Friday, July 8, 2005

   It Is All Over - For Now . . .
Right guys, I've finally finished my story. It is 60 pages long and has 33 chapters. The good news is that there is another story coming. I have already started it and it is so gonna rock! It's like a sequal thingie to Beyblade G-Revolution Rewritten. I hope you guys like it when I post it. The bad news (kinda bad) is that I want to have 10 comments from 10 DIFFERENT people before I post the last chapter.

Chapter 30: Some Friends
Nicole tore away from the group, DC tearing up grass after him as he ran after her.
“Please Nic! Stop now!”
“No! Some friend you are!” Nicole yelled back with pain in her heart. DC had always been there for her and he swore to her that until she said he could (which she hadn’t yet) he wasn’t going to spend time with another girl. It would always be her until she felt safe. Never would he go for another girl and protect her instead. “It’s like no one cares about me any more! I have no parents, I have no family, I have nothing apart from my friends, ad now they turn on me!” She was starting to get tired and was slowing down.
“Please Nicole just stop and listen to me so I can explain to you! She likes me; I hate her. I only know her name! Actually I’ve forgotten it, but that’s beside the point!” DC saw it was working. She was barely jogging now. She stepped into the bush and slowed right down to a stop, breathing heavily and slowly.
“You mean that right?” she said through taking big breaths. DC nodded.
“Always. I promised remember. I swore to you-“
“I know.” She hugged him and let one tear out just for him. “I’m sorry.”
“Me too,” he said softly and held her tighter. “So fake story of how I got you?”
“Oh yeah,” Nicole replied and thought quickly. “Got it! I climbed up a tree, thinking that you hadn’t seen me, but you did and caught me. We talked and I decided to go back with you. Good enough?”
“Yeah, right. They’ll fall for it. Lets go.” They walked out and saw that their friends were talking to the group that DC was with, Jasmine sitting next to Ray on the bench. “See look at that. She falls for any random guy.” Nicole giggled.
“Yeah, she does.” They laughed and Jasmine saw them approaching. She then once again slipped her arm on the boy accompanying her. ‘You’re back for good now?’ Kai asked. ‘Dunno.’ ‘Who’s these idiots here? Justin, Dylan, Misty, Samantha and Jasmine?’ ‘DC’s old friends. Totally not the friends I’d want though,’ Nicole replied and Kai looked at her, a long annoyed stare. ‘What?’ she asked him. ‘Nothing.’ ‘Yes, there’s something up. What is it?’ ‘Nothing okay? Nothing!’
“Grumpy,” she muttered and walked along behind the large group of teens.
*At About 5:00*
As they wandered the streets for the last few times, they noticed they felt like they were being followed. But every time they turned around, no one was there.
“Suppose we’ll – I’ll see ya’s later,” DC said as he walked along near the front of the group. They had wound up where he had introduced everyone to his friends.
“Yeah, we’ll see ya around some day,” Justin replied. Dylan waved and they turned their backs and walked down the darkening alley with the girls behind them. ‘I hate them,’ Kai thought, but not realizing Nicole had heard it. ‘Me too,’ she replied, thinking she was meant to hear that. Silence until DC turned around.
“Hey where’s Nicole gone?” he asked.
“And Voke,” Diana said.
“And Ray,” said Tyson as he looked around. ‘Nicole? Where are you?’ ‘I don’t know. But please help me Kai. It’s cold and dark and I’m getting scared. HELP!’ Her voice shouted in his head. He winced in pain as it echoed in his head. Help, help, help, help, help. ‘Arrgh! Where do you think you are then?’ he asked. ‘I was just walking and then I felt a hand over my mouth and eyes, and I got pulled back. Don’t really know.’ Then her scream was heard.
“Nicole!” DC shouted. “Where are you?” Then a, well, boy’s scream *does that make sense??* hit them.
“Voke!” Eddie said.
“Where is he?” Diana asked herself. Then Ray had his turn, his shout echoing.
“Ray! Where’d you go?” Max yelled.
“Hils has gone too,” Kenny said and just then, her scream was heard.
“Where could they have gone?” Kai murmured to himself.
