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Wednesday, May 18, 2005


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HI!!! I thought that you just might want to know, that I have new chapters ready for you right now! You want the next ones? Here they are:

Chapter 20: Say Goodbye
“Well we do have to say bye to White Tiger X, The PPB All Starz, The Majestics and The Blitzkrieg Boyz! That leaves us with only four teams competing! Join us tomorrow for the next rounds! But before I go, I’ll leave you with a few hits! DJ hit it! Bye everyone!” Zap’s voice was sad, but also happy. This Love by Maroon 5 played and Ray looked at his former team to see how they were coping.
“Just fine,” he murmured to himself. He looked at Tyson who was so glad they had made it. Hilary was ignoring him and walking away. Kenny followed her, and Max, Ray and Daichi left too, leaving Tyson all alone. When he realised, he ran after them. The Thuganomics laughed at their performance and left too. F-Dynasty, pleased that they still got to compete, left after The Thuganomics, who were arguing with each other. Team Bega talked and then also exited. Boris decided to have a chat outside with his team.
“See, I knew you wouldn’t let me down. Especially you two Nicole and Garland. Nice work. We’ll win this in no time.”
”No, I’m sick of this already!” Nicole shouted suddenly. No one expected her to do that. “I’m leaving this team! It sucks, and it’s on the wrong side!”
“But you signed the paper. Once you sign, you can’t swap teams. Only ones that haven’t signed are able to enter a team,” Hiro commented.
“Ah, that’s where you’re wrong. I didn’t sign my signature. It was fake. I can join another team, and beat the crap out of you!” With that comment, she walked away to find The Thuganomics, her friends.
“Ditto,” DC said and ran off after her.
“Oh well, at least Kai didn’t do that. You would never do that, would you Kai?” Boris questioned eagerly.
“Think again, stupid,” Kai answered and walked off to find BBA Revolution, one team he knew he fitted in. Kind of fitted in. Nicole and DC sneaked up on their friends who were chitchatting with BBA Revolution and surprised them by jumping out from the corner and shouting boo really loud. Everyone jumped as they did that.
“Got ya’s!” Nicole screamed and burst into a fit of laughing. DC laughed too and Kai came around the corner too, not laughing like usual.
“How come you guys came back? The rules don’t allow that!” Chelsea asked impatiently.
“We faked our signatures, easy to do, and we can join your team now,” DC explained quickly.
“And Kai is with us?” Tyson asked Kai and looked at him.
“Well I guess so. I’m not a stupid thug you know.” He chose the wrong reply. All of the three boy thugs started to fight Kai, three onto one. One thing they couldn’t stand was being called a stupid thug.
“Oh shit,” Diana said and ran towards the four boys. She grabbed Voke and tried to get him to stop fighting Kai. Chelsea grabbed DC and Nicole Eddie.
“Control yourselves guys,” Diana said, clearly embarrassed as she embraced Voke to stop him from attacking Kai again. Kai clearly looked pissed off. Ray helped Kai up and let go of him as soon as he was up.
“Thank God you guys are back!” Voke said as he shared a ‘manly hug’ as he called it with DC.
“Yeah we’d lose with out ya’s,” Diana said.
“No you wouldn’t!”
”You guys were on a role without us!” Nicole said.
“Imagine with those two in their team now!” Max exclaimed.
“We’re really glad your back,” Eddie said smiling at Nicole and kissed her on her cheek.
“Gee I feel really special now,” she joked and slapped him hard across the face. “Not!” Everyone laughed (apart from Kai who remained silent).

Chapter 21: Thoughts

Nicole’s Thoughts
I had just ditched Team Bega and joined The Thuganomics. I felt better. I was with my old friends again. It took a while, but I had out smarted Boris. We were joking around and the boys got in a fight with Kai. I had to pull Eddie off, because Chelsea had DC and Diana Voke. I so think that Diana and Voke are together. Eddie gave me a kiss on the cheek. I was stunned and made a joke out of it. And slapped him (whoops!). He really must like me.

Eddie’s Thoughts:
I was so happy that Nicole and DC had joined our team again. I don’t know what I would have done with out them. We were joking around, laughing and stuff, and Kai called us stupid thugs. I was really annoyed, and I can go into more detail, but I won’t. I went after him and got held back by a girl! So embarrassing! I was glad that no one laughed at the time. I was over joyed that Nicole was back and kissed her. She laughed and made it into a joke. I wonder if she knows I like her?

