Saturday, May 7, 2005

   Chapter 6, 7, 8, 9 And 10
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Chapter 6: Here We Come!
At Tyson’s house, Ray, Max, Tyson, Kenny, Daichi, Hilary, Diana, Chelsea, Eddie and Voke were all deciding on what to do. They had slept the night at Tyson’s house and now were trying to think about what they could do to get their friends back. Eddie suddenly had a thought.
“Hey guys, you know how DC and Nicole have a … different background before they lived on the streets?”
“Yeah, they did. So what?” Diana asked.
“Well don’t you think that they might have been taken there?” Eddie asked. “I know we aren’t meant to talk about it, but I think we’ve got no choice.”
“Hm. True. I think that even their lives might be at risk so, yeah, someone go ahead,” Chelsea said.
“I’m not saying it. I know DC, and I’m not going to be the first to get on the wrong side of him,” Voke said. That was true. Voke and DC were usually together.
“I will then,” Eddie said. “Okay, Nicole and DC were part of a Biovolt plan to take over the world. We think, well, I think, that they’ve been captured and may be forced into fighting for Biovolt in the next Beyblading Championships coming up.”
“Well Kai was involved with Biovolt too, and so is his grandfather, Voltaire,” Ray said, hoping he was helping.
“Right. This is making sense now,” Hilary said.
“But isn’t the Blitzkrieg Boyz related to Biovolt too?” Daichi asked.
“Already captured?” Tyson suggested.
“Or did they choose to be on their side?” Max asked.
“Or maybe they aren’t wanted,” Kenny said. “Look here guys.” He pointed to his laptop. “Nicole can take out Ming Ming with one attack, and Ming Ming’s a pro blader. We all know Kai is very strong and has made it to the finals on many occasions. But I’m not sure about DC. How strong is he?”
“Out of all of us? Probably second after Nicole,” Diana said.
“Yeah, that’d be right. He is really strong though,” Voke said.
“So Biovolt has taken our strongest beybladers?” Max asked.
“Yeah, looks like it,” Kenny replied.
“Where is Biovolt?” Hilary asked. “We could brake in and rescue them. How hard could it be?”
“Too hard for a girl anyway,” Tyson remarked. Diana and Chelsea turned their heads so their annoyed eyes faced Tyson.
“What did you say?” Chelsea asked in a flat tone.
“Never mind,” Tyson mumbled.
“I’ve found Biovolt’s location,” Kenny said.
“Well what are we waiting for?” Eddie asked. “Let’s go!”
“They went outside and started to run in the direction that Kenny was giving them.
“And stop here,” he said. They were in the middle of the town.
“Why here?” Diana asked.
“Bus. We can’t walk or run to where we need to go.” A bus pulled up and gave them a free ride (because they were so popular) and they found themselves having to walk up a steep hill.
“You have got to be kidding,” Max said.
“Um, Max, you’re apparently standing in Biovolt. Or should I say, on?” Kenny said as he looked at the computer screen.
“It’s underground?” Diana asked.
“But Nicole said it was a big building on a flat bit of ground far away from where we were. Somewhere in Russia,” Voke said.
“This must be a new one. The old one must be in Russia,” Ray said.
“But Kai said it got destroyed,” Tyson said.
“I’m sitting down, it’s getting hot,” Ray said and walked over to a tree and sat in it’s shade. Immediately, a hole in the hill opened. Ray jumped up with shock and the others laughed.
“C’mon, lets go,” Eddie said when he had finished laughing.

