quite old.
“We thought a three on three match with you guys. Is that okay with you?” Rosa asked and got ready to beyblade.
“Whatever,” Kai said as he stood by the dish ready to blade. Rosa, Suger and Amber stood on the other side of the dish, all three ready. “Who’s with me?” Kai asked his friends.
“I will,” Ray replied.
“Same,” Nicole said as she walked up between the boys. “3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” All six beyblades flew into the stadium and went on the attack.
”Drigger! Gatling Claw!” Ray shouted and his beyblade hit Suger’s beyblade hard, eventually hit it out of the stadium. “Yes!”
“It’s a No DQ battle.” Suger informed him as Nicole’s beyblade went out of the dish too, chasing Suger’s blade up walls and across the top of wired fences around the area.
“What’s a No DQ battle then?” Ray asked.
”When you must make the opposition’s beyblade stop spinning to win,” Nicole replied. “Street stuff kind of.”
“Works with me,” Kai said as he chased Suger’s beyblade too. “Ray, follow my lead.” ‘Great idea, pick on one, then another and then another,’ Nicole thought to Kai. ‘Yeah I know. That’s why I said it,’ he replied.
“Hey! Not fair!” Suger screamed as she realised that they were onto her. “Twin Headed Fire Dragon, Roaring Flame!” Nicole’s blade dodged the strong attack, but the attack hit Ray’s beyblade. His blade flew down from the netting and landed in the dish barely spinning.
“Okay, here we go,” Amber said as she hit Drigger with powerful attacks. It slowed to a stop and she went to help Suger. ‘Yo Kai! Behind you!’ Nicole thought-spoke as she watched Amber’s beyblade appear behind his.
“This’ll be too easy,” she murmured to herself. “Thunder Phoenix, Thunder Shower!” ‘Kai! Watch it!’ Nicole thought to him, but Kai’s beyblade didn’t move.
“I said MOVE!” she screamed and her beyblade hit Dranzer out of the way. Her beyblade took the attack and it flew up into the air and disappeared.
“That’s her down, one more left,” Rosa said. “Let me handle it. Twin Headed Aqua Dragon, Rushing Water!” Kai survived the attack, barely.
“What are you and Suger? Twins or something,” he said as he prepared for another attack.
“Sisters yes, I’m younger.”
“Dranzer attack!” Kai yelled just as Nicole beyblade appeared in the sky.
“For your information, I’m still spinning,” Nicole said with a smile. It landed on Amber’s beyblade and whacked it into a wall behind her.
“Hey, not fair!” Amber shrieked at her.
“No DQ. Totally fair Amber,” Nicole replied calmly as she went back on the attack against Rosa to keep Kai spinning. She might need his help later. Suddenly, they both had a vision and exchanged glances. ‘What the hell is a double attack?’ Kai thought to her. ‘An attack when we both perform it at the same time and win, I think,’ Nicole replied. ‘And how do we perform it?’ ‘I’ve got no clue.’ ‘What do we have in common then?’ Kai thought-asked. ‘Uh, Biovolt, beyblades, friends, oh, I don’t know!’ Nicole thought-replied to him. ‘I’ve got it! Our beyblades are exactly the opposite of each other. Yours is water and mine is fire! But I don’t get it how that’s meant to help,’ Kai suggested. ‘Water on a beyblade and then chucked into a fire damages it a lot,’ Nicole thought to Kai. ‘You know that how?’ he asked her. ‘Uh, the rest of the thugs and me found that out when Eddie and me teamed up for a match. He’s also fire,’ she thought-replied.
“Drydzia! You know what to do!” Nicole yelled and Drydzia wet the three opposition’s blades with very cold water.
“Dranzer! Now!” Kai shouted and Dranzer breathed scorching hot fire on the beyblades, causing them to burn and stop.
“Oh no!” Amber screamed. She was really disappointed.
“Man that was close,” Max said in amazement.
“Uh, Nicole,” DC said in a strange tone.
“Yeah?” she replied as she turned around.
“Aren’t they, you know,” he asked. Nicole swore loudly.
“Too true,” she answered. “Do you guys go to Biovolt or used to?”

Chapter 29: On The Run
“Do you work for Biovolt?” Amber asked her suspiciously.
“No way! Three of us used to, but we don’t no more,” Nicole answered.
“Prove it,” Rosa said.
“Bet you can’t,” Suger added.
“Look at this then,” Nicole said nodding at Diana. She pulled out a device from her pocket and switched it on. DC held up his left hand and four green triangles glowed on it. Nicole rolled up her right sleeve high enough and four red triangles glowed there too. Kai’s blue triangles glowed too. Amber felt her left arm. She rolled up her sleeve too and saw her yellow triangles were glowing. Rosa and Suger looked at their waist and saw that their white triangles were glowing too.
“We’re not here to hurt you okay? We’re like friends in a way okay?” DC explained smoothly.
“I knew it. Boris said he’d find us,” Amber said, nearly in tears because she thought that all of their running away had been worthless.
“You’ve got tracking devices haven’t you?” Suger said, also nearly in tears.
“We’re not going back to him,” Rosa said as she ran off.
“No Rosa, don’t! BS Boyz are down there!” Nicole screamed and ran after her.
“Nicole, they’ll kill you!” DC said as he stood up and ran after Nicole.
“BS Boyz?” Kenny asked.
“You know, bad stuff?” Kai said and ran after them.
“Better follow them,” Voke suggested. He took off after them and knew that the others followed him. He kept his eye on Kai and led everyone down after him. Unexpectedly a scream echoed down the alley.
“Rosa!” Suger and Amber said and ran faster, passing Voke and catching up with Kai. The sound of a gun went off and another scream reached them, Nicole’s this time. Amber and Suger became more eager to find Rosa and raced against Kai until the turned a corner and saw tall, dark figures separating Nicole and Rosa. One was holding a gun and they saw Nicole crouching down on the ground clutching her left arm in pain. ‘Nicole, you okay?’ Kai thought to her. ‘No,’ Nicole replied.
“Hey! Let them go!” DC yelled as the boys noticed him and the others behind him. The boys didn’t obey, but grabbed Rosa and held the gun to her head.
“Please let me go!” Rosa said.
“Nobody moves and she lives. Move and she dies.” One of the boys spoke in a deep voice. ‘Hey Kai,’ Nicole thought-said. ‘Tell them you can kill them and knock out the one with the gun. They should run away. Just hurry, I’ve got a bullet in my arm.’
“Hey Bad Stuff Boyz I can kill you all,” Kai said and focused. The one with the gun fell, unconscious. “See? Now move.” They scattered, leaving the guy behind. ‘Told you they would.’
“Rosa,” Suger said gratefully as she rushed over to her and helped her up to her feet. “Are you okay?”
“We were so worried,” Amber said and hugged her.
“Guys, I need this bullet out,” Nicole said as she took her hand off her wound. Her hand was covered in blood and the wound looked bad. Most of the teenagers swore as they saw it.
“Okay Nic, get up,” Diana said as she helped her up. “We need to get you out of here quickly. Ideas?” Many shook their heads.
“Well, trusting my memory, I think that the hospital is that way,” DC said as he nodded in the direction that the boys had run off.
“No, it’s that way,” Amber said and pointed to the wall behind DC.
“Don’t get it. How can a wall lead to the hospital?” Max asked.
“Easy,” Suger said and pushed in a brick. The wall made a small entrance at the bottom and she crawled into it. She barely fit under, but disappeared quickly. Rosa and Amber followed.
“Don’t worry, you can stand up in here,” Rosa said as she watched others crawl through. Once everyone was through, they pushed the brick back (the wall closed) and walked down the small alley and exited in another alley.
“Just down there is the hospital,” Amber said and watched them walk to it with Nicole.
*The Next Day*
The next day, Nicole’s bullet had been removed and Fallen Angels were friends with BBA Revolution and The Thuganomics. Then they got a phone call at six in the morning.
“Hello,” Tyson said sleepily. “Uh huh… yeah… so… yeah okay… thanks… bye.” He put down the phone. “Hey guys, Nicole’s run away from the hospital. We need to find her because she’s not ready to get out of the hospital. She needs a few more days in there.”
“To tell you the truth, I’m surprised that she didn’t run away earlier,” DC said.
“Same. She hates it in there,” Chelsea commented and Diana nodded in agreement.
“Well, we’d better go find her I guess,” Kenny said.
“Why does she hate it in there?” Max asked impatiently. “Last time she ran away too.”
“You think?” Eddie asked his friends. Voke nodded.
“Well, Nicole was in the hospital when she heard that her parents were dead.” Voke answered shortly after his nod and looked at the ground after he had said the answer.
“She doesn’t believe them though,” Eddie continued.
“Yeah, but she still hates any hospital,” Diana added.
“That was sad,” Hilary commented in a voice that was an ‘I don’t care’ tone.
“Since then she was a street thug,” Chelsea said. “Like most of us here.”
“I am so sorry,” Kenny said.
“Are we finding her or not?” Kai asked.
“Yeah,” Amber replied as she stood up and walked out.
“I think I know where to find her,” Suger said.
“So do I,” Rosa said with a smile. They knew that they were thinking of the same place.
“Lead the way,” Kai said as he followed the girls.
*A Few Hours Later*
“There she is!” Amber hissed as she went around the corner and saw Nicole just sitting down on the riverbank.
“Okay, so we’re sneaking up on her so she doesn’t know we’re here right?” Suger asked cautiously.
“Yeah, that’s right,” DC replied and nodded.
“And 3, 2, 1, go,” Tyson whispered and the nine crept up on her. They were a few metres away from her.
“So thought you guys would know better,” she said and everyone looked puzzled. They were really quiet sneaking up on her and wondered what had alerted her. Kai grinned as she suddenly disappeared.
“What the-“ Amber, Suger and Rosa. Then Kai disappeared too. “What the-“ they said again.
“He’ll be back, but I don’t know about Nicole,” DC explained.
*Meanwhile with Kai and Nicole*
Kai appeared next to her.
“Sup?”
“Think about it,” she replied as she looked out over the water. She had reappeared around the lake and couldn’t been seen by anyone.
“I know you’re in a mood, but you’ve got to go back to the hospital. You might not live if you don’t,” Kai said. “Look, I heard what happened when you were little, but that shouldn’t change anything. Please Nicole.”
“I knew it!” she unexpectedly. “Voke said it! Why? No one needs to know! I told my friends cause I trusted them to keep it a secret!”
“Hey, Eddie agree-“
“And him! Some friend!” and she burst into tears. ‘Not my fault, I tried,’ Kai thought and disappeared, only to reappear by his friends.
“So?” Tyson asked him.
“Not talking,” Kai made up. “Silent.” DC’s cell phone started to beep. He pulled it out and grunted.
“Gotta go,” he mumbled.
“Where?” Chelsea asked.
“Ah, old friend wants to see me. Saw me walking past before. You can come too, but I advise against it. He’s changed, I can tell.”
“And he knew you number how?” Diana asked suspiciously.
“Got it off someone who knew someone and etcetera etcetera until you get Voke,” DC said as he walked off to find his ‘mate’. Voke looked innocently at Diana.
“It’s no big deal right?” he asked as Diana continued to stare at him.
“Whatever,” she said as she rolled her eyes.
*With DC*
He wandered the deserted streets, waiting for trouble. For some reason he could sense it coming, like as if someone was telling him, but he couldn’t turn around and leave. ‘C’mon guys, where are you?’ he thought to himself and kept on walking slowly down alleys and around many corners.
“Hello?” he yelled.
“DC” a male voice replied.
“Justin?” DC asked as a familiar figure came around the corner ahead of him.
“DC! Hi!” Justin shouted as he ran to him. “Hey Dylan, DC’s back!”
“Hey DC!” Dylan said as he too came around the corner. Justin had short black hair, brown eyes, a hoodie, jeans and black sneakers that looked worn out and was very dirty. Dylan had brown hair with blonde in it, blue eyes, a hoodie, track pants and blue and black sneakers, also looking very worn out and dirty.
“Man you’ve been away for ages!”
”Yeah! And you’ve made it big in the outside world! *The outside world is what street people call where everyday shops and houses, etc. They call it the outside world because they live back in the streets and alleys and never really seem to venture out into the outside world. * “You actually can live out there in the outside world?” Dylan asked with a huge grin on his face, a very cute grin. His teeth were amazingly white, same with Justin’s. Usually they were brown or out.
“Of course, it’s really easy and fun. But not as fun as the streets! There’s not really any fights or beyblade battles the way we play it, but it’s still cool,” he replied and followed them. “Where are we going?”
“Just to where we hang out,” Justin replied smoothly. “Got more pals that we wouldn’t actually call pals, two girls, one for each of us, what more could we want?” ‘Sick,’ DC thought and continued to move on. His phone beeped again. WOT TIME U COMING BAK? It read. It was from Chelsea. U’LL C ME SOON he replied totally lying and sat down next to Justin.
“Hey, I think that Jasmine likes you,” Justine whispered across his girlfriend Misty. She was short, had long blonde hair to the middle of her back and was wearing the most obvious, a mini skirt and a boob tube. Samantha, Dylan’s girl, was black with brown hair to her shoulders and also in a mini skirt and a tank top. Jasmine walked over to DC and sat down next to him. She had long black hair to her waist, was wearing a t-shirt and pants, reminding DC a bit of Nicole. Then he felt bad, like it was his fault he had made her run away from them. He sighed.
“Guys, I really need to go. Great to catch up with you and all, but a friend really needs me okay?”
“Sure, we understand,” Justin said as he took a big gulp of his beer. “We’ll come with you. You can live in the outside world, we can at least take a look, right?”
“Cool,” Dylan said, placing his drink down. “You coming Jas?” Obviously referring to Jasmine, she stood up and followed the three boys and two girls down winding alleys out into the outside world. Jasmine managed to walk right beside DC and glancing at everyone as they passed her. Justin had his arm on Misty’s shoulder and they both acted cool, as if they had always been living in the outside world. Dylan and Samantha also copied, trying to act calm. DC got a few waves and had to give out a few autographs. Around the next corner he saw that Nicole had joined back up with everyone and Jasmine slipped her hand on his shoulder. DC moved quickly, but she gripped it tight, but not noticeably. ‘Too late,’ DC thought as he saw the shocked look on Nicole’s face. ‘That’s just enough to make her go again.’
“Please Nic no!” he shouted, but like he thought, it was too late. She just ran away again.