Kai’s Thoughts:
Boris was getting on my nerves, really annoying me, and I agreed to sign a fake signature so I could join another team. DC’s idea was great. It worked too. We left Team Bega and joined a different team. They did anyway. I wanted to join The Blitzkrieg Boyz, but they had been eliminated from the Championships. I wondered what team I should join, and thought I could only really join BBA Revolution. Nicole and DC joined The Thuganomics again; I knew they would though. It was so obvious. I called them stupid thugs and the three boys started to, well, fight me. I was losing; three onto one, and the three girls pulled them away. I was so pissed off then. Eddie got gross with Nicole. I consider one kiss on the cheek gross. I kind of felt jealous, I was kind of developing crushes lately, but on Diana at the moment. I realised I might be moving on. But I always thought that Nicole wasn’t really beautiful, but never ugly. What am I thinking?! I hate girls! Aaargh!

DC’s Thoughts:
We had fooled them! It felt great too! Really, it did. Nicole and me walked to find our friends, and soon found them. Kai was following us; I knew that. He seemed to know that BBA Revolution was with our team. We were celebrating, joking around and Kai turned up, called us stupid, and I guess I couldn’t control myself. I tried to, but it didn’t work. I lunged at him and started to fight him. Voke and Eddie joined in too. He looked really scared, but tried to get us away from him. When the girls held us back (very embarrassing, girls!!!), Kai got up and looked really irritated. I realised what I had done. Total whoops. That’s what Chelsea would say. She was holding me back. Eddie did something I would never do (I don’t think I would any way). He went straight to Nicole and kissed her. She slapped him in reply. Don’t blame her though. She said she doesn’t like like him, just like him. She had made it into a joke, so I laughed along with everyone else, apart from Kai, who never seems to find anything funny. I wonder when he will.

Tyson’s Thoughts:
Believe it or not, but Kai has just returned to our team! Yes! We won’t lose now! DC and Nicole have decides to bi in The Thuganomics now. I’m glad they did. Now they can make Team Bega lose! We’d do that anyway, but they can help I guess. Kai called our new friend stupid thugs, so the boys made him pay! It was quite funny to watch, but if I was Kai, I would be really scared! Those three guys look really strong! They must work out! Eddie made me witness my first boy/girl kiss. Couldn’t believe it. Poor Nicole though, Eddie doesn’t deserve her. Maybe I should ask her to go out with… Whoops, don’t go there Tyson! Concentrate!

Diana’s Thoughts:
Nicole and DC are back! They faked their signatures, so they can join our team! But Kai is such an idiot! He called us stupid thugs! We’re not stupid! He is though for messing with us! The three boys went after him and attacked him. Go guys! We had to get them off though. I grabbed Voke and pulled him away. I really like him. Ray helped Kai up, but as soon as he was up, he moved away from him. I think Ray likes me. Eddie kissed Nicole on the cheek. She slapped him back. He really likes her. Pity she likes someone else though. They would look quite good together I reckon. I don’t know if I should tell Nicole about Voke’s relationship with me. She would understand right? What should I do? I know, I’ll tell her tonight.