“I have all four under my control right now. You must obey if you want them back, so listen up carefully. We want to have a match with you guys. See if we are Championship material. But we also want a deal. We want to keep these four for, sorry five, for-“
“But only four of us are missing,” DC said and then looked around. “Sorry, Eddie’s missing too. My bad.”
“As I was saying,” the voice said. It was defiantly a girl’s voice and she sounded about their age. “We want to keep these five for about a week, and then you can have them back. After the match, we’ll let you see them, just so you know that they are alive. Everyday at about midday, in the bushes behind the hall, we’ll show you them to make sure you know they’re alive. We won’t harm them unless you try to find them. Then we’ll show you that we are hurting them. Remember, fight with us by the lake today, right now and we keep them for a week. They stay alive. Try to get them back and they’re dead. Don’t fight and they’re dead. Understand?” ‘Kai please help me!’ Nicole thought to him.
“C’mon lets go and fight!” Kai suddenly said.
“Good old Kai, never turns down a challenge,” said Tyson as he walked behind Kai around a couple of blocks to the lake.
“Right, we’re here! Show up now!” Chelsea yelled into the darkness. All of a sudden, the lake’s water started to lift up at the edges by the group of teens. It lifted higher until it was high enough to let an adult walk through. Sure enough, a girl appeared walking through the water, or under it. She was tall with short green hair with heaps of gel in it, keeping it stuck down nicely, pulled back away from her green eyes and pale face. She was wearing black track pants and a black t-shirt with Wanna Mess With Me? written on it in red. She stopped just out of the water and held her hands up, closing her eyes. Then another girl appeared walking behind her. She had red hair, just like fire, flowing down to her shoulders. She was tall, but not as tall as the first girl and had lovely sea blue eyes. This girl either had a tan, or was born with slightly darker, but really noticeable, skin. She wore blue shorts and a blue tank top. She also had a blue headband in her hair, keeping it pulled back out of her face. She stopped by the other girl and glared at her competition. Yet another girl appeared, the shortest of the lot. Her purple hair was down to just before the middle of her back and she had brown eyes. She was wearing a dark pink mini skirt and a light pink boob tube. Then two boys walked out. The one on the left was wearing a red T-shirt with a yellow logo on it in the middle and jeans. He had brown eyes and was a dark American. He had short brown hair matching his brown eyes. The other boy had dark orange hair and blue eyes. He was wearing a green jumper and jeans. Both boys stopped by the girls, just in front of the water line. The green haired girl lowered her hands and the water returned to normal. It was she who spoke first, and it was she who was recognized first.

Chapter 31: The Gods & Goddesses
“I am Razi, The Goddess Of Water And Minds. This is Risa, The Goddess Of Earth And Animals,” she said nodding towards the girl with red hair. This girl speaking now was clearly the girl who had spoken to them before. “She is Rachel, The Goddess Of Luck And Changes.” She indicated to the last girl wearing pink. “He is Rob.” This time she pointed to the orange haired boy. “He is The God Of Wind And Spirits. And this is Ryan, The God Of Fire And Technology.” She pointed to the last boy.
“Where’s the proof that they’re alive?” Diana asked.
”Right here,” Rob answered as he placed his hands high above his head. A picture was formed by mist and a bit of colour, showing the five captured friends.
“That’s not real proof,” DC said, starting to get worried, but not showing it.
“Getting scared now are you DC?” Razi asked with a smile.
“Here, let me show you,” said Risa. She spoke with an accent and rolled her r’s. She clicked her fingers twice and straight away growling was heard from all around the teens.
“What’s that?” Chelsea asked as she looked around her.
“Tigers,” Ray whispered softly. “But how could they end up here in the wild in a city?”
“Dude, Goddess Of Animals remember?” Tyson said.
“Come out,” Risa commanded and tigers emerged from the bushes and the water. Five of them had hovering bodies above them. The bodies were unconscious, but were defiantly the five that they were missing from their group. The other tigers growled loudly at the strangers.
“Okay, enough proof. You want a fight?” Kai asked eagerly.
“Yes, we do. But we want to keep them for a week. We swear we won’t hurt them and we will return them safely to you,” Ryan explained. Chelsea grinned just slightly. She knew she now had a crush on him. Ryan realized he was being stared at and smiled back at her. She blushed in surprise and shock and focused on the situation.