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Wednesday, June 8, 2005

   Here We Go Again
Well hi! So sorry I haven't been in touch lately or been posting my story. Any one who reads this must contact someone else and tell them to read it okay? Good. I hope that you've been to Edge Hottie site? Yes? Good. She will answer any question you want answered apparently unless she ain't know the answer. (She knows a lot about WWE and Beyblade and Dragon Ball GT).

Chapter 23: One Week
The next day was a Wednesday, and Eddie was still unconscious in the hospital. All of the thugs visited him often, apart from Nicole. She went over to Tyson’s house, where he and his friends were. Tyson heard a banging on the door.
“I’ll get it!” he shouted to his grandpa and went to get it. He opened the door and saw Nicole there.
“Hi! I’m not visiting Eddie, so I was wondering if I could come and chill with my new friends,” she explained and Tyson invited her in.
“Everyone’s hiding from me. Even Kai is. He seems to be in a good mood lately,” Tyson said as he and Nicole walked around his house looking for people hiding. “How long are you staying?”
”As long as I can.” Nicole looked up a tree.
“Found you Ray,” she said with a smile and Ray jumped down.
“Damn! I was hoping I would be found later on, not first!” he commented as Tyson suddenly shouted Daichi’s name.
“Daichi! I’ve found you! Come back here you little twerp!” was all that could be heard.
“So, what are you doing here Nicole?” Ray asked as Tyson caught Daichi and started to look for everyone else.
“Oh, I’m just waiting for everyone else to get back from visiting Eddie,” she replied and started to look for other people.
“Got you Max!” Ray said unexpectedly. Max came out and joined them. He had heard Nicole explaining to Ray, so he didn’t ask the obvious question. Soon, everyone was found and Nicole once again had to explain why she was there.
“Hey, who wants to go to the beach?” Max asked.
“Yeah okay!” Ray replied.
“Sure, if that’s okay with our guest,” Tyson said.
“It’s fine,” Nicole replied. The boys and Hilary got their swimsuits and got on a bus to Nicole’s hotel. There, she grabbed her bikini and they all went in her limo to the beach. They went to a part where you have to pay to go on and there was barely anyone there. Tyson went straight for the water.
“C’mon in guys! It’s warm!” he shouted and swam out a bit more. Max and Daichi followed him in. Kenny stayed behind and worked on his laptop. Soon everyone (apart from Kenny) was in the water.
“Hey look! It’s The PPB All Starz and The Blitzkrieg Boyz! And Tala’s with them too!” Tyson yelled and the two other teams ran straight into the water and joined them. After a small amount of time in the water, White Tiger X, The Barthez Battalions and the rest of The Thuganomics (including Eddie) turned up too and joined in the fun. The big group of teens soon got out of the water and lied down in the sun and started to talk.
“How about we play Truth Or Dare?” Mariah suggested.
“Okay!” Tyson agreed before anyone else could argue.
“I’ll start. Ray, truth or dare?” she asked him.
“I knew that was coming. Dare,” he replied.
“I dare you to… um… tell a boy you love them,” she replied.
“You’re kidding?” Ray asked.
“I haven’t finished. You get three options. Or you can pay interest on what Kenny’s doing even though it’s not very interesting or kiss a girl. Your choice Ray,” she said.
“Okay, I pick showing interest. How long?”
“Just until he tells you what he’s doing I guess,” Mariah answered. Ray walked over to Kenny to do his dare, completed it and came back.
“Tyson, your turn,” Ray said.
“Truth,” he replied quickly.
“Do you like Hilary? Yes or no,” Ray asked.
“Oh man! Yes and no.”
“Yes OR no.”
“Fine, yes, whatever,” Tyson said. “Kai, truth or dare.”
”Dare,” Kai replied and waited.
“Uh, be gay right here right now, or kiss a girl here, or chose a girl to have a drinking competition with,” Tyson said, like as if he had it all sorted out.
“Drinking one,” Kai said quickly, not wanting to be gay or kiss a girl.
“With?”
“Don’t choose one of us, we’re used to drinking,” Nicole said, trying to help him out so he’d win and not get to drunk.
“Fine, you can go against me,” Kai retorted. Mariah ran up to the shop across the road and bought a few drinks. She came back and handed two bottles to both of them.
“Go for it guys,” she said and waited. Nicole started to drink it. Kai realised she had drunk half a bottle already. Before he knew it, she had finished one bottle and was about to open the next one. Kai started to drink it too. It didn’t taste too bad. Then he realised this was the same kind of drink that had been given to him in the alley. He shivered at the thought of his horrible past. He remembered he was going to move on and continued to drink.
“Too bad yet Kai?” Nicole asked.
“Nah, not too bad though,” he replied and finished his bottle. Nicole opened her other one. She drunk quite a bit and waited on Kai. He drunk past her and finished his bottle. She copied.
“Well, that’s over,” Tyson said and Mariah agreed. “Kai’s turn.”
“Right, Tala,” Kai said. “Truth or dare?”
“Um, truth,” he replied.
“Who do you like right now?” Tyson suggested.
“What he said,” Kai said.
“I’m not in love with anyone!” he shouted.
“Fine, whatever, but I bet you’re gay,” Kai said and Tala shot a look at him.
“I’m not gay,” he murmured.
“Whatever,” Kai whispered.
“Tala’s turn,” Max said and they continued to play until someone got a really strange dare. Daichi was daring Tyson.
“You either kiss Hilary, kiss Nicole or kiss Diana, your choice. Oh yeah, remember it is butcher, so you can’t get me after your dare,” Daichi explained and Tyson refused to speak. “Right then, I’ll pick for you. Hmmmm. Maybe it could be Hilary since you are really great friends, or Nicole because you just became friends, or even Diana cause she barely knows you. I don’t know. Who votes for who?” Many said Hilary, many said Nicole and many said Diana.
“Not me,” Hilary announced.
“Neither,” Diana said.
“No way,” Nicole said with an annoyed look on her face. “It’s a stupid dare, so just forget about it.”
”No!” Daichi argued. “I want Tyson to complete it! Hurry up already Tyson! Make up your mind!” Daichi squealed that really loud.
“Argh! Shut up!” he shouted as Nicole pulled packets of gun out of her bag. She took a few for herself.
“Gum anyone?” she asked and everyone took some.
“Right, I’ve mad up my mind!” Daichi exclaimed. “You can kiss all of them!”
“Fine,” he said and got up to make his way to Hilary who closest to him. She got up and ran into the water. Tyson looked at the other two. They copied and dashed towards the water. Nicole made it, but Diana got grabbed by the arm by Tyson. He kissed her on the cheek and went into the water after the other girls. Diana went into the water and started to franticly wet her cheek saying “ew ew ew!” she eventually came back to her spot on the sand and watched Tyson’s task trying to get the other two. Nicole dived under to get away from him, but her grasped her and pulled her up. He kissed her too and went after Hilary who was getting further out to the surf where it was deeper. Nicole came back after diving under many times. She had just sat down and she saw Tyson giving Hilary a long kiss on the lips. She cracked up laughing. So did everyone else after a while. Kai looked away from them and laughed.
“Hey Tyson! Everyone is laughing at you!” Max yelled out to him. Tyson heard and stopped kissing Hilary and swam back in. Hilary followed him in and was really blushing.
“That was so embarrassing,” Diana said and looked away from Tyson who was beaming at Daichi.
“My turn! Kai, truth or dare?” he asked again.
“Why me?” he asked himself quietly. “Dare.”
“Same as mine. Kiss Hilary, kiss Nicole or kiss Diana, but all on the lips,” Tyson explained.
“No way,” Kai replied.
“Fine then, I’ll choose for ya!” Tyson winked at Nicole. “Nicole.” She ran out into the water again. Kai growled at Tyson and followed her. She dived under and looked back.
“Shit! Where’d he go?” she asked herself. Suddenly she got pulled under water. From shore, it looked like a shark had just pulled her under water. Kai had actually got her. He came up for air and dragged Nicole up too. He kissed her and went back under the water. Nicole gasped for air and smiled slightly. She dove under and took hold of Kai and pulled him up.
“Not too bad,” she said with a smile and swam fast back to shore. Kai followed her and realised that she had put on a face as she walked back to the laughing teenagers.
“It’s not funny,” Nicole said as she sat down again. She was sitting beside Miguel and DC and Miguel moved over so Kai could sit beside her. “Ha, ha, really funny.” They continued playing truth or dare until it started to get dark and cold and they went to Tyson’s house for a sleepover. They stopped hotels that the other groups were staying at so they could get their gear or stay there. The teams left were BBA Revolution, The Thuganomics, The Blitzkrieg Boyz and White Tiger X. They all crowded in a big room and watched the T.V. Hilary stayed as far away as possible from Tyson, Ray stayed with his home team, Kai and Nicole sat at opposite sides of the room and Diana and Voke sat together. Soon Tyson’s grandfather came in and told them to go to sleep. They settled down, switched the T.V. off and left a few lights on. They settled down and turned the rest of the lights off. All of a sudden, Kai clutched his face where the triangles were and moaned in great pain. DC grabbed his hand and also was yelling in pain. Nicole seized her arm by her shoulder and was shouting in pain, just about bringing tears to her eyes. Tyson flicked the switch and all of the lights went back on.