Chapter 22: I Would Have Never Guessed
“What!?” Nicole screamed after Diana explained.
“You guys okay?” Chelsea asked.
“Fine!” Diana replied positively.
“I would have never guessed that! Man! You could have told me earlier you know,” Nicole said quieter.
“Sorry I upset you, but I thought you would understand me!” Diana screamed back at her.
“I do understand Diana. I’m just shocked. I’m really sorry I yelled.” Nicole felt really bad.
“Yeah, same.” Diana agreed to make up.
“So how long have you two been together?” Nicole asked eagerly. She really wanted to know more.
“A few months I guess,” was Diana’s reply.
“Wow you’re good at hiding things!” Nicole exclaimed. “So that’s why you guys disappeared! You were going out!”
“Yeah, of course! We went sometimes when someone else disappeared too, so it wasn’t obvious.” Diana was amazed that no one had realised that they were together.
“How far have you been?”
“Not that far!” Diana retorted. “A few kisses I guess, but not that far!”
“C’mon, lets go and watch some T.V.” Nicole suggested and walked out of the girls’ bedroom. Diana followed and sat down on the couch next to Voke.
‘So obvious that was coming,’ Nicole thought and sat down too, as far way from Eddie as possible.
*Next Morning*
The Thuganomics got up, did the obvious, and were soon ready to go back to beyblade, this time with DC and Nicole on their team, not against them. They met up with BBA Revolution at the stadium. They were new friends and were really happy they had The Thuganomics as friends. Even Kai was, but he didn’t show it.
“Hi guys!” Max had yelled when he saw them arrive. The six had walked over and been really friendly, like Kai hadn’t just been beaten up yesterday.
“Ready to lose?” DC asked.
“No, you?” Daichi replied.
“We never lose okay?” Diana said.
“No, that’s not okay. You’re gonna lose,” Ray said.
“Ha ha, really funny,” Chelsea said to him.
“C’mon guys, we’ll be late!” Kenny said and hurried his team to the door. The Thuganomics went after the others and took their seats again. This time, there were only four benches and they were bigger too. The other two teams were there already.
“Welcome back everyone! We will have two matches today! Three rounds of head to head beyblading! Mr D has announced to me that Team Bega and F-Dynasty will have three points each! Lets hope that today F-Dynasty will be able to battle!” Zap’s voice startled a few people and a man walked up and passed her a hat. “I will now draw two random team names from this hat and they will go against each other! Here we go!” She reached inside the hat and pulled out a piece of paper. “It looks like Team Bega are going to be first!” She placed her hand in again and pulled out another one. “The Thuganomics will face Team Bega, right here, right now!” Boris looked anxious now, but the six thugs looked absolutely fine.
“Right lets go guys! Who first?” Nicole asked.
“Me,” Diana suggested.
“I would have never guessed! Not! Be careful though, it’s Garland you’re facing,” Nicole said. Garland hadn’t even stood up or moved. Boris was actually trying to get Ming Ming to go up. She refused and Garland volunteered to go. Diana knew he was tough because of what Nicole had said.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The two beyblade clashed in the middle of the ordinary beyblade dish. Garland was on the attack straight away. Hitting Diana’s beyblade with a powerful attack, he made it just about fly out of the dish.
“C’mon Bacci! Move!” Diana yelled, but her beyblade was damaged badly already. ‘He’s strong, how can I win?’ she thought.
“Diana attack already!” Voke shouted from behind her. She smiled slightly and tried to attack, but couldn’t.
“I can’t attack!” she screamed.
“Well dodge his attacks then!” he replied.
“And I can’t move!”
“Yes you can Diana! Think about it! Make Bacci move!” Nicole shrieked at her. Diana tried and soon enough, just before Garland’s finishing move came, she dodged it.
“Yeah! Go Diana!” Chelsea shouted. Diana went on the attack.
“Bacci, Electro Shoot!” Bacci performed Electro Shoot and Garland lost.
“Yes! I won!” Diana declared really happily. Her beyblade flew into her hand and she rushed down to her friends. Nicole, Chelsea and Voke all hugged her hard.
“And Diana has won!” Zap said and Team Bega looked disappointed. If the other team won again, Team Bega wouldn’t have enough points to continue. Mystel went up and Eddie went up too.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” The beyblades circled in the dish for a few laps until Mystel did an attack, making his beyblade fly into the air and hit Eddie’s beyblade hard.
“Attack now!” Mystel shouted and Eddie tried to take control of the match, but couldn’t. He also couldn’t concentrate. He started to get a bad headache and fell to his knees holding onto his head and screaming in pain.
“What’s going on?” DC asked.
“Dunno,” Chelsea replied and tried to find out what was wrong.
“Eddie, use Fire Spin!” Voke yelled out.
“Madeo…” Eddie began, but passed out. His beyblade stopped spinning.