Chapter 7: Split Up
As the team entered the hole, they could only see metal walls, ceiling and floor, leading into the hill. It finally split into two.
“Okay, who’s taking the left?” Hilary asked.
“We will,” Diana and Chelsea said at the same time.
“Me and Voke’ll take the right,” Eddie said.
“Left,” Ray said.
“Right,” Hilary said because she liked Eddie. She liked the rest of the band too, but Eddie the most.
“I’ll take the left,” Tyson said. “I don’t want to be with Hilary.”
“I’ll go left too,” Max said. “I’ll stick with Tyson.”
“I’ll go right,” Kenny said.
“Right,” Daichi said and looked at his ‘team’. He wasn’t with Tyson, so that was a relief. “See ya’s later.”
The ‘teams’ split and took their separate ways. Left led up and right led down. But the ‘left team’ came across a problem. Once again, the passage split in two.
“I’ll go left again,” Diana said.
“I’ll go right this time,” Chelsea said and stood over at the right side of the tunnel.
“Uh, I am going, right,” Tyson said.
“I’ll go left,” Ray said. “Max, where are you going?”
“Right,” he said and walked off in the right tunnel with Tyson and Chelsea following.
The ‘right team’ came across the same problem, a split in the path.
“Left,” Daichi called out.
“I’ll go left too,” Voke said.
“Right,” Eddie said.
“Yep, right,” Hilary said.
“And I’ll go, left,” Kenny said. “Sorry Hilary.”
“It’s fine. Don’t worry,” she said and walked off right. She wanted it to be like this anyway. The teams traveled in their new groups. Ray and Diana kept on walking while Ray tried to break the silence between them. He had chose left both times because of Diana.
“Did you hear that?” she asked him.
“What?” Ray replied. The echoes of screams rang down to them.
“It’s Nicole!” Diana cried, so happy that she was going to get her out of this place. She started to run down the passage, but Ray held her back.
“There’s most likely to be guards here. We should be quite and careful, okay?” Diana’s eyes widened.
“Guards?”
“Yes. There is most likely is around the whole building. We will rescue her okay, but we have to be very careful, okay?” Ray asked.
“Yes. I understand.” Diana wanted to hurry and get her, but she knew Ray was right. “Why did you come with me for both choices?”
“Think about it,” Ray replied, and kissed her on her cheek. They moved slowly down the passage and came to a line of doors. As they moved down the line, the cries became louder. They turned a corner and ran straight into a guard.

Chapter 8: Hi Kai
Tyson, Chelsea and Max moved down the passageway. They could hear a thumping noise. It grew louder as they went down the passage.
“Who’s banging?” Max asked. A growl echoed down to them.
“Kai,” Tyson said. “No doubt.”
They ran down the passageway and saw a room where the thumping was definitely coming from. Kai growled again and banged at the door, trying to force it open. Chelsea grabbed the keys that were hooked onto the wall. She turned the key and opened the door. Kai lunged at her, thinking that she was a guard. Tyson and Max pulled him off her.
“Whoops,” Kai said. Max grabbed the other set of keys from the hook and took the handcuffs off him. Kai grunted as an approval.
“You could at least say thanks,” Tyson commented.
“Thanks,” Kai said.
“Where do we go now?” Chelsea asked.
“Control room. We can shut down everything, free DC and Nicole and get the hell out of here,” Kai replied and walked down a hallway. “Follow me. I bet it’s down here.” They all followed him and saw a door with a sign on it saying ‘CONTROL ROOM’.
“Bulls eye,” Max said and tried to open it. “Locked.”
“Keys,” Kai said and pointed to the ceiling. There was the key hanging from the ceiling. He jumped up, but couldn’t reach it.
“Damn,” he muttered. All of a sudden, they heard voices becoming louder as the people came closer.
“Run,” Chelsea whispered. They ran silently down the passage and turned into the dark passage that the three had come in through. The guards stopped at the ‘CONTROL ROOM’ and looked up.
“No one’s fallen for it yet,” one said. This voice was a boy’s about 15, like the team.
“Not yet,” said a female voice. She also sounded about 15.
“Ming Ming,” Chelsea said. “She’s a guard?”
“Shut up, you’ll give us away,” hissed Kai. The masked guards walked straight past them and turned a corner.
“Phew, they didn’t catch us,” Tyson said.
“What did they mean, ‘no one’s fallen for it yet’?” Max asked.
“The Control Room, it must be a fake room!” Chelsea thought out loud. “They must have wanted to trap anyone inside if they got out!”
“Hm, you are probably correct. We need to get out of here soon. At least out of this part of the building. More guards are around here. Let’s go,” Kai said and moved out of the tunnel and continued the way that he had wanted to go before. They moved swiftly and soon heard footsteps. They realized they were in a hallway where there was no door to exit the hall. They all ran back until they came across a door. They tried and tried to open it, but it didn’t shift. The figures came around the corner. The four gasped. They couldn’t believe their eyes.