“What’s the matter?” he asked as he saw them in huge pain. Nicole and DC’s friends went rushing over to them and Voke and Diana glanced at each other. Chelsea and Diana helped Nicole to sit up and Eddie and Voke helped DC up. Ray, Max and Tyson helped Kai up and looked at him. His blue triangles were glowing and were obviously causing the pain.
“What? Nicole and DC don’t have triangles!” Ray commented and the other thugs exchanged glances.
“Uh, Voke, explain,” Diana said nervously as she reached into her bag. She pulled out a small device that she kept hidden in her hands.
“Well, they do have triangles, but we hide them. We managed to disconnect a chip inside the triangles to make them invisible. Sometimes they reappear and cause pain. Right now, that is happening,” Voke explained and the others were astounded. Diana placed a device on Nicole, just below her shoulder on her arm and pushed a part of it.
“C’mon, c’mon,” she murmured under her breath. Tyson left Kai and went over to DC. His hand had four green triangles, like Kai’s triangles. He made his way to Nicole and she passed out. DC and Kai also fainted and Diana looked freaked out.
“That wasn’t me,” she said as Voke looked at her. Chelsea rolled up Nicole’s sleeve and saw that the triangles (red) were glowing and slowly fading away into her skin. DC’s were also fading and Kai’s were returning to normal.
“What’s the matter dudes?” Tyson’s grandpa asked as he entered the room.
“Uh, nothing,” Tyson said, pushed him out the door, shut the door and turned the lights off. “We’ll discuss it in the morning.” He didn’t bother to shut the curtains; they let moonlight enter in the room. Everyone slept peacefully that night, apart from the three. They woke up at midnight exactly and sat up.
“Ow! What happened?” Nicole said as she realised it was dark.
“Dunno,” DC replied. “I think I passed out.”
“Me too,” Kai said. “I’m pretty sure that pain made us too.”
“Well, I’m going to sleep,” DC said and lied back down. He meant it too. He fell asleep almost instantly. Unexpectedly, Nicole started to cry. Kai crawled out of his sleeping bag and sat by her.
“I should have told you guys sooner,” she said between sobs.
“What?”
“That I’m from Biovolt.” Kai was stunned.
“You are?” Kai questioned. She nodded and looked up. Her tears glistened in the moonlight. “Hang on, I saw this coming. Vision thing?”
“Yep. You probably know what’ll happen next. You can’t change it yet, just go with it until you’re more trained and used to it,” Nicole said and held her arm. It was still prickling with pain.
“Uh, I don’t really like what’s coming up next,” Kai said and tried to move away.
“You can’t change the future yet Kai. Go with it.” Kai shook his head in disagreement.
“I don’t understand though, why me?” Kai let it all out. He was puzzled since she had first talked to him about this ‘vision’ thing.
“You’re special. Physic. You can glance into the future. Brooklyn can too, but he’s a bad guy, on the bad side. Always wants to change it to go his way. You can choose to fight for good with me, or bad with Brooklyn and his girlfriend, Ashley. She’s a real cow though.” Nicole knew she had a lot of explaining to do.
“Ah, I’ll fight for good, and I’ll let the visions go the way they want.” Kai made up his mind.
“Unless they are bad. Then Brooklyn and Ashley will want to make it happen. They like bad ones, and we like the good ones. I’ll explain more in daylight, but you’ve made the right choice Kai,” she said and kissed him on the cheek. “See ya in the morning.” She lied down and Kai went back to his sleeping bag, feeling really awkward. He was fighting for good alongside Nicole.
*Next Morning*
The sun’s light shone through the windows, lighting up the room and giving it a magical glow. Tyson woke up first and woke up everyone else. They all groaned and Daichi chased him away and went back to sleep.
“Gee, that’s a first. Tyson’s up early,” Ray stated and yawned.
“Yeah,” Max agreed and also yawned. Nicole sat up looking annoyed with Tyson.
“I am so going to kill you Tyson!” she shouted and Tyson ran back into the room followed by Daichi.
“Do I look like I care?” he asked her and pushed Daichi away.
“Yes.” She got up and grabbed her clothes and went to one of the showers.
*A While Later*
“Where are we going for lunch?” Kenny asked.
“Pizza?” Lee asked.
“Takeaways!” Max shouted.
“No way!” Chelsea remarked.
“How about we go to a café for a change?” Hilary suggested. “Who votes for that?” All of the girls raised their hands.
“Oh really! It won’t be that bad!”
”C’mon guys!”
“Try it please!”
“Okay fine! I vote too,” Max gave in.
“Be a man guys and take us out!” Diana yelled and everyone suddenly agreed.
“I wonder why that worked,” Mariah asked her.
“So do I,” Diana replied. They went to the café, ate, went to the movies, watched a movie, went to the mall, shopped (girls buying heaps of things, boys carrying the bags) and went back to Tyson’s house.
“That is the last time I’m going shopping with a girl,” Tala said as he sat down on a couch.
“Same here,” Kai said. Diana, Chelsea and Nicole went to the CD player and put in a new CD they had bought. They pressed play and turned up the volume to it’s maximum. Really fast songs started to play.
“This is the last time I’m hanging around after a girl has gone shopping!” Tala yelled over the music.
“Same here!” Kai shouted back again. The next few days continued similar like this and soon it was Tuesday, time for the Championship finals to begin.

Chapter 24: What Team Wins?
BBA Revolution arrived with The Thuganomics for the finals on the Tuesday. They were all pumped up and ready. BBA Revolution knew Nicole was going to fight all of them, but she had lied to make them think differently about their choice of bladers.
“Hello everyone! Welcome to the finals of this Championship series! We will watch today, live, BBA Revolution fight against The Thuganomics! Points will not be included, just who wins the most out of three rounds!” Zap broadcasted. “Lets see who will fight first! It looks like Ray from BBA Rev and Chelsea from The Thugs! Lets get ready! 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Chelsea had great confidence in herself. She attacked Ray’s blade and forced it to weaken in defence and endurance.
“I am so going to win this,” Chelsea muttered.
“What did you say?” Ray asked.
“Nothing. Talia, Ice Storm!” Chelsea screamed and her beyblade reacted. It used Ice Storm on Drigger, but still Ray’s beyblade kept on spinning.
‘Drigger, Gatling Claw!” Ray shouted. This time, the attack made the opposition stop. “Yes! I won!” Chelsea sighed and picked up her beyblade.
“Well, we gave it a good shot, didn’t we Talia?” Chelsea whispered. Ray walked over and held out his hand.
“Great job! You just about won!”
“Thanks,” Chelsea said as she shook his hand.
“Ray takes the victory! Who’s next?” Zap bellowed. Eddie walked up and saw that Tyson was his opponent.
“You sure you’re okay Eddie?” Tyson asked. He didn’t want to fight an unfair battle.
“Yeah, I’m fine, as long as I don’t get any nasty comments from Nicole.” He talked softly.
“Hey! I heard that!” Nicole shouted to him. Eddie and Tyson looked confused and shrugged at each other.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Tyson was straight on the attack and so was Eddie, but Eddie was more careful. He made Tyson loose his energy and saved up his energy for stronger attacks.
“Madeo, Fire Spin!” Eddie shouted and his beyblade launched the attack at Dragoon. Tyson’s beyblade was knocked out of the dish.
“And your winner is Eddie!” Zap yelled into the microphone. “Next beybladers please!” Nicole walked up for this one. She had never lost, and she didn’t plan on it either.
“Who’s gonna win this one?” Max asked. “Not me by the way.”
“Turn around, touch the ground, bags not me,” Daichi said.
“I’ll go then,” Kai said and walked up to the platform.
“And 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The two beyblades collided in the air with a massive bang that echoed around the stadium. The beyblades went at each other for a while and soon both bladers were tired.
“Gotta win,” Nicole mumbled.
“Must win,” Kai muttered and launched another attack. It hit Nicole’s beyblade with such a force, her beyblade flew up into the air and through the roof and out of sight. Kai smiled.
“I’ve won,” he managed to say.
“Oh no Kai, this is far from over,” Nicole said as her beyblade flew back down through the roof and landed in the dish and attacked Dranzer. This continued for a few minutes, attacking, defending, attacking, defending.
“Right Drydzia! The time is now! Water Dance!” Her beyblade performed a ‘dance’ and water came up unexpectedly and attacked Dranzer. Kai lost.