“We want to have a fight just before we give them back to you okay?” Rachel asked. “Until then, you’ll just have to wait.”
“No! We want them back now and we don’t want to fight either!” Diana yelled and lunged towards Razi. She punched her in the guts, causing Razi to fall.
“Wrong thing to say,” Razi said and jumped back onto her feet. She ran and dived into the water.
“What?!” Diana asked herself. Quickly she realized she was going to be attacked and moved away from where she had punched Razi. Water rose and headed towards Diana. “Don’t you dare get me wet! I’ve only just got my hair perfect!”
“Too bad,” hissed Razi and let water fall on all of them.
“Right, that’s it!” DC yelled and he lunged at Ryan and started fighting. All though both of them got knocked back hard and fell a few times, they kept on going.
“Fire!” Ryan said, sounding like he was calling someone called Fire. DC punched him hard.
“Aaarrrrggghhh!” DC shouted as he made contact. He looked at his fist. It had a small burn on it. ‘Whoa he’s hot!’ Chelsea thought. ‘No he’s not,’ Kai thought to her.
“What Kai?” Chelsea asked.
“Didn’t say anything,” Kai said truthfully and started to fight Rob.
“Zis will be way too easy,” Risa said and launched herself into a fight with Chelsea.
“Earth!” she yelled, also sounding like she was calling someone. Rocks lunged up in front of her, just as Chelsea was about to make contact. It rose as high as the tree beside them. Risa jumped up onto the rock and began to climb up it. Soon enough, she reached the top and laughed down at Chelsea. Chelsea got ticked off and jumped up too. Risa then clapped her hands twice quickly and a huge dog appeared out of nowhere and knocked Chelsea off the rock into Ryan. As soon as the two made contact, the dog disappeared.
“Ow!” Chelsea screamed.
“Sorry Ryan!” Risa yelled down to him and she jumped down the rock. She started to lunge kicks and punches at Chelsea. Razi and Rachel fought Diana and Tyson and Max were working on Rob with Kai. They weren’t much of a help, but they didn’t care. Kenny stayed out of it and Hiro turned up. *That’s Tyson’s big brother if you didn’t know*.
“Hey what’s this about?” he asked. All he saw was boys and girls jumping around fighting each other. Ryan punched DC hard and he ran into Hiro.
“Hey watch it you son of a *you know what comes next*” he yelled at Ryan.
*About 10 minutes later*
“Can’t, continue,” Chelsea breathed heavily as she spoke. She was lying down on the ground absolutely tired. DC shoved Ryan right next to Chelsea.
“Okay okay! Stop! Please!” Ryan shouted. DC smiled a satisfied smile.
“I give up! Stop!” yelled Diana as she got water forcefully pushed onto her. She had had enough.
“I so kicked your ass then,” Razi commented as she and Rachel walked away from Diana to meet Risa, who was also victorious.
“Enough! I can’t take it any more!” Rob said and Kai, Max and Tyson stopped beating up the poor guy.
“We want them back now!” DC said as he held up Ryan by his shirt.
“I can’t do that!” said Ryan. Chelsea stood up and smashed into Razi. She started to beat her up.
“Ow! Losing control! NO!” Razi yelled. Chelsea suddenly stopped.
“Did you guys hear that?” she asked suspiciously.
“What?” Tyson questioned.
“Hello?” a voice called.
“Any one there?” another said.
“Hello? Can any one hear me?” yet another shouted.
“That’s Ray!” Max exclaimed and ran into the bush beside them, hoping to find Ray. Everyone followed them, even the Gods and Goddesses.
“Max!” yelled Ray.
“Hey!” Ray said back as he saw his friends running towards him, and the people who had captured him. Behind Ray came Hilary, Nicole, Eddie and Voke.
“Damn!” Razi said.
“Hey Razi,” said Risa. “I quit this group.”
“What?!” Razi exclaimed. “You can’t!”
“Yeah actually, I can.” Risa smiled happily.
“Same. I quit too,” Ryan.
“Rachel, Rob? You don’t quit too, do you?” she asked panicking.