Chapter 9: Here He Is
Daichi, Kenny and Voke finally saw that there path had taken them to a dead end. A bulky rock stood in their way.
“What? You’ve got to be kidding me!” Daichi said, stunned that he was led to a dead end.
“No, we’re not, Daichi,” Kenny said. He stood there staring at the rock.
“We could try to move it,” Voke suggested. “It might move and lead us somewhere.”
“Okay,” Kenny said and got up to move it. He failed, and asked Daichi for help.
“Fine,” he replied, went over and pushed.
“Okay, you guys need help,” Voke said as he walked over. With his help, they managed to move the rock. But they only found a door.
“A door?” Kenny said, obviously confused.
“Yeah, a door,” Voke said and pushed it open slightly. “No one’s here, just a big chair and heaps of doors.” He opened it more and stepped into the room. The other two followed him inside. They chose the door that faced the big chair and just about went through. They stopped because Voke saw a guard sitting on a chair reading a big novel. Banging noises started up from a room close to the guard.
“Shut up!” he yelled at the noise.
“No!” DC’s voice shouted from inside the room.
“Don’t make me come in there!” the masked guard yelled back.
“I will!” DC shouted back. The guard stood up as the pounding continued. He grabbed the keys out of his pocket and turned it in the lock. He opened the door and DC kicked him hard in the guts.
“Now!” Voke said and ran out to help his friend. Kenny and Daichi ran out too, Kenny looking around for guards, Daichi tying up the guard and Voke taking off the handcuffs off DC. Daichi gagged the guard and they took off in search of the others, glad that they had rescued their friend. Unexpectedly, the alarm went off and the boys dived into a room, but it wasn’t exactly a room they wanted to be in.

Chapter 10: Control Room
Hilary and Eddie walked down further and further. Their tunnel went down and down.
“This is pathetic,” Hilary said. “We’ve been walking for ages and we still haven’t found anyth-“ and she fell. She fell down a long tube, like a slide, but only bigger. She heard Eddie call out her name. She hit a soft landing and stood up. Eddie came speeding down the ‘tube’ and landed next to her.
“Where are we?” Hilary asked him as she looked around.
“Dunno,” Eddie replied and flicked a switch up. Lights came on and computer screens flickered and turned on. They both took a seat at one computer.
“I’ve got the security of the left wing,” Hilary said. “What have you got?”
“I’ve got control of electronic locks.” He moved to another computer. “Here is the security of the right wing.” Hilary also moved to another.
“Here is a big room with a chair and lots of doors. There is like, 5 cameras in this room. Weird,” she said and moved onto another one. “Here’s the outside, where we were before. There’s a camera in the tree Ray sat under. Don’t you think they would have seen us entering?”
“Well they didn’t did they?” Eddie replied. “Hey look! It’s Kai, Tyson, Max and Chelsea!” Hilary came over to him.
“Where are they?” Hilary asked eagerly.
”Left wing,” he replied.
“Here’s a guard tied up and gagged. That is weird,” Hilary said. “It’s in the right wing, so it must have been Daichi, Kenny and Voke.”
“I can’t find anyone else. Where are they?”
“I don’t know.” Hilary said and pushed a button, hoping it would turn on the microphone so she could talk to her friends. It didn’t though. It turned on the alarm.
“What was that for?” Eddie yelled over the alarm.
“It was an accident!” she screamed.
“What?”
“IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!” she roared loudly. He nodded his head to show he understood. She kept on pressing the button, trying to make it stop, but it didn’t work. She could see her friends running, and looking confused.
“C’mon Hilary. We need to get out of here. Guards could turn up here any moment now!” he said as he flicked the switch again. The lights went off and the computers turned off and the alarm went off.
“Hey, it went off. Should we stay?” Hilary asked.
“No. It’s probably not safe here anymore.” Eddie went around in the dark looking for the door he had seen.
“You learnt that in the streets, right?”
“Yeah, I did. Ah, here it is! Lets go!” he said as he opened the door. She followed.
“Lets go to the left wing. We might find our friends,” Hilary stated.
“You mean your friends and my friend,” Eddie corrected her. “But yeah, we should. It might be better if we stay together as much as possible.” They went up and up through the tunnel and up into a room made up of steel walls.
“Great. There’s doors with labels on them directing us to the wings!” Hilary exclaimed. “The left wing is where we want to go isn’t it?”
“Yep. Lets go,” Eddie said and pushed the door open and ran into the darkness.