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Wednesday, May 18, 2005

   HI!!
HI!!! I thought that you just might want to know, that I have new chapters ready for you right now! You want the next ones? Here they are:

Chapter 20: Say Goodbye
“Well we do have to say bye to White Tiger X, The PPB All Starz, The Majestics and The Blitzkrieg Boyz! That leaves us with only four teams competing! Join us tomorrow for the next rounds! But before I go, I’ll leave you with a few hits! DJ hit it! Bye everyone!” Zap’s voice was sad, but also happy. This Love by Maroon 5 played and Ray looked at his former team to see how they were coping.
“Just fine,” he murmured to himself. He looked at Tyson who was so glad they had made it. Hilary was ignoring him and walking away. Kenny followed her, and Max, Ray and Daichi left too, leaving Tyson all alone. When he realised, he ran after them. The Thuganomics laughed at their performance and left too. F-Dynasty, pleased that they still got to compete, left after The Thuganomics, who were arguing with each other. Team Bega talked and then also exited. Boris decided to have a chat outside with his team.
“See, I knew you wouldn’t let me down. Especially you two Nicole and Garland. Nice work. We’ll win this in no time.”
”No, I’m sick of this already!” Nicole shouted suddenly. No one expected her to do that. “I’m leaving this team! It sucks, and it’s on the wrong side!”
“But you signed the paper. Once you sign, you can’t swap teams. Only ones that haven’t signed are able to enter a team,” Hiro commented.
“Ah, that’s where you’re wrong. I didn’t sign my signature. It was fake. I can join another team, and beat the crap out of you!” With that comment, she walked away to find The Thuganomics, her friends.
“Ditto,” DC said and ran off after her.
“Oh well, at least Kai didn’t do that. You would never do that, would you Kai?” Boris questioned eagerly.
“Think again, stupid,” Kai answered and walked off to find BBA Revolution, one team he knew he fitted in. Kind of fitted in. Nicole and DC sneaked up on their friends who were chitchatting with BBA Revolution and surprised them by jumping out from the corner and shouting boo really loud. Everyone jumped as they did that.
“Got ya’s!” Nicole screamed and burst into a fit of laughing. DC laughed too and Kai came around the corner too, not laughing like usual.
“How come you guys came back? The rules don’t allow that!” Chelsea asked impatiently.
“We faked our signatures, easy to do, and we can join your team now,” DC explained quickly.
“And Kai is with us?” Tyson asked Kai and looked at him.
“Well I guess so. I’m not a stupid thug you know.” He chose the wrong reply. All of the three boy thugs started to fight Kai, three onto one. One thing they couldn’t stand was being called a stupid thug.
“Oh shit,” Diana said and ran towards the four boys. She grabbed Voke and tried to get him to stop fighting Kai. Chelsea grabbed DC and Nicole Eddie.
“Control yourselves guys,” Diana said, clearly embarrassed as she embraced Voke to stop him from attacking Kai again. Kai clearly looked pissed off. Ray helped Kai up and let go of him as soon as he was up.
“Thank God you guys are back!” Voke said as he shared a ‘manly hug’ as he called it with DC.
“Yeah we’d lose with out ya’s,” Diana said.
“No you wouldn’t!”
”You guys were on a role without us!” Nicole said.
“Imagine with those two in their team now!” Max exclaimed.
“We’re really glad your back,” Eddie said smiling at Nicole and kissed her on her cheek.
“Gee I feel really special now,” she joked and slapped him hard across the face. “Not!” Everyone laughed (apart from Kai who remained silent).

Chapter 21: Thoughts

Nicole’s Thoughts
I had just ditched Team Bega and joined The Thuganomics. I felt better. I was with my old friends again. It took a while, but I had out smarted Boris. We were joking around and the boys got in a fight with Kai. I had to pull Eddie off, because Chelsea had DC and Diana Voke. I so think that Diana and Voke are together. Eddie gave me a kiss on the cheek. I was stunned and made a joke out of it. And slapped him (whoops!). He really must like me.

Eddie’s Thoughts:
I was so happy that Nicole and DC had joined our team again. I don’t know what I would have done with out them. We were joking around, laughing and stuff, and Kai called us stupid thugs. I was really annoyed, and I can go into more detail, but I won’t. I went after him and got held back by a girl! So embarrassing! I was glad that no one laughed at the time. I was over joyed that Nicole was back and kissed her. She laughed and made it into a joke. I wonder if she knows I like her?

Kai’s Thoughts:
Boris was getting on my nerves, really annoying me, and I agreed to sign a fake signature so I could join another team. DC’s idea was great. It worked too. We left Team Bega and joined a different team. They did anyway. I wanted to join The Blitzkrieg Boyz, but they had been eliminated from the Championships. I wondered what team I should join, and thought I could only really join BBA Revolution. Nicole and DC joined The Thuganomics again; I knew they would though. It was so obvious. I called them stupid thugs and the three boys started to, well, fight me. I was losing; three onto one, and the three girls pulled them away. I was so pissed off then. Eddie got gross with Nicole. I consider one kiss on the cheek gross. I kind of felt jealous, I was kind of developing crushes lately, but on Diana at the moment. I realised I might be moving on. But I always thought that Nicole wasn’t really beautiful, but never ugly. What am I thinking?! I hate girls! Aaargh!

DC’s Thoughts:
We had fooled them! It felt great too! Really, it did. Nicole and me walked to find our friends, and soon found them. Kai was following us; I knew that. He seemed to know that BBA Revolution was with our team. We were celebrating, joking around and Kai turned up, called us stupid, and I guess I couldn’t control myself. I tried to, but it didn’t work. I lunged at him and started to fight him. Voke and Eddie joined in too. He looked really scared, but tried to get us away from him. When the girls held us back (very embarrassing, girls!!!), Kai got up and looked really irritated. I realised what I had done. Total whoops. That’s what Chelsea would say. She was holding me back. Eddie did something I would never do (I don’t think I would any way). He went straight to Nicole and kissed her. She slapped him in reply. Don’t blame her though. She said she doesn’t like like him, just like him. She had made it into a joke, so I laughed along with everyone else, apart from Kai, who never seems to find anything funny. I wonder when he will.

Tyson’s Thoughts:
Believe it or not, but Kai has just returned to our team! Yes! We won’t lose now! DC and Nicole have decides to bi in The Thuganomics now. I’m glad they did. Now they can make Team Bega lose! We’d do that anyway, but they can help I guess. Kai called our new friend stupid thugs, so the boys made him pay! It was quite funny to watch, but if I was Kai, I would be really scared! Those three guys look really strong! They must work out! Eddie made me witness my first boy/girl kiss. Couldn’t believe it. Poor Nicole though, Eddie doesn’t deserve her. Maybe I should ask her to go out with… Whoops, don’t go there Tyson! Concentrate!

Diana’s Thoughts:
Nicole and DC are back! They faked their signatures, so they can join our team! But Kai is such an idiot! He called us stupid thugs! We’re not stupid! He is though for messing with us! The three boys went after him and attacked him. Go guys! We had to get them off though. I grabbed Voke and pulled him away. I really like him. Ray helped Kai up, but as soon as he was up, he moved away from him. I think Ray likes me. Eddie kissed Nicole on the cheek. She slapped him back. He really likes her. Pity she likes someone else though. They would look quite good together I reckon. I don’t know if I should tell Nicole about Voke’s relationship with me. She would understand right? What should I do? I know, I’ll tell her tonight.