“No, but I’m taking some time off,” Rob said and he jumped up into the sky and flew away.
“Ditto. I want a break,” said Rachel. “Here’s a bit of bad luck too.” With a grin, she ran away.
“Bad luck?” Kenny asked puzzled.
“Okay, lets get out of here now please!” Eddie said as the ground started to shake. Razi just disappeared and left the teens alone helpless. *Not totally helpless though, cause they still had Ryan and Risa*. Diana screamed. A tree had fallen down beside her, missing her by a few inches. Voke jumped over it and grabbed her arm.
“Lets go,” he whispered to her and ran off in the direction that his rescuers had come.
“Run!” DC shouted and everyone did the obvious, run. As soon as they were out of the bush they continued to run until they came across Kai’s great mansion.
“Uh, can we stay with you guys?” Ryan asked.
“Pleaze?” Risa pleaded.
“Sure,” Kai replied as he walked inside. “Two rooms to choose from it you don’t wanna be alone.”
“I’ll go wiz Nicole,” Risa said.
“I’ll go in the other room then,” said Ryan. ‘Yes! He’s in my room!’ Chelsea thought to herself. Nicole walked up to Chelsea.
“Ooohhh Chelsea!” she whispered in her ear and Chelsea pushed her gently into the wall. They both giggled.
“What’s funny?” Hiro asked.
“Nothing!” the two girls said through giggles.
“Seriously girls, grow up,” Tyson said and walked into his room.
“I’ll go in the other room then. I’m not sleeping in the same room as Tyson; I can’t get to sleep,” Hiro commented and walked into the other room.
*Later On That Night When Everyone’s Asleep, Well Almost Everyone…*
“Why can’t I sleep?” Nicole hissed to herself. She sat up in her bed and looked around her. Everyone else was asleep. ‘I know!’ she thought. ‘Chelsea’s got that stuff she drinks to fall asleep! I’ll get some of that!’ She got out of her bed and crept out of her room. She opened the door slightly and found that Chelsea wasn’t there. She shut the door and then opened it again.
“Ryan’s not there either!” she whispered. As she shut the door, she thought she heard a noise. “Oh please Chelsea, don’t make out with him! He’s a freak!” She walked down some stairs and opened a door, just so she could see in the room. Sure enough, Chelsea was there with Ryan. Nicole gasped.
“Chelsea,” she whispered. Chelsea was crying. She was so upset about something. Nicole started to get annoyed. ‘She goes to a complete stranger for comfort, but not me, one of her best friends? Why?’ she asked.
“Cause its part of the future.” Nicole spun around fast. She’d been caught!
“Oh, it’s just you Kai,” she said.
“I’ve got good news and bad news,” Kai announced. “I was asleep and I had a vision-dream, make sense?”
“Yeah, carry on,” Nicole said. “I wasn’t asleep so I didn’t see it.”
“Good news is that, number one, Chelsea and Ryan play a big part in something tomorrow, don’t know yet, but they do. I think they save someone’s life or something similar. Number two, Brooklyn dies.” ‘Yes!’ she thought to herself. “Bad news is that you and DC die.”

Chapter 32: Mixed Emotions
“What? No! No that can’t happen!” she whispered and cried silently.
“I am so sorry,” Kai said and walked away.
“And tomorrow! Even worse!” Nicole said and followed him. “Stop! Are you sure I die?”
“No, but almost certain. I only saw colourful sparks flying everywhere and you saying that you must do something and running into the building generating the sparks. DC runs after you and the whole place just blows up. I’m sorry.” He continued walking away but not to his room. Nicole just cried herself to sleep.
*Next morning*
“’Morning Nic,” Diana said sleepily as she rubbed her eyes.
“’Morning,” Nicole replied.
“You tired still?” she asked her.
“Yeah,” Nicole answered and got up. ‘Real great day today. I get to die. Sweet as,’ she thought. ‘I know, I’ll cheer her up,’ Kai thought to himself. ‘Hey Nic, it was just a joke, you’re not gonna die.’
“Really?” she asked and turned to him.
“Course, I was just joking. I didn’t think you’d take it seriously though.” Nicole breathed a relieved sigh.
“Yes! I’m so happy now!”