“Eddie!” Diana shouted. She rushed up to him, followed by everyone apart from DC and Nicole. They chatted though, until they came back with an unconscious Eddie and his beyblade. A few nurses took him away to the hospital. DC and Nicole stayed behind, promising that they would come soon. Mystel looked happy, but felt horrible inside. Boris was really happy though.
“Great job Mystel. We’re showing them now! Who’s next?” Ming Ming walked up and Nicole walked up too, ready to show everyone again that she was better then her.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!”
“Drydzia, Illusion Wall!” Nicole shouted and a silver wall went around her beyblade and disappeared. Her beyblade was nowhere in sight. Suddenly, Ming Ming’s beyblade moved, like it was being hit by Nicole’s beyblade.
“What?!” Ming Ming questioned.
“Too easy!” Nicole declared. “Cross Wave!” Her beyblade became visible again and water appeared. Some water on the right of Ming Ming’s beyblade, some water on the left. It hit her blade with a very strong force and her blade stopped spinning.
“That is the end of the first match! The Thuganomics with seven points and Team Bega with only four! The Thuganomics are in the finals!” Zap shouted as Nicole walked back to DC.
“I’m going to see Eddie now, okay?” he asked her.
“Sure, go ahead. I’ll stay though. I don’t really want to… you know,” she replied.
“Yeah, I know. Contact me if there’s trouble though,” he said and walked out. She nodded her head and walked over to BBA Revolution.
“Mind if I sit with you guys? I don’t wanna be a loner,” she asked politely.
“Sure,” Hilary replied and Nicole sat down beside her.
“Thanks,” she said and smiled.
“Next up is BBA Revolution against F-Dynasty!” Zap shouted.
“Who’s first up?” Kenny asked.
“Me,” Max said and walked up to the platform and saw Julia walk up too. ‘Great, a girl,’ he thought.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!”
“You know I’ll win.” Julia started a conversation with Max to distract him.
“I don’t think so,” Max replied and attacked her beyblade. Soon enough, Max had got ready to use a finishing move. But when he used it, Julia dodged it and attacked him with her finishing move. Max’s blade flew out of the dish.
“Oh man!” he said and picked up his beyblade. He went over to shake hands with Julia. She accepted and they shook hands.
“And I’ll go next,” Tyson said and went past Max on the way up. Julia stayed there.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” This time, the beyblades were in the position to collide with each other, but Julia’s blade swerved out of the way, sending Tyson’s blade just about falling out of the dish.
“Go Dragoon!” Tyson said and hit Julia’s beyblade out of the dish.
“Yeah! I won!” he shouted.
“Yeah, congratulations,” Julia said and looked disappointed. She held out her hand this time. Tyson shook it and she walked back to her bench. Raul walked up and Kai went up this time.
“This’ll be easy for Kai probably,” Daichi commented.
“Too easy,” Nicole murmured.
“3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!” Kai went straight on the attack, hitting Raul’s beyblade with strong attacks. Raul’s beyblade looked like it would stop, but it didn’t.
“C’mon Raul! Win this!” Julia’s cries reached BBA Revolution and Nicole.
“Go Kai!” Max yelled.
“Win!” Tyson shouted beside Max.
“Don’t worry guys, I will,” Kai replied, turned and smiled at them. Nicole closed her eyes and started to hum This Love by Maroon 5. Kai turned back and attacked Raul’s beyblade with one last attack. It stopped spinning and Kai looked pleased with himself.
“Oh, look at that, I won,” he said and held up his hand. His beyblade flew up into it. He turned and walked back down to BBA Revolution and Nicole.
“Yeah! Go Kai!” Kenny yelled as he came back.
“We’re in the finals!” Daichi commented, and Nicole stopped humming and opened her eyes.
“BBA Revolution have made it to the finals! In one weeks time, BBA Revolution will go head to head with The Thuganomics!” Zap announced.
“Well, I guess I’ve got to go. I’m looking forward to facing you guys in the finals,” Nicole said. “I’m going to fight all of the battles, so I’ll face five of you. Don’t worry though, I’ll win all of them.” She held her hand out to Kai. “Congratulations on winning, but you’ll learn. Wait and see.”
“What do you mean?” he asked cautiously.
“Think about it.” Kai reached out and shook her hand and smiled.
“I’ll still win though,” he remarked.
“The future’s already written Kai. You can’t chose what happens. You will be able too, just wait,” she said and pulled her hand away from his tight grip.
“Now I’m confused, I don’t-“
“Find the power with in Dranzer, she’ll help you. In the meantime, wait for visions.” She turned and walked out.
“Is it just me or am I seeing things? Did Kai really just shake hands?” Max asked.
“And he had a conversation too,” Ray added.
“No, he’s just learnt how to talk!” Tyson joked and got Kai chasing him out as a result.

Okay, thanks a lot to everyone who has been included in the story and has PMed me who they think will win and why. Comment now please.
Ta Ta For Now!
BISC

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