Chapter 22: I Would Have Never Guessed
“What!?” Nicole screamed after Diana explained.
“You guys okay?” Chelsea asked.
“Fine!” Diana replied positively.
“I would have never guessed that! Man! You could have told me earlier you know,” Nicole said quieter.
“Sorry I upset you, but I thought you would understand me!” Diana screamed back at her.
“I do understand Diana. I’m just shocked. I’m really sorry I yelled.” Nicole felt really bad.
“Yeah, same.” Diana agreed to make up.
“So how long have you two been together?” Nicole asked eagerly. She really wanted to know more.
“A few months I guess,” was Diana’s reply.
“Wow you’re good at hiding things!” Nicole exclaimed. “So that’s why you guys disappeared! You were going out!”
“Yeah, of course! We went sometimes when someone else disappeared too, so it wasn’t obvious.” Diana was amazed that no one had realised that they were together.
“How far have you been?”
“Not that far!” Diana retorted. “A few kisses I guess, but not that far!”
“C’mon, lets go and watch some T.V.” Nicole suggested and walked out of the girls’ bedroom. Diana followed and sat down on the couch next to Voke.
‘So obvious that was coming,’ Nicole thought and sat down too, as far way from Eddie as possible.
*Next Morning*
The Thuganomics got up, did the obvious, and were soon ready to go back to beyblade, this time with DC and Nicole on their team, not against them. They met up with BBA Revolution at the stadium. They were new friends and were really happy they had The Thuganomics as friends. Even Kai was, but he didn’t show it.
“Hi guys!” Max had yelled when he saw them arrive. The six had walked over and been really friendly, like Kai hadn’t just been beaten up yesterday.
“Ready to lose?” DC asked.
“No, you?” Daichi replied.
“We never lose okay?” Diana said.
“No, that’s not okay. You’re gonna lose,” Ray said.
“Ha ha, really funny,” Chelsea said to him.
“C’mon guys, we’ll be late!” Kenny said and hurried his team to the door. The Thuganomics went after the others and took their seats again. This time, there were only four benches and they were bigger too. The other two teams were there already.
“Welcome back everyone! We will have two matches today! Three rounds of head to head beyblading! Mr D has announced to me that Team Bega and F-Dynasty will have three points each! Lets hope that today F-Dynasty will be able to battle!” Zap’s voice startled a few people and a man walked up and passed her a hat. “I will now draw two random team names from this hat and they will go against each other! Here we go!” She reached inside the hat and pulled out a piece of paper. “It looks like Team Bega are going to be first!” She placed her hand in again and pulled out another one. “The Thuganomics will face Team Bega, right here, right now!” Boris looked anxious now, but the six thugs looked absolutely fine.
“Right lets go guys! Who first?” Nicole asked.
“Me,” Diana suggested.
“I would have never guessed! Not! Be careful though, it’s Garland you’re facing,” Nicole said. Garland hadn’t even stood up or moved. Boris was actually trying to get Ming Ming to go up. She refused and Garland volunteered to go. Diana knew he was tough because of what Nicole had said.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The two beyblade clashed in the middle of the ordinary beyblade dish. Garland was on the attack straight away. Hitting Diana’s beyblade with a powerful attack, he made it just about fly out of the dish.
“C’mon Bacci! Move!” Diana yelled, but her beyblade was damaged badly already. ‘He’s strong, how can I win?’ she thought.
“Diana attack already!” Voke shouted from behind her. She smiled slightly and tried to attack, but couldn’t.
“I can’t attack!” she screamed.
“Well dodge his attacks then!” he replied.
“And I can’t move!”
“Yes you can Diana! Think about it! Make Bacci move!” Nicole shrieked at her. Diana tried and soon enough, just before Garland’s finishing move came, she dodged it.
“Yeah! Go Diana!” Chelsea shouted. Diana went on the attack.
“Bacci, Electro Shoot!” Bacci performed Electro Shoot and Garland lost.
“Yes! I won!” Diana declared really happily. Her beyblade flew into her hand and she rushed down to her friends. Nicole, Chelsea and Voke all hugged her hard.
“And Diana has won!” Zap said and Team Bega looked disappointed. If the other team won again, Team Bega wouldn’t have enough points to continue. Mystel went up and Eddie went up too.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The beyblades circled in the dish for a few laps until Mystel did an attack, making his beyblade fly into the air and hit Eddie’s beyblade hard.
“Attack now!” Mystel shouted and Eddie tried to take control of the match, but couldn’t. He also couldn’t concentrate. He started to get a bad headache and fell to his knees holding onto his head and screaming in pain.
“What’s going on?” DC asked.
“Dunno,” Chelsea replied and tried to find out what was wrong.
“Eddie, use Fire Spin!” Voke yelled out.
“Madeo…” Eddie began, but passed out. His beyblade stopped spinning.
“Eddie!” Diana shouted. She rushed up to him, followed by everyone apart from DC and Nicole. They chatted though, until they came back with an unconscious Eddie and his beyblade. A few nurses took him away to the hospital. DC and Nicole stayed behind, promising that they would come soon. Mystel looked happy, but felt horrible inside. Boris was really happy though.
“Great job Mystel. We’re showing them now! Who’s next?” Ming Ming walked up and Nicole walked up too, ready to show everyone again that she was better then her.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!”
“Drydzia, Illusion Wall!” Nicole shouted and a silver wall went around her beyblade and disappeared. Her beyblade was nowhere in sight. Suddenly, Ming Ming’s beyblade moved, like it was being hit by Nicole’s beyblade.
“What?!” Ming Ming questioned.
“Too easy!” Nicole declared. “Cross Wave!” Her beyblade became visible again and water appeared. Some water on the right of Ming Ming’s beyblade, some water on the left. It hit her blade with a very strong force and her blade stopped spinning.
“That is the end of the first match! The Thuganomics with seven points and Team Bega with only four! The Thuganomics are in the finals!” Zap shouted as Nicole walked back to DC.
“I’m going to see Eddie now, okay?” he asked her.
“Sure, go ahead. I’ll stay though. I don’t really want to… you know,” she replied.
“Yeah, I know. Contact me if there’s trouble though,” he said and walked out. She nodded her head and walked over to BBA Revolution.
“Mind if I sit with you guys? I don’t wanna be a loner,” she asked politely.
“Sure,” Hilary replied and Nicole sat down beside her.
“Thanks,” she said and smiled.
“Next up is BBA Revolution against F-Dynasty!” Zap shouted.
“Who’s first up?” Kenny asked.
“Me,” Max said and walked up to the platform and saw Julia walk up too. ‘Great, a girl,’ he thought.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!”
“You know I’ll win.” Julia started a conversation with Max to distract him.
“I don’t think so,” Max replied and attacked her beyblade. Soon enough, Max had got ready to use a finishing move. But when he used it, Julia dodged it and attacked him with her finishing move. Max’s blade flew out of the dish.
“Oh man!” he said and picked up his beyblade. He went over to shake hands with Julia. She accepted and they shook hands.
“And I’ll go next,” Tyson said and went past Max on the way up. Julia stayed there.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” This time, the beyblades were in the position to collide with each other, but Julia’s blade swerved out of the way, sending Tyson’s blade just about falling out of the dish.
“Go Dragoon!” Tyson said and hit Julia’s beyblade out of the dish.
“Yeah! I won!” he shouted.
“Yeah, congratulations,” Julia said and looked disappointed. She held out her hand this time. Tyson shook it and she walked back to her bench. Raul walked up and Kai went up this time.
“This’ll be easy for Kai probably,” Daichi commented.
“Too easy,” Nicole murmured.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Kai went straight on the attack, hitting Raul’s beyblade with strong attacks. Raul’s beyblade looked like it would stop, but it didn’t.
“C’mon Raul! Win this!” Julia’s cries reached BBA Revolution and Nicole.
“Go Kai!” Max yelled.
“Win!” Tyson shouted beside Max.
“Don’t worry guys, I will,” Kai replied, turned and smiled at them. Nicole closed her eyes and started to hum This Love by Maroon 5. Kai turned back and attacked Raul’s beyblade with one last attack. It stopped spinning and Kai looked pleased with himself.
“Oh, look at that, I won,” he said and held up his hand. His beyblade flew up into it. He turned and walked back down to BBA Revolution and Nicole.
“Yeah! Go Kai!” Kenny yelled as he came back.
“We’re in the finals!” Daichi commented, and Nicole stopped humming and opened her eyes.
“BBA Revolution have made it to the finals! In one weeks time, BBA Revolution will go head to head with The Thuganomics!” Zap announced.
“Well, I guess I’ve got to go. I’m looking forward to facing you guys in the finals,” Nicole said. “I’m going to fight all of the battles, so I’ll face five of you. Don’t worry though, I’ll win all of them.” She held her hand out to Kai. “Congratulations on winning, but you’ll learn. Wait and see.”
“What do you mean?” he asked cautiously.
“Think about it.” Kai reached out and shook her hand and smiled.
“I’ll still win though,” he remarked.
“The future’s already written Kai. You can’t chose what happens. You will be able too, just wait,” she said and pulled her hand away from his tight grip.
“Now I’m confused, I don’t-“
“Find the power with in Dranzer, she’ll help you. In the meantime, wait for visions.” She turned and walked out.
“Is it just me or am I seeing things? Did Kai really just shake hands?” Max asked.
“And he had a conversation too,” Ray added.
“No, he’s just learnt how to talk!” Tyson joked and got Kai chasing him out as a result.

Okay, thanks a lot to everyone who has been included in the story and has PMed me who they think will win and why. Comment now please.
Ta Ta For Now!
BISC
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Sunday, May 15, 2005

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OMG! Thank you so much beyblader for pointing out that I had two Chapter 11s. I have changed it now so I'll re-post the last few chapters now and a few more too. I'll delete the other post so you'll have to comment again on this one. Please PM me with any other comments or if you want to be in the story. Remember to include where you are from. Suppose you want the next chapters? Here they are!:

Chapter 11: Run!
Diana and Ray turned and ran away as fast as they could. The alarm sounded, but shortly stopped and they stopped, thinking they had lost the guard. Ray pulled a door open and let Diana through and slammed it behind them.
“Okay, that was close.”
“Yeah, I agree with you Ray,” Diana said and took in deep breaths. It was a tip Nicole had given her because she got really puffed during long performances.
“Where are we now?”
“Dunno. It looks like a conference room,” Diana said as she stood up.
“Well that is a good guess I suppose. But lets get out of here. Through that door,” he said and pointed to the door at the other end of the long room. They ran around the long table and chairs and went out the door.
“We’ve been here before haven’t we?” Ray asked in confusion.
“Yeah, to get Nicole! We came in from over there!” Diana said. “But she’s stopped screaming. We won’t know where she is now.”
“Well lets random guess our way until we find her,” Ray said, hoping to make Diana feel better about the situation. That was just the way he is. She agreed and opened a door. They kept going like this until they came across a locked door.
“Must be this one, it’s locked.” Ray looked for a key and Diana tried to see if Nicole was inside by saying her name.
“Key’s here,” Ray said as he grabbed the key and unlocked the door. They entered the room and found Nicole lying on the ground unconscious.
“OMG. What happened,” Diana said, just about in tears.
“Uh, we need to get her out of here remember?” Ray asked her.
“Okay, how? She’s unconscious, she can’t walk,” Diana said. Nicole sat up laughing.
“No, I was asleep,” she managed to say.
“Shhh, we don’t want to get caught,” Ray said as he fetched the other key he had seen.
“Thank God you’re alive,” Diana said and hugged her friend. Ray came back and took the handcuffs off Nicole.
“Thanks, now lets get out of here,” Nicole said and ran out of the door.
“Going somewhere?” a masked figure asked.
“Yes actually. Out of this prison, Brooklyn,” she replied and kicked him hard in the guts. She then pushed him into the wall and made a run for it. Ray and Diana followed and caught up with her when she went down stairs.
“Where are we going?” Ray asked.
“I’ve got no clue, but I’m hoping there is an exit somewhere,” she said as she turned a corner. She ran right into a masked figure dressed in black.
“Nice outfit Garland,” she said and kicked him hard in the guts and pushed him into the wall. They kept on running and found a few guards that captured Nicole. Ray and Diana didn’t turn the corner, but hid in a room. Once again, just when she thought she was free, she was trapped.

Chapter 12: Rich
Kai, Chelsea, Max and Tyson all leaned against the door when the alarm went off, hoping to stop any guards from getting in. They stopped as the alarm turned off and looked around again.
“This is unreal,” Max said in a surprised tone.
“Yeah, I know. This guy Boris owns way too much money,” Tyson said as he stared around the room in shock. The room they had entered was full of money, rows and rows full of stacks of notes.
“This is wrong,” Chelsea said.
“Why?” Kai questioned.
“Why would a guy like this ‘Boris’ guy keep heaps of money in a unlocked room like this? Wouldn’t he have it in a safe?”
“My grandfather leaves stacks of money around the mansion because he’s so rich he doesn’t care if a few millions goes missing.” Kai’s reply astonished the rest of the group.
“So you could take a few hundreds and buy heaps of stuff?” Tyson asked.
“Yep. He wouldn’t care either.”
“Okay, that’s weird,” Max said as he looked around the room for the twentieth time.
“Lets go now, guards will probably be checking out all of the rooms now, so we should move before we get caught here,” Chelsea said.
“Wait a minute. Shouldn’t we take some? Money I mean. We’d be rich if each of us slipped a few stacks of notes,” Tyson suggested.
“I am rich,” Chelsea said.
“I’m rich too,” Kai said.
“Well, we could take a few. He probably wouldn’t notice, right?” Max told Tyson. They reached over to the shelf closest to them and grabbed a few handfuls each and stuffed them in their pockets.
“C’mon guys, just take a few. Please,” Tyson said.
“Okay, fine I will,” Chelsea said quietly as she walked over and grabbed a few handfuls.
“No way, lets go,” Kai said as he pulled open the door and walked out. Lucky for him, two guards were waiting there for him and grabbed him. He fought but lost and was dragged away. The other three though, weren’t captured because they were busy loading up their pockets with money. They turned around and left the room, but saw the guards dragging Kai away. They ducked back into the room and waited until they thought the guards were around the corner.
“Now we have to get him again,” Max said.
“Of course we do, he’s our friend.”
“You mean your friend, he’s not mine yet,” Chelsea said. “C’mon, we’ll lose the guards.” They walked silently across the hall and turned the corner to see a struggling Kai and three guards turning off into a room. This room was the conference room that Ray and Diana were in before. The three decided to not go in, but to wait in the room next to it until they came out. Only if they knew what was in that room.