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   Fifth Chapter
Well hello guys! I've been really busy lately, but still typing.
I know you want it, so here it is!

Chapter 5: Old Friends
The boys and girl sat down on the floor, wondering why it was them. Why they were the only ones bought here. Kai constantly asked Nicole for her story, but she refused to tell each time he asked. Later on, that very night, someone was talking outside that room. The three could recognise Boris’ voice, but only Nicole recognized the other voice. It was Brooklyn’s voice, her psychic rival. The door opened again, and a masked figure stepped in. She knew this one was Brooklyn.
“Brooklyn, so nice to see you. Your blade okay after I broke it?” she asked.
“Nice to see you too. Get up,” the figure that was Brooklyn replied. Nicole didn’t budge and Brooklyn heaved her up. She tried to fight, but with her hands cuffed behind her back, she wasn’t really a match for him. He pulled her out of the room and slammed the door behind him. Soon after, Kai’s grandfather came in and ordered a guard to take Kai out. He also wouldn’t go without a fight, but soon lost because of his hands being cuffed. DC was left alone until the next morning. As soon as light shined through the window, DC woke up and remembered where he was. He also remembered that some guards had taken Kai and Nicole away. The door opened again and a guard came in. DC fought and managed to get the mask off. He gasped in horror of who he saw. His old friend when he was at Biovolt, Mystel.
Nicole was taken to a different room and had a guard set on her. She was surprised too when she managed to pull off the mask off her guard. It was Garland, her old friend at Biovolt. They had been through a lot together, but she never thought that he would come after her.
Kai had to put up a fight the next morning too and had realized some of the fighting techniques. Could it be? He ripped off the mask and found someone he thought would be on his side. It was Tala. As amazed and horrified as he was, he backed off. He needed to think about this. Tala? They’d been friends for a long time, and he knew Tala hated Boris too, or did he lie to find information about him? The three ‘guards’ or, old friends, quickly left as they recognized that they had been caught out. But the other three were shocked. How could their old friends betray them?

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Wednesday, May 4, 2005

   Fourth Chapter
Already I am going to post the next chapter. I really like all of my friends that have added their comments. Did I say I'm up to Chapter 19? Everyone have a great day!