*Late At Night That Same Day*
“Wow!”
“It’s huge!”
”It’s pretty!”
“It’s cool!” ‘It’s where Nicole and DC die,’ Kai thought in the back of his head and sighed. They were staring up at a gigantic building with beautiful paintings on it and the words ‘Madame Massey’s Building Of Magic’. They were standing on a big bank that went up and then pointed away from the building.
“Cool! Lets go in!” Tyson said and he pulled Max and Kenny along into the building behind him.
“Boys,” Chelsea whispered into Diana’s ear.
“Yeah, typical boys.” They walked inside the building and were greeted with bright lights. It was dark outside, so their eyes stung when the light first hit them.
“Welcome to Madame Massey’s Building Of Magic,” Madame Massey said. “Your goal is to reach the end of the puzzles successfully in groups of four and four only. First of all I’ll start you off with easy tricks and puzzles and then they’ll get harder and harder until there is one team left. They are the winners. Lets begin!” Walls suddenly disappeared and the floor was nowhere to be seen, and the teens were left hanging in mid air. “Form your groups!”
“Okay, ah, I’ll go with Kenny,” Tyson said and they were suddenly standing together.
“I’ll be with Tyson,” Max said and he too appeared by Kenny.
“Me too,” Hilary said and she too was transported to Kenny’s side.
“I’ll go with Nicole,” Chelsea said and was moved to Nicole’s position.
“Same,” Ryan said and appeared by Chelsea.
“Ditto,” said Kai and was moved to Ryan’s side.
“And the last group then is me, DC, Diana and Risa,” Voke said and they appeared together as a team.
“The first team to reach the box in the centre will get one point. Begin,” Madame Massey said. Suddenly walls grew up from the floor and the colours started to change.
“Great. How are we meant to get to the middle when our team was in the middle of the floor?” Nicole asked.
“Dunno, but lets stop wasting time and move,” Kai said as he ran away.
“Lets go,” Chelsea said as she followed Kai, running away. The team ran and ran until they bumped into Tyson’s team.
“Hi guys,” Kenny panted. “Am I the only one who finds this very tiring?”
“Yeah, the rest of us a really fit,” Chelsea said.
They continued running in opposite directions until all of three teams heard Madame Massey’s voice again.
“One team has finished. The other three please continue until you find the centre.”
“What? There’s only three teams playing, not four!” DC said.
“”No, there are four. Continue please,” and everyone ran off, ignoring Madame Massey’s voice. “Two teams have now finished.” This was Risa, Diana, Voke and DC. “Three teams have finished.” This one was Kai, Chelsea, Ryan and Nicole’s team. “The fourth team will appear in the room we are all in now.”
“Cool!” Tyson exclaimed as he appeared in the room filled with his friends and four shadows in the darkest corner of the room.
“The next challenge is to find four flags of different colours and collect them. The winners will get a point for their team. Splitting up your team is allowed, but isn’t the best choice. There are 16 flags in this maze, four red, four green, four blue and four yellow. There will be obstacles during this maze, so watch out! Go!” Madame Massey explained and then disappeared. Once again walls grew up high, splitting up the teams.
“Okay, lets split up,” Kai suggested.
“No! She said that’s a bad idea,” Nicole said.
“Yeah I know, but you and me won’t be together, so we can tell each other where we are and what flags we have.”
“Point taken, good idea. Lets do it,” Nicole said. “I’m going this way.” She pointed to her left.
“I’ll go that way then,” Kai said, pointing the other way.
“I’ll go with Kai,” Chelsea said and ran in the direction he was pointing at. Kai ran off after her.
“C’mon, lets go,” Ryan said pulling on Nicole’s arm and ran. Straight around the corner was a climbing wall.
“Cool, a climbing wall,” Nicole said and started to climb. Ryan raced up after her. It was quite high, and they had no safety gear on. “I think I can see a flag up there!”
“Great! What happens if we reach the top and we fall down to our deaths?” Ryan asked.
“I won’t fall. I always jump from rooftops, so I’m used to taking great risks.” She reached the top and grabbed the flag and stuffed it in her pocket. Ryan got up to, just in time to see her put it in her pocket.
“Now where?” he asked.