Chapter 13: Street Style
As the alarm turned off, the four boys realized exactly where they were. They had entered a weapon room. Lots of guns, swords, knives and other weapons were on shelves. DC and Voke stood up and looked around, DC checking out guns by checking ammo and aiming with them (but not firing) and Voke checking out the knives and swords. Daichi and Kenny just watched as the two 15 year olds walked around collecting the best weapons.
“Okay, I’ll take Kenny,” DC said.
“And I’ve got Daichi,” Voke said with a smile.
“I am not using a gun,” Kenny said and backed off towards the door.
“It’s self defense Kenny. You might one day. If you lived on the streets, you’d have to carry one around if you wanted to live,” DC replied. He passed Kenny a small loaded gun while he checked out a sniper rifle.
“Here Daichi,” Voke said with a grin. “See if this is light enough.” Daichi grabbed the sword keenly and held it in his hands.
“It’s fine,” he whispered and a gigantic smile spread on his face.
“It’s one way you get girls Daichi,” Voke said and gave him a dagger. “You’ll need this too okay?”
“Yeah, this is just great,” Daichi replied.
“Right, we’re ready,” Voke told DC.
“We’re nearly ready,” DC replied and gave Kenny another gun. “Remember what I told you Kenny?”
“Yeah, I will,” he replied and thought to himself, ‘a gun gets the girls’. He smiled, loaded the gun and wished Ming Ming was there to see him now.
“Now, lets go kick some ass street style!” DC shouted, loaded his gun, grabbed heaps of other guns and pulled open the door. A guard faced him and he fired. The guard fell and DC stepped over him.
“I go and call when it’s safe to come all right?” DC asked. The others nodded in agreement.
“I’ll be back,” DC said in a Terminator voice and walked around the corner. A few fires and he called out. The others followed him around the corner.
“Kenny, you’ll take this corner,” DC ordered him and shoved him towards the corner.
Kenny went and fired twice and called out in a shaky voice, “Clear.” The others followed around the corner.
“We’ll take this one,” Voke said and looked at Daichi. Daichi nodded and got ready. They took the corner and charged at three guards. Voke took one down and so did Daichi. The other guard stabbed Daichi and got him in his arm. Daichi fell to his knees clutching where the blade had hit him. DC came around the corner and fired at the guard. He fell, dead. Kenny rushed over to Daichi who was moaning in pain.
“Are you okay?” he asked him.
“No! What does it look like?” Daichi replied in pain. DC kicked a door open and went in.
“Guys, get Daichi in here,” he said. Voke and Kenny picked up Daichi and took him in. DC was looking around the room for a bandage. He found one and mended Daichi’s arm the best he could. They went out and went around many corners with out finding guards. They opened a random door and went through and crashed into two people.

Chapter 14: Crash
Eddie and Hilary ran down hallways and through unlocked doors that led left and eventually came to a room where on exiting it through the door at the other side, they ran into DC, Kenny, Voke and Daichi carrying weapons. DC quickly aimed his gun at them.
“Oh, hi guys,” he said and lowered his weapon.
“Sup?” Eddie replied.
“Well we’ve got DC,” Voke said.
“We found the control room and shut down, everything I think,” Hilary said. Eddie nodded in agreement. DC handed a gun to Eddie and Hilary.
“You’ve got to be kidding me. I can’t use this,” Hilary stated.
“Self defence,” Eddie said and loaded his gun. “C’mon, lets find the others. What way?”
“Back where you guys came from? We found DC and I don’t think that they would keep the three together,” Kenny suggested.
“Good idea, lets go,” Daichi said and walked over to the other door. He pulled it open and walked out it. He called out ‘clear’ and took a right turn. They continued to walk down and DC advised that he led the way. The rest agreed and DC led the way until he turned a corner and everything was silent.
“Did he forget to say clear?” Voke asked. Hilary turned the corner and saw a guard. She fired her chick’s gun and hit the guard. He fell and Hilary said clear.
“DC is not here. Where did he go?” Eddie asked. He looked around hoping to see his friend.
“Did guards capture him again?” Daichi suggested. Everyone looked at him.
“Probably,” Voke said in a quiet voice.
“Well what are we waiting for? Lets find him!” Kenny said and went to the next corner. They kept going like this until they came across DC being led away by four guards. He was walking normally and had a gun pointed to his head by one of the guards. Hilary loaded her gun and aimed, but Eddie pulled it down.
“No! You might hit DC!” he hissed. “We came here to rescue him remember? Not to kill him!” Hilary sighed and lowered the gun.
“I know. Lets follow him. Then we’ll know where they are putting him” Hilary said and watched them as they disappeared around the corner. The group followed and kept this up for a few minutes. The guards stopped at a door and went in. This room was the conference room.
“I’ve got a feeling we shouldn’t go in,” Daichi said.
“So do I,” Kenny said and had a idea “We could wait in this room beside it so when they come out, we can follow them again.” They pushed open the door and entered the room. They saw Tyson, Max, Chelsea, Ray and Diana trying on bulletproof vests. When the door opened, they turned and saw it was only Daichi, Kenny, Hilary, Eddie and Voke all armed with weapons.
“Oh, hi guys,” Kenny said.
“Hi,” Tyson said as Chelsea and Diana ran over to Eddie and Voke. “We’ve got a confession to make.”
”Go ahead,” Daichi said.
“Well, we had Kai, but he got caught again. We followed the guards to the room beside us and we are staying in here until they come out,” Max explained.
“Yeah, we had DC, but he got caught too. He’s being threatened with a gun,” Voke explained.
“So why are you carrying guns then?” Tyson asked.
“Self defence,” Eddie replied.
“Street style.” Voke helped to answer the question. Eddie passed Chelsea and Diana a gun.
“Thanks,” she said and she smiled and loaded her gun. Tyson and Max both got guns too and the others ditched the knives and swords inside a vest.
“We won’t need these to much, so we’ll just use guns,” Voke explained as he pulled on a bulletproof vest. He grabbed a gun and loaded it. “Okay everyone needs a vest on and a gun. Is that clear?”
“Yes,” everyone replied and grabbed a vest. Soon they were ready.
“Right, when they come out, we’ll follow them and try to get them back. Some one carry extra vests for the three. I’ll keep some ammo and other guns to use and Eddy will carry some more too. We don’t want to crash into any guards by accident. Any questions?” Voke asked. They all shook their head and sat down and waited quietly for the sound of the door opening.

Chapter 15: Team Bega
Meanwhile in the conference room, Boris was already waiting in one chair at the end of the table. Guards surrounded the table and some had seated themselves at chairs close to Boris. Two clutched their stomachs. Kai’s grandfather Voltaire sat next to Boris with a grin on his face. Four guards entered the room with Nicole. She was fighting back until a guard aimed a gun at her.
“Sit,” the guard said and Nicole sat on the chair next to her. The guard kept the gun aimed at her and Nicole waited patiently. Soon door at the other end of the room opened and Kai was dragged in and placed next to Nicole. A guard aimed a gun at Kai’s head and he didn’t move. As soon as Kai sat down, DC entered with four guards beside and behind him. A gun pointed to his head explained why he was obeying the guards. He also sat next to Nicole and didn’t move.
“You thought that you could get away huh? Tell me, why was that?” Boris questioned them. They didn’t reply.
“Fine, don’t answer. Here’s what’s going to happen. You are going to be part of Team Bega. Here is the rest of the team,” Boris said and the guards sitting pulled off their masks. They turned out to be Garland, Brooklyn, Ming Ming, Hiro, Mystel and Tala.
“You’re kidding?” Nicole accidentally said out loud.
“No. Hiro and Tala aren’t actually part of the team, the coach the team,” Boris explained. The two nodded in agreement.
“I am not being part of that team,” DC said.
“You are being forced into being on this team,” Boris said. “You’ll be killed if you don’t agree.”
“Why me?” Kai murmured and looked down.
“In a few days there are Championship matches being held. You as a team will be entered. We will have five rounds and three battles in total against different teams to earn points. One point for each round won. The team with the lowest points will be disqualified. Then the other teams will battle until one winning team is found. Cash is awarded the winning team and many other prizes. We are first up against F-Dynasty and I’m sure that you will serve me well. That is all,” Boris said and he nodded to the guards. They made the three move out of the room. The group of friends that were in the next room heard the door open. They heard footsteps leading away in the same direction. The group stepped out and walked along after the footsteps. They followed until the guards left the three in a room and walked away in the opposite direction. The group went up to the door.
“Hey, are you guys in there?” Hilary asked.
“Yes,” Nicole replied.
“How are we getting them out? It’s an electric lock,” Eddie asked.
“How do you know what it is?” Ray asked him.
“Me and Hilary found the controls for electric locks in the control room,” Eddie replied and looked at the lock.
“I can probably hack into the system and unlock it,” Kenny suggested and plugged a cord into the lock. He stared at the screen and finally said, “I’ve got it! 55829.” Tyson punched the number in and the alarm went off.
“Run!” Diana shouted and they ran down stairs. They came across a door reading ‘exit’ and went through. They ran down the tunnel and came across fresh air. The group panted heavily and sat down.
“We left them behind!” Max exclaimed.
“Oh man! Why didn’t the number work?” Voke asked Kenny.
“I don’t know!” Kenny yelled back.
“Maybe we should wait until the Championships. They’re most likely going to be there don’t you think?” Daichi suggested.
“Yeah, they might be,” Chelsea said and looked at the sky.
“So we’re waiting?” Diana asked.
“Yep,” Tyson replied.
“Have we entered in the Championships yet?” Ray asked.
“No!” Max said.
“We should though,” Kenny said and his team agreed.
“Should we enter too?” Voke asked. “We’re missing DC and Nicole, and they might be against us.”
“Yeah, but I reckon we should give it a go,” Diana said.
“We might win,” Eddie said.
“No dude, we will win!” Chelsea called out.
“I’ll take that as a you guys are going to enter,” Hilary said.
“Yeah, we are,” Eddie said.
“Hey guys, you have to enter before midday today,” Kenny said and stood up.
“Wow! We’d better enter soon, ‘cause knowing Tyson, he’ll keep us back until midday!” Daichi said.
“Why you little-,” Tyson said and ran after him. Daichi ran straight back to the town and the others followed, their spirits lifted that they might get their friends back soon.