Chapter 4: Back To Biovolt
“Where am I?” Nicole asked herself as she woke up. All she could remember was fighting people in black clothes and black masks. She heard a groan from behind her and turned to see Kai waking up. She also saw her friend, DC, lying next to Kai, still unconscious.
“What happened?” he asked her.
“How am I supposed to know? I got knocked out and I’ve woken up here,” she snapped back. Kai stood up and walked around the room.
“Well there’s one door that won’t budge, one window with metal bars across it and the room is completely empty.” DC started to groan and wake up.
“Ow! The back of my head hurts! Whoa! Where are we?” DC asked as he looked around the room.
“We don’t know yet,” Kai said. Suddenly there was the sound of footsteps and the sound of a key turning in the lock. The door opened and guards rushed in and cuffed all three of them after they had put up a fight. The masked guards led them down a few long corridors and into a large room where there was a big chair turned away from them and lots of shut doors. The guards stopped.
“Well, well, well, if it isn’t DC, Kai and Nicole. Thought you might drop by and pay me a visit?” A mysterious voice said, but the three recognised it instantly.
“Boris,” they all muttered at the same time.
“Correct,” Boris said and spun the chair around so that he was facing them. He stood up and walked towards them. “Since you three have become tougher bladers, I thought that you might want to thank me for all of my help by joining my new team.”
“Never,” Nicole said and started to struggle, but the guards didn’t let go. “Didn’t you get my message, or did Ming Ming not bother to pass it on?”
“Oh, yes I did. But I will make you change your mind. And I will change yours too DC. Kai, your grandfather will take care of you for now, I’m sure he’ll torture you.”
“My grandfather tortures me enough already, he can’t do worse,” Kai said. He was amazed with himself for even saying this remark.
“And DC, the illusion chamber’s improved. You won’t escape this time,” Boris said.
“I’m improved too, you know,” DC said. Now was his chance, and he knew it. Kicking the guards forcefully, he managed to slide out of their grip. He freed Nicole and Kai and opened the door and they ran out. Boris hit the alarm button and, of course, the alarm went off.
The three were running down a long passageway when Kai asked, “Can you tell me the story now?”
“No! I said you’ll know when the time is right,” Nicole replied and kept on running.
“Hey guys, through here,” DC said as he stopped and pushed a door open with his shoulder. They had entered another passage and kept on running. It led them to yet another door, but it was locked. They could hear footsteps coming after them. Six figures dressed in black wearing masks came and grabbed them and led them back to the room where they had woken up in. They chucked them in and locked the door.
“So, does anyone know where we are yet?” Nicole asked.
“We’re in-“ DC began.
“Biovolt,” Kai finished.

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   Here We Go!
Uh, what to say...
Well I'm up to Chapter 19 now. I've really enjoyed the parts of stories I've had sent to me. They are really great! I guess you want the next chapter? Well if you haven't read the first and/or second, read them first (below this one). Please comment or PM me about my story.

Chapter 3: Dinner Attack