“Just wait, got to connect to Kai’s mind.” Nicole focused really hard and soon broke into Kai’s mind. ‘Hey Kai.’ ‘What?’ ‘We’ve got a flag,’ Nicole thought-said. ‘It’s yellow, so don’t bother getting a yellow one if you can see one.’ ‘Sweet. We don’t have one yet. Actually, I think I can see one now! Keep going. I’ll get back to you soon,’ Kai said and cut her off.
“Lets get down and continue,” Nicole said and she looked down the other side. There were moving blocks of what looked like concrete.
“How do we get down on moving blocks of concrete?” Ryan asked.
“I dunno, jump maybe.” Meanwhile, everyone had basically found a few flags. Only as Ryan, Kai, Nicole and Chelsea had found the last of their four and reappeared in the room. This time they went into the darkest corner and waited to see who the other new team was.
“One team of four has finished.” Soon, the new team finished.
“Two teams have finished.” The four appeared in the room and moved to the corner. Then they noticed that the corner was already occupied.
“Sorry this corner’s taken,” Nicole said and glanced at the four, wanting to see who they were.
“That’s just fine. We don’t care.”
“Brooklyn?” Nicole gasped. No way!
“And Ashley,” Ashley said smiling slightly. “We’re with our new friends, Zoe and Tala.” Tala’s figure steppe forward and stared Kai right in his eye. ‘Not again!’ Kai thought. ‘Yeah, again,’ Nicole said. Zoe also stepped forward. She had brown hair with blonde streak in it. The blonde in the front was pulled up high into a hair tie (one on the left, one on the right) so she had two small bits of blonde. Her hair went to a bit higher than the middle of her back, she had brown eyes, was wearing, track pants, a green t-shirt and sneakers. Nicole noticed her necklace. It was a gold chain with a love heart on it. Nicole stared at it and worked out some letters. ‘Hey Kai, her necklace has letters on it. What is it? I can see something A something A, 4, something something E.’ ‘The most obvious, Tala 4 Zoe.’ ‘Oh. Right.’
“So that’s team 4 is it?” Chelsea asked.
“Three teams have finished. The last team will appear in the room.” Madam Massey appeared and so did the last two teams; DC’s team first, and then Tyson’s.
“Oh man! We came last again!” Hilary said and then looked at the new team. “So the new teams got Kai’s mate Tala in it!”
“He’s not my friend,” Kai said.
“No?”
No,” Kai said coldly.
“Next and last challenge is like a game. You will be each given a map. It will be of another maze. In the four corners will be where each team retreats. You have to catch as much people of other teams as you can. You then must take them to your corner and then they will be locked up there. Other players can free them, but they can’t take them to their own corner. If you free someone, the team that caught that person will freeze for 10 seconds. You will also freeze for 10 seconds. Have fun, but do not get too much physical to get someone in your corner. Start now!” Madame Massey said and disappeared. Once again walls grew and everyone found themselves with maps in their hands. The teams were transported to their own corners and they started the game. The teams targeted were all of a sudden really competitive and ran away in different directions. Each and every one of them knew who they could take down, who they couldn’t take down and who could take them down. DC jumped up onto the wall and ran along it. He could see everyone and knew where his team was. Even though everyone could see him, he managed to catch many of his friends. After 10 minutes, the game was up. Madame Massey made them appear in the room again, the ones who were free in the middle and the ones who were in a corner, in a corner.
“Well done to all of you. I must say though, that we have a tie. The three teams are DC, Nicole and Brooklyn. Their teams happened to get the same score through out the whole game. Well done.” Then the lights went out and noises were heard. It was just like the sound of rafters falling down.
“I’ve heard this noise before!” Diana screamed.
“Yeah! When your house fell down remember?” Voke yelled back. “Run!” Suddenly the roof fell down, landing on everyone inside that room.

So, you liked that? One more chapter for you to read, but remember, 10 DIFFERENT people must comment on it before I will post the last chapter. Then I can start to post my next story. So, tell all of your friends to read my story, cause if there isn't 10 comments, no last chapter.

BISC

P.S. That is not a threat, it's just I want to see 10 loyal friends commenting on something that I enjoy.
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