Chapter 16: Ready To Go
The two teams got off the bus and walked into the BBA building. The looked around and saw The PPB All Starz, The Blitzkrieg Boyz (with out Tala), White Tigers X, The Majestics and new teams. Tyson went up to the counter.
“I’d like to enter my team into the Championships please,” he said.
“Take a seat and wait please,” the girl said. “Mr Dickinson will be here soon.”
“I suppose we’d have to wait too, right? We want to enter too,” Eddie asked.
“Yes, that’s correct,” she replied. They all followed Max to his Mom and his friends.
“Hi Mom!” he said.
“Hello Max. I assume you will be entering with your friends?”
“Yeah, sorry. I guess you want me to be on your team.”
“Yes, but it’s your decision Max,” she said with a smile. “I see you have more friends Max.”
“Uh, I don’t think they’re friends with us yet. They are just entering too and have also, well, lost two friends.” Max tried to explain things a bit.
“They have? As in dead lost?”
“No, just lost Mom,” he replied. “We’ve lost Kai too.”
“He’s with the Blitzkrieg Boyz again?”
“No, he’s with a new team,” Tyson answered for Max.
“Same with our two friends,” Diana said. Just then, Team Bega walked in. Boris went up to the counter and got told to sit down too. Mr Dickinson walked into the room and looked around. He clapped a few times to get everyone’s attention and held the microphone up to his mouth.
“Welcome everyone. I see we have quite a few teams ready to beyblade. As you may know, there is money and other prizes ready for the winning team and you have to score points to win. We’ll register the willing teams and we’ll have a few beybattles tomorrow and that will be the first few matches of this competition. Every match is made up of five rounds. So what team that has participated before wants to register first? How about the world champion Tyson and his team?” Tyson, Max, Kenny, Ray and Daichi made their way up to the old man.
“So boys, why isn’t Kai up here too?” he asked as he handed a paper over and a pen. “Is he with The Blitzkrieg Boyz again?”
“No. A new team.” Kenny’s answer was short. The signed the papers and handed them back over. Other familiar teams came up and signed.
“And now it is time for the new teams to come up. How about that pretty girl’s team?” he said and pointed to Julia. She walked up with Raul and they signed.
“F-Dynasty has signed,” he said reading off the paper where they had put their team’s name. “So how about you? Girl with the pink hair by the guy with blonde hair.” That team walked up and registered.
“Barthez Battalions are now registered. Now lets see. How about you guys with BBA Revolution? Are you just friends or a team?”
“Nah, we’re not friends yet, but we’re entering,” Voke replied and walked up with the team.
“Aren’t they The Thuganomics?” Julia asked a bit too loud.
“Yes, but Nicole and DC aren’t there with there team. They’re with that other team over there,” Raul replied. They signed and went back.
“The Thuganomics have signed. And now that large team over there, come up and sign,” Mr Dickinson said as he pointed to them. The team walked over and signed.
“And Team Bega has signed. I will see you all tomorrow at the qualifying rounds. Good bye everyone!” Mr Dickinson said and walked away through the door leading to his office.
“Right, we’re ready to go and fight,” Eddie said.
“So what? You guys are ready, but we’ll still win!” Tyson said jokingly.
“Don’t bet on it!” Chelsea said and looked over at Nicole standing with Team Bega. She sighed loudly and Voke looked at her.
“We’ll get them back, don’t worry,” he reassured her, and then went back to joking around with Tyson as they left the building.

Chapter 17: First Rounds
It was the next day and the two teams, BBA Revolution and The Thuganomics turned up together.
“Let’s hope we don’t have to go against each other yet,” Diana said. “You guys wouldn’t be able to continue.”
“More like you guys wouldn’t be able to continue,” Max said back. A new announcer walked up onto the platform near from the middle of the stadium. She was wearing a blue mini skirt and a small, purple tank top and had blonde hair.
“Hello everyone! My name’s Zap, and I’m going to be refereeing these matches and guiding you throughout this Championship! Mr D has told me that first off it will be F-Dynasty against Team Bega! So can the first beybladers come up here and get ready to beyblade?” Zap bellowed into her microphone. The girl from F-Dynasty, Julia, walked up to the platform. The boy, Raul, watched her and wished her good luck in his head. Boris chose Nicole to go first and she walked up to the other platform.
“It looks like we have Julia from F-Dynasty starting off against Nicole from Team Bega! Lets see what kind of beyblade dish we have today!” Zap said and the floor started to move the beybladers apart. It revealed a dish with metal spikes in random places, metal walls in random places and a big metal wall right around the dish.
“It looks like we have selected the Metal Cell beyblade dish for these beybladers to beyblade in! Beybladers, get ready! And 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The two let their beyblades into the dish and the spikes and walls moved up and down. One spike came up and made Julia’s beyblade fly up. A wall also came up and Nicole’s blade went full speed into it. The wall had a hole in it and Nicole just ignored it. Julia’s beyblade came down on top of Nicole’s blade. Julia’s beyblade went flying off and hit a wall and went back on the attack. Nicole moved her blade and attack Julia’s blade. Julia’s beyblade flied out of the dish and stopped spinning.
“And Nicole from Team Bega is the winner!” Zap announced. Nicole held up her hand and her beyblade flew into it and she turned and walked back to her new team. Boris congratulated her as she sat down, but she ignored it.
“Next beybladers please!” Zap said and Raul walked up to Julia as she left the platform. She picked up her beyblade and looked at it. It was badly damaged and she couldn’t blade with it.
“You’ll have to win the other rounds for me Raul,” she said in a quiet voice and sat down beside her coach. Raul got ready to beyblade as Garland came up to face him.
“And 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The boys launched their blades into the metal dish. Garland and Raul were both on the attack, and soon both of the beyblades were loosing their balance. Raul used an air attack and missed Garland’s beyblade. Unfortunately, his beyblade stopped when he missed. Garland’s beyblade stopped spinning just after Raul’s stopped. They both picked up their beyblades and went back to the bench.
“Garland from Team Bega is the winner of this round!” Zap announced. “The score is two-nil to Team Bega!” F-Dynasty’s coach came up to Zap and explained to her that they couldn’t continue to beyblade. “It looks like that F-Dynasty is unable to battle anymore! They have forfeited this match and have left Team Bega the winner of this match!”
“Oh no!” Hilary said.
“If they weren’t against Team Bega, they would have won,” Ray said.
“Well we have to watch out for Team Bega then, don’t we?” Tyson said confidently.
“Yeah, we do,” Daichi said.
“I’ve got information on Garland and Nicole now,” Kenny announced and pointed to the screen of his laptop. “We can predict when they will use those moves later on if we are up against them.”
”Great. We might win now. This Team Bega seems to be really strong,” Max said.
“Hey everyone, it’s time for the next teams to come up!” Zap said. “We will see White Tigers X against BBA Revolution! Teams chose your first beyblader!” Mariah walked up to the platform and smiled at Ray, who was also walking up to the platform.
“We have Mariah from White Tigers X and Ray from BBA Revolution! Remember that you are trying to get 5 points to be equal with Team Bega! Lets get ready to see the new dish!” The platforms moved back and revealed a rocky landscape with different coloured lights shining onto it. “Beybladers ready, 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Both beybladers launched their beyblades into the dish and went straight on the attack. Ray pushed Mariah and she pushed back.
“You’ve improved,” Ray commented.
“Thank you. You have too Ray,” Mariah replied.
“Drigger now!” Ray shouted and Drigger attacked. Mariah’s blade fell out of the dish, but still spinning.
“And here is your winner, Ray from BBA Revolution!” Ray went over to Mariah and offered her his hand. She shook it and Ray smiled and walked back to his team.
“Go Ray!” Max congratulated him.
“One point to us already!” Tyson said and looked at Mariah. She looked hurt as she gazed at him. Tyson managed to drag his eyes off her and prepare to beyblade next.
‘I must win this,’ he thought to himself.
“Okay Tyson, you’re next!” Kenny said.
“Good luck!”
”Win this!
“Don’t worry, I will,” Tyson said with a huge grin and walked up to the platform.
“Next we have Tyson, the world champion from BBA Revolution against Lee from White Tigers X! Lee needs to win this to make the score one-one! Bladers ready? 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!”