Everyone made it to the dinner and Ray, Kai and Nicole weren’t talking to each other, though Kai was shooting glares at everyone who looked at him once. Nicole left early after barely eating anything. The rest of her friends continued to eat and acted like she was still there.
“Doesn’t she want dessert?” Tyson asked with his mouth half full.
“She always stays to eat dessert, but I guess she’s just having an off-day,” Chelsea replied.
“It’s mine!” Daichi shouted.
“No, I had it first!” Tyson yelled back at him. As they continued to argue, Kai reached over and grabbed the meat and ate it himself. When the boys realized it had gone, the started to search for it.
“Okay who took my meat?” Daichi asked.
“It isn’t yours dumbo!” Tyson said back. “It’s mine!”
“I ate it, so shut up,” Kai said as he grabbed a bit of food from Ray’s plate when he was talking to Voke. Nicole entered the room again and asked DC for a word. She knew he would understand, as he usually does.
“What do you want?” he asked her.
“Well, some of us are in trouble.”
“Did you-“
“Yeah, another one. We have to be careful. It’s gonna happen in a few minutes.”
“Do you know how it turns out?”
“No, but when Tyson starts to shout ‘Daichi’s a loser,’ be ready.”
“I got it,” DC said as he went back to the table. Nicole sighed and wished it wouldn’t happen and took her place at the table.
“Where did you go?” Eddie asked her. She didn’t reply with words, but with hand gestures.
“Oh, right. Thanks.” Her friends had seen it too. They nodded.
“Street talk?” Max asked.
“Yeah, you could say that,” Nicole said.
“Daichi you loser! Hey, new chant! Daichi’s a looooooser! Daichi’s a loooooooser! Daichi’s a loooooser! Daichi’s a loooooooser!” DC glanced at Nicole. From behind them, the glass shattered and figures in black clothing and masks appeared.
“Boris,” whispered Nicole and DC as they stood up and faced them.
“Bring it on!” Nicole shouted and pulled a thick, metal pole out of her back. It was bigger than her and shined silver. DC did the same and the lounged at the humans standing where the class was shattered. Eddie sprung into action, pulling his pole out too and joined in the fight.
“Diana, Chelsea, the girl figures, now!” Nicole yelled as she dodged an attack. The girl figures realized she was being targeted and moved away from the glass carefully. Voke pulled out a pole from his back and whacked the male figure that had pinned Eddie.
“Thanks man,” Eddie said and started to fight off another one, using the pole to defend and attack. Meanwhile many bands had run away from the disaster, but the boys and Hilary hadn’t. They decided to try and help if they could.
“Can we help?” Ray asked Nicole as she ran past to help Chelsea and Diana.
“Fight is all you can do right now, and I don’t know if you guys are able to be at this kind of high level that we are fighting at,” she said and did a back flip to dodge yet another attack. She hit the female figure with her pole and she fell backwards moaning in pain. Another male figure came and struck her on her back. She fell in pain and shock. Ray, Tyson, Max and Daichi all began to try and fight, but Ray and Tyson were really the only ones that could help because he could jump really high and dodge the attacks while Tyson attacked. Their male figure fell quickly and they moved onto another one. One male figure hit Kai forcefully in the back of his head, knocking him out, and carried him away. Others copied him and knocked out Nicole and DC and carried them away. And when they awoke, the found themselves in a place they never wanted to be in again.

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Friday, April 29, 2005

   Third Chapter
Just thought you guys might want to know, the third chapter will be the next thing I post. Thanks to everyone who has commented on my story so far.
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Thursday, April 28, 2005

   Chapter 2
I am going to post the second chapter now. And I am up to Chapter 14 now. I'd love it you commented on it. Thanks.
Here it is:


Chapter 2: Backstage
“So you’re the lucky ones eh? C’mon through.” Josh led them down a corridor and turned right. “Okay. Here are their rooms. Choose the band you wanna see, knock and go in. You can check out as many as you want to, but remember we’ll be outa here at quarter to midnight. So you’ve got about 3 hours. Oh yeah, there’ll be an all you can eat dinner in 2 hours. Have fun!” and he left.
“Yum!” Tyson said.
“Okay, I’ll see ya’s soon. I’m going to The Thuganomics. They rock and no other bands here are really that good,” Hilary said. “Anyone coming with me?”
“No way. Ming Ming is my pick,” Kenny said.
“I’ll go,” said Ray. “How ‘bout you Tyson? Max? Daichi? Kai?”
“Yeah, okay. See ya chief,” said Tyson as Kenny walked down to Ming Ming’s room.
“I’ll come,” Max said.
“Me too,” Daichi agreed.
“Suppose so,” Kai said and followed them to The Thuganomics room. Hilary knocked and entered the room, followed by the others.
“Yeah, and did you see the look on Ming Ming’s face when she saw her blade at her feet?” the blonde girl Diana asked. She laughed along with the rest.
“Oh, hi! You guys must have won the backstage passes,” Chelsea said. She was the only dark person in the group. Her curly black hair fell to her waist and she flicked it back.
“Yes, that’s us,” Hilary said. You could tell she was excited and nervous.
“C’mon Hilary, chill. We aren’t gonna hurt ya or anything like that!” Nicole said.
“How do stars like you know my name?” she asked.
“Well Hilary, we went to the same primary school ages ago. I left soon after I started, but we were, like, best buds, remember? Any way, I see you on T.V. when you watch your friends beyblade,” Nicole replied.
“Oh yeah! I never knew you were her! Wow! I used to be best friends with a famous superstar!”
“Okay Hilary, breathe, it’s no big deal,” Tyson said, once again, sarcastically.
“Yes it is. She’s like, one of the biggest star in Hollywood for crying out loud!” she shouted and started to argue with Tyson.
“Isn’t there six of you?” Max asked.
”Yup. DC went somewhere,” Eddie replied. As soon as he finished saying that, the door opened and DC came in. He walked right through Hilary and Tyson, pushing them to the ground as he went past. The funny thing that happened though was that no one said anything at all.
“So, do you guys want autographs or something?” Voke asked.
“Um, yeah, sure,” Daichi said.
“Any posters or pictures, items of clothing or something that you want signed?” Eddie asked.
“Yeah,” said Tyson. “My butt.” At this remark The Thuganomics cracked up. Everyone apart from Kai joined in.
“You are joking, right?” Chelsea asked.
“Do I look like it?”
“Not really,” Diana said. “But I’m not signing anyone’s butt!”
“Me neither,” Voke agreed.
“Can you sign my cap then?” Tyson asked hopefully.
“Yeah, sure. Just don’t ask us to sign your butt again, okay?” Nicole said as she grabbed the cap and signed it. She passed it around and everyone signed it.
“Here,” DC said and chucked the cap onto Tyson’s head. It landed perfectly on his head. “One signed cap.”
“Anything else?” Diana asked.
“Yeah, a drink would be real nice,” Daichi said.
“Don’t be rude. You can wait until the dinner,” Ray said and nudged him.
“Don’t sweat it little man! I’ll get some drinks for you all. Take a seat too,” Eddie said and left the room in search of drinks. They all sat down between the five members of The Thuganomics still leaving room for Eddie for when he came back.
“Since when did you guys beyblade? With talent like that, Nicole, you could probably beat us!” Ray asked.
“Thanks Ray. We’ve been blading since we could. On the streets, you really have to steal stuff, so most of beyblades that we had on the streets were stolen.” Nicole answered. She knew that DC could spill the beans any minute now. She didn’t really want too many people knowing one of her deepest secrets. Eddie entered the room with enough drinks for everyone. They all grabbed a glass each and drank it.
“Hey Voke,” Max said.
“Yeah?”
“Where did you get your name from?”
“It’s a street name. Some of my mates had weird names too. One was called Arvicallied. We called him Arvi for short though. The Arvicallied Ally is the place where he was left alone, so he got called that.”
“Cool,” Max said.
“Hope you don’t mind me talking for a change, but what did you mean by tell Boris you’re back?” Kai asked. Everyone was amazed because he had just spoken for the first time in front of them.
“Long story.” Nicole’s answer was short, like she didn’t want to talk about it.
“Don’t care. Talk. I can miss dinner if it takes that long.”
“Man you are eager. But I still won’t say it. It’s personal and secret, but one day you will hear it.”
“I won’t wait!” Kai said and stood up. “Anything to do with Boris concerns me! Last time I was with him was enough torture! Tell me now-“
“Shut up Kai!” Ray shouted. Kai glared at him. Then Kai took a shot at him, his fist making contact with Ray’s stomach. Ray fell and Nicole kicked him from behind him. Kai fell too. She bent down to Kai.
“You’ll know when the time is right,” she said, stood up and walked out.


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Tuesday, April 26, 2005

   Changed & Charecters
I've changed my mind. I'll just post the chapters. I'm up to Chapter 12 so far. Next post will be dedicated to Chapter 2. Thanks everyone who has given me great coments about my first chapter. I'm still going and far from finished. It is called BEYBLADE G-REV REWRITTEN. The charecter Nicole relates to me, Diana my friend, Eddie my big bro, Chelsea my big sis, and DC and Voke are made up. Hope you enjoy the second one when it is posted!
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   NEW!!!!!
I have more new chapters! I'm on a role! I've had heaps of comments from friends. Thank you, they have inspired me to keep on writing! I'll soon post the second Chapter, so friends, you will get it first, but you can wait until I post it if you want.
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Monday, April 25, 2005

   The First Chapter
I have it in a different font and size, but you can't see it here. Hope you like it.