Chapter 18: Three-Two
Lee and Tyson’s beyblades went into the beyblade dish and attacked each other. Intense fighting happened between the pair and at times the beyblades were only blurs of lines. Many strong attacks were used and strong defence moves were also used. Tyson decided it was time to end this match. He called Dragoon out to attack. Lee managed to dodge it and hit Tyson with his own attack. Believe it or not, but Tyson’s beyblade stopped spinning.
“I, I lost,” Tyson stammered. He picked up his beyblade and watched Lee go back to his team.
“I guess I wasn’t concentrating enough,” he explained to his friends when he got back.
“That’s strange,” Daichi said.
“What’s strange?” Kenny asked.
“Well, Tyson said he’d win, and he didn’t,” Daichi replied.
“Why you little-“ Tyson said and grabbed Daichi by his hair.
“Hey! Let go of me!” Daichi yelled and Tyson let go of him.
“Who’s going up next?” Kenny asked.
“You,” Hilary answered.
“Me?” Kenny asked. “Fine then, I’ll go.” He walked up to the platform and waited for his opponent. Kevin ran up and was ready to beyblade.
“The score is one-one, a draw, we will have Kenny from BBA Revolution and Kevin from White Tiger X beyblade now!” Zap said. “Ready? 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Kenny’s beyblade bounced around on the rocks and up and down mountains. Kevin’s beyblade followed quickly and attacked. They battled powerfully for two minutes and Kevin did the right attack at the right time and left Kenny with a still beyblade. Kevin had won and Kenny had lost.
“We have a winner! Kevin from White Tiger X!” Zap announced. “We now have a score of two-one to White Tiger X!”
“Sorry guys, I lost,” Kenny apologised when he got back to his friends.
“Look, I’ll win the next round and then it will be two-two. We will win, okay?” Daichi asked.
“Yeah okay,” Kenny said as he sat down and picked up his laptop and started to type. Daichi sprinted up to the platform and watched Mariah come back up.
“A girl? This’ll be easy,” he commented.
“Don’t bet on it!” Mariah said positively and got her beyblade out.
“Round four is Mariah from White Tiger X and Daichi from BBA Revolution! And, 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Zap said. Both beyblades attacked, but missed. It kept going like this until Daichi hit Mariah. Her beyblade was pushed back and just about off the cliff. He went to hit her again, but she swerved out of the way and Daichi’s beyblade fell off the cliff. Lucky for him, his beyblade kept on spinning and he went back to attack Mariah. This time he hit her and her beyblade stopped spinning.
“And Mariah’s beyblade has failed to continue spinning after Daichi’s attack, and Daichi wins! Two-two, a draw!” Zap said enthusiastically. “One more round will determine the winning team and a total of three points for one team, and two for the other, unless it is a draw! Then it would be three-three! Next beybladers up here please!” Ray and Lee both strode up to the platforms.
“You know I’ll win,” Lee declared.
“I will,” Ray replied.
“We have Ray from BBA Revolution and Lee from White Tiger X! 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Zap said as the boys launched their beyblades into the dish. Lee attacked and sent Ray’s beyblade flying through a rock. Ray’s reaction? Well he sent Lee’s through a rock too. This rock fight kept going until Ray pushed hard enough to get Lee’s beyblade out of the dish and stopped spinning.
“And here is your winner of this round, Ray from BBA Revolution! He has made the score three-two to BBA Revolution! BBA Revolution has won this match!” Zap announced and many fans cheered.
“Congratulations Ray!” Hilary said as Ray came back with a big grin on his face.
“Yeah, congratulations mate!” Tyson said and hugged him.
“Thanks guys, I couldn’t have done it with out you though,” Ray said.
“That was so a Ray remark,” Max said.
“Three-two. We won that one. But next time Max, you’ll have to win, okay?” Kenny asked.
“Don’t worry chief, I’m going help you guys get to the top!” Max replied. He had let Ray go twice and miss out on his turn for this match, but he knew he wanted to win later on in the series. He looked at The PPB All Starz and saw his Mom. He wished he was there, but then again he didn’t. He didn’t quite like the new guy, Rick.

Chapter 19: Strong
“Let me fill you in on what’s happened so far if you have just joined us! Team Bega battled against F-Dynasty and F-Dynasty had to forfeit because their blades were unable to battle! Team Bega has five points now! Then BBA Revolution fought against White Tiger X and won three-two! Next will be The Barthez Battalions against The Majestics and against The Blitzkrieg Boyz in a three way battle! Please select your first beybladers!” Zap’s voice rang through the stadium. The result was that the score was five-nil to the Barthez Battalions.
“Barthez Battalions win with a score of five-nil! Lets see the next two teams face each other! We will have The PPB All Starz face off against The Thuganomics!”
“Okay, lets get a five-nil,” Voke said.
“How about four-one?” Diana asked. “If you ask me to battle, I’ll loose.”
“Well prove us you won’t,” Eddie said. “Now.”
“Now?”
“Yeah, you’ll win Diana,” Chelsea said encouraging. Diana sighed, knowing she couldn’t win against her friends. She walked up to the platform and looked to see Michael walking up too. She sighed again and the platforms moved back, revealing a new dish.
“And here it is, a new beyblade dish! This one is called Tropical Paradise! As you can see, it includes a sea, a hotel, a swimming pool and lots of palm trees! Facing off first is Michael from the PPB All Starz and Diana from the famous group, The Thuganomics! And 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Both blades flew into the dish and Michael started to show off, pushing Diana’s blade around the dish and into the water.
“This is too easy,” Michael said and planned a finishing move in his head.
“Stop it!” Diana screamed and her beyblade attacked Michael’s blade. His beyblade went flying into a palm tree and chopped off the top of it. She attacked again, but this time his beyblade went flying into the hotel. As the dust cleared, Michael’s beyblade had stopped spinning.
“It looks like Michael’s beyblade has stopped spinning! Here is your winner, Diana from The Thuganomics!” Zap announced and Diana was over-joyed.
“I won guys! I won!” she shouted as she ran back to her friends. Her beyblade followed her and her friends congratulated her.
“Right, I’ll go next,” Chelsea said. “Wish me luck!” Emily was her opponent.
“Now we have Emily from The PPB All Starz and Chelsea from The Thuganomics! Beybladers ready! 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The two girls launched their beyblades into the dish. They attacked each other’s beyblades and Emily used her finishing move. Chelsea’s beyblade got hit with an incredible force of energy and just about stopped spinning.
“One more attack and you’re finished!” Emily said but stopped and watched in aware as Chelsea’s beyblade started to spin faster and faster.
“No Emily, I think you’re finished. Talia, Ice Storm!” Chelsea said and her beyblade obeyed, creating a small storm over the dish. It was made of ice and ‘rained’ ice and froze Emily’s blade as well as the sea and the swimming pool! “Now Talia, brake the ice!” The beyblade moved towards the frozen blade and broke the ice surrounding it. Emily’s beyblade fell out of the dish broken and cold.
“From The Thuganomics, Chelsea has taken the victory!” Zap bellowed. Chelsea’s beyblade flew into her palm and she walked back to her pals.
“Congrats girl!” Diana said as Chelsea came back.
“Great work!” Voke complimented her.
“Lets hope I can do the same next,” Eddie said and jogged up to the platform. He watched as Rick, his enemy came up to face him.
“Here we go,” Eddie whispered to himself and got ready to beyblade.
“And 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The two beyblades collided in mid air and fell back, just about exiting the dish.
“Man, that was close,” Rick commented as he launched an attack at Eddie’s beyblade. Eddie dodged, but soon got hit by a strong attack from Rick. His beyblade flew into the miniature hotel, smashing it hard enough so that it fell down.
“Enough of this!” Eddie yelled. “ Madeo, fire spin!” Eddie’s beyblade started to spin faster and flames started to cover his beyblade. When they disappeared, his blade was glowing a bright red with heat. You couldn’t tell it was meant to be maroon. The beyblade rammed into Rick’s beyblade and sent it flying out of the dish. Rick sighed and bent down to pick it up. He grasped the beyblade and soon let go of it. It was really hot and he dropped it immediately.
“Sorry, it will take a while for it to cool down,” Eddie said and held his hand up. His glowing beyblade flew into his hand. “I’m used to it, so I don’t feel the pain.” He walked down off the platform.
“Rick’s beyblade has fallen out of the dish! Eddie from The Thuganomics wins!” Zap announced. “The score is now three-nil to The Thuganomics!”
“Whoa, they are good!” Max exclaimed.
“Yeah I know. They never thought that they were good, but they must have never had talent to compare it against,” Kenny said.
“So they can beat us easily?” Ray asked eagerly.
“Most likely, especially since we have him on our team,” Daichi commented and pointed at Tyson.
“Why you little-“
“Hey you guys, not in public please!” Hilary hissed.
“Yeah guys, fight somewhere else!” Max insisted. Voke shook his friend’s hand and he took his place on the platform and got ready to beyblade. He gazed at Michael as he walked up to the platform again.
“This’ll be easy. The others can beat these guys easy,” he murmured to himself.
“We now will have Michael from The PPB All Starz and Voke from The Thuganomics! 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Zap screamed and watched the beyblades as they fought.
“Attack!” Michael yelled.
“Pathetic,” Voke whispered. “Right, Jassio Fridos, attack with Rock Rain!” The beyblade moved around in a circle and dug down into the surface. Soon enough the blade came back up to the surface and had dragged up lots of small rocks (but they looked quite big compared to a beyblade) and threw them at Michael’s beyblade. Each time a rock hit, the beyblade spun slower and slower. As the last rock hit it, it slowed to a stop.
“Michael’s beyblade has stopped spinning! Voke from The Thuganomics wins!” Zap announced.
“I knew that would be too easy!” Voke exclaimed and held up his hand and his beyblade flew into it.
“The score is now four-nil! If The Thuganomics win the next one, they will have five points and be tied with Team Bega! Next beybladers come up please!” Zap roared into the microphone as Diana went back up. Emily walked up again and got ready.
“And ready? 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Emily’s beyblade went to the right of the dish, and Diana’s to the left. They both went for each other and collided with a big bang and a burst of bright light, blinding everyone for quite a few seconds. When everyone could see again, they saw that Emily’s beyblade had flown out of the dish, but Diana’s was still spinning in the dish.
“And your winner is Diana from The Thuganomics! She has made the score five-nil!” Zap shouted and looked at Diana. She was over-joyed that she had won again. The rest of her team had come to join her and were celebrating the fact they had five points.
“Man they are strong!” Max exclaimed and Daichi agreed.
“So what? We’ll still win, right guys?” Ray asked as he watched Diana walk back down and sit on the bench next to them.
“Yeah, we will,” Tyson said, also staring at her. “I’m going to congratulate them on winning their first Championship matches. Ray, you can come too if you want.” He lent over and whispered to him, “I know you like Diana, it’s too obvious.” Ray shoved him, but agreed and the two walked over to them.
“Congrats guys, you won your first few matches!” Tyson said cheerfully.
“Thanks,” Eddie replied.
“Yeah, you guys rock, but we’ll still beat you if we get a chance to face you,” Ray commented.
“No way!” Chelsea fired back.
“We’ll win no matter what it takes!” Diana continued from Chelsea.
“And we’ll get our friends back too,” Voke finished for the girls.
“Yeah, we will,” Diana murmured to herself.
“And I am sorry to announce this, but we do have to eliminate a few teams. Mr D has informed me of a new rule. So, the teams that didn’t put on a good performance and/or have the least amount of points will be eliminated from this Championship series,” Zap said sadly.
“I wonder who it’ll be,” Tyson asked and followed Ray back to their bench.
“Yeah. I hope we have enough points and put on a great performance,” Max said and waited for Zap to continue.

You liked it? Yes? No? PM me if you think I can improve on something or if you wanna be in the story.
Ta Ta For Now!
BISC
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Thursday, May 12, 2005

   Are You The Next Star?
Are you the next star? In my fan fic, will you become the most famous charecter? If you think yes, PM me the following details:
You: Name, what you look like, beyblading team (if you have one), bit beast, beyblade attacks, who you like, female/male and anything in particular you would like to happen to you.
Team: Their names, what they look like, their bit beasts, beyblade attacks, who they like, female/male and anything particular you would like to happen to them.
Past and Secrets: Do you and/or them have a past or secret? Would you like it realvealed? Who reaveles it?
Past Charecters: Do you have anything to do with the past charecters already mentioned in the story?
Well, I hope that that will keep you all busy. PM me soon and comment on my story (below). I'm up to Chapter 25 I think.
Ta Ta For Now!
BISC
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