Here it is:

I don’t own Beyblade, but I do own Nicole, DC, Diana, Chelsea, Eddie and Voke. None of this has really happened, I have just rewritten Beyblade G-Revolution. Just enjoy
Beyblade G-Rev
Rewritten





Chapter 1: Singing Bladers
“C’mon guys, the stage is over this way,” said the brown haired boy with glasses and his laptop that he never left behind.
“Maybe we don’t wanna go,” said Daichi, a red haired 12 year old.
“How come I’m here?” murmured Kai, the leader of the team, who was basically always moody.
“Because you get to see heaps of your favourite bands perform. This is going to rock!” exclaimed the blonde boy, Max, as he handed their tickets over.
“Yeah, I know! Can’t wait for The Thuganomics, though. They rule!” a blue haired boy Tyson said as he sat down.
“For once I agree with you Tyson,” Hilary said.
“So do I,” Ray said, a tall, black haired boy.
“And Ming Ming will rock!” Kenny said.
“No she won’t!” everyone shouted, including Kai, who barely said anything.
“Welcome to Bands That Rock Your World! I am Josh, your announcer for this night!” he said through a microphone. “First off, we’ll have The Crazy Boyz rock you outa this world! Here they are! Introducing to you, Cedric, Dan, Adam and Gary!” The Crazy Boyz walked onstage and soon started to play their hit single, Believe In Me.
Many more bands played and after about 1 hour, Josh said, “ And next up is Ming Ming! Give her a round of applause!” Ming Ming walked onstage. She sang, thanked the crowd for their applause and walked off the stage.
“And now, last but not least, they have soared high, taking the Number 1 spot from Ming Ming, they are, The Thuganomics! Nicole, Chelsea, Diana, Eddie, Voke and DC!” Everyone cheered as all 6 of them walked on the stage. Even Kai managed a few claps and also managed to open his eyes to watch.
“Did you clap Kai?” Ray asked.
“Humph,” he replied and fixed his eyes onto The Thuganomics. As they sang Razzle Dazzle, everyone clapped to the beat and before you knew it, the song was over.
“Thank you, thanks guys,” their leader Nicole said, just as Ming Ming walked onto the stage.
“You call that singing? Why that’s a disgrace to the ‘word sing’,” she said.
“Well you see Ming Ming, a true singer can see what the audience likes, and what they don’t like. People these days are into Hip Hop and the style that we have, so get stuffed,” Nicole replied.
“Why you-.“
“No need to thank me. I’m only doing what’s right for you.”
“Cat fight,” Ray said.
“Hey, she’s like Hilary!” Tyson said and Hilary just ignored it.
“I’m not thanking you, if you had brains you might realize that.”
“Brains? Excuse me! I’m a straight A student!” Nicole fired back.
“Like I care,” Ming Ming said as she rolled her eyes. Nicole launched herself at Ming Ming, but DC held her back.
“Fight through Beyblading. You can destroy her and her blade while you’re at it,” he said.
“Fine,” she said and whipped out her launched, ripcord and beyblade out of nowhere and was ready to fight. Ming Ming did the same and they were off.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” they both shouted.
“Cool! A beyblade match and bands playing hit singles in the one night! Wicked!” said Max as he stood up to get a better look. The rest copied and could see that they were talking, not actually Beyblading. Until Ming Ming made the first move. She hit Nicole her strongest attacks, but didn’t succeed in even moving Nicole’s blade.
“What!?” Ming Ming said.
“Drydzia, finish this now!” Nicole said and her beyblade moved towards Ming Ming’s and hit it once. Ming Ming’s blade went flying through the air and landed at her feet. She fell, obviously hurt.
“Whoops, I went far too easy on you Ming Ming. Guess you aren’t a professional blader, like you say you are,” Nicole said as she walked over to her. “Tell Boris I’m back, and better than ever, and there isn’t one single thing that he can do to make me join him again.” She held up her hand and her beyblade flew into it and walked off the stage. The rest of The Thuganomics followed.
“And that is all for tonight folks!” said Josh. “Goodnight and have a happy weekend!”
“Finally, it’s over,” Kai said.
“Not quite. We’ve won those backstage passes remember?” Kenny said. “I get to meet Ming Ming!”
“I wonder if she’ll sign your butt,” Tyson said sarcastically and everyone apart from Kai laughed. They walked along to the side stage where Josh was waiting for them.
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