Friday, August 5, 2005

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I guess this will be a big bit of good news for yas! I will just post my last chapter rigth about now!

Chapter 33: I’m Gonna Die Another Day
Madame Massey disappeared and reappeared outside her building to watch the spectacular sight. All of her lights were failing and sparks were flying everywhere, all different colours. A fire was starting and was becoming bigger and bigger. Slowly everything was coming down, and to think she’d left 16 children in there to die! But that was not true. Everyone had made it outside, but Chelsea hadn’t. She’d been overcome with smoke and fainted. Brooklyn was also inside, but he was moving Chelsea away from the exit. Diana had gone out of the back, and was far away from her friends.
“This has got to happen. She must die, even if it means I’m going to die too,” he murmured to himself as he placed her body down. Then he moved one of the rafters with his psychic powers down onto her gently. “That should do it.” He ran out of the building and was greeted with his three friends, only Ashley knowing what he had done.
“What did you do with Chelsea and Diana?” Nicole asked as the building became just about covered in flames.
“I didn’t do anything.”
“Did too!” she screamed and ran inside. She found Chelsea quickly and heaved her out, just in time before a support fell down covered in flames where she was moments ago. She gave her to her friends and rushed back to the building.
“What are you doing?” DC shouted and she stopped.
“I’ve got to do this! I must get Diana out too!” said Nicole as she ran back into the building.
“No!” DC yelled and ran after her and Brooklyn started to laugh as he watched them both disappear.
“Shut up!” Kai said towards Brooklyn.
“Make me.”
“Give me the ingredients and I will,” Kai retorted.
“Since when did Kai know stuff like that?” Tyson asked Max.
“Don’t know, don’t care,” Max replied.
“One cup of evil, a spoon full of salt, a pinch of sugar, half a cup of milk and a cup of flour.”
“Great, now I know why you look so bad, smell so bad, and are just rotten.”
“Excuse me! Don’t insult me!” Brooklyn fired back.
“I do what I want!” Kai yelled back. But it was then when the whole building burst into flames.
“It’s gonna blow!” Kenny shouted.
“I think we know that!” Ray said back. “Run!”
”But what about Diana, DC and Nicole?” Voke asked as he ran alongside the others.
“We can’t help them,” Madame Massey said.
“But I can,” Brooklyn said and ran back to the building.
“No! Brooklyn! Come back! I love you!” Ashley screamed and the cried. She knew he was going to die. Brooklyn couldn’t stop his feet and soon enough, just when the others had got cover, the building blew up.
*A week later*
“Star’s Ashes?
Although the witnesses say that four people were in the building at the time, there were no bodies found. Only traces of blood remain, matching the DNA of the four people suspected dead.
‘I don’t think that anyone could have survived that explosion, even though it wasn’t that big. The witnesses were lucky enough to come out without any injuries, but the four would have had to be far away to have lived,’ Detective Brown reported. ‘The four people are Nicole, Diana and DC from The Thuganomics and Brooklyn, a world famous beyblader. Their blood was found, but no evidence that they are still alive or dead.’ Investigators inspected the land around the scene and discovered Diana in the forest near by. She had injuries and was rushed to the hospital. Doctors say that she will live. No other bodies have been found, but the other three are suspected dead,” Kai read out off the newspaper and put it down. Back at his grandfather’s mansion they were chilling after knowing that their friends were dead. He finished just as the last song Nicole and DC had sung stopped playing with all six singing I’m Gonna Die Another Day.
“I am zo zorry,” Risa said.
“Me too,” Ryan said.
“Cause she’s dead, I think you guys might want to know something. I think Nicole would like you to know,” Kai said quietly. “She-“
“No Kai! Don’t! They don’t need to know!” said a voice, echoing the room. It was speaking very softly, but was speaking as if it could barely speak. “That’s our secret!” Now the voice started to take huge breaths, as if it couldn’t breath.
“Nicole where are you?” Chelsea yelled.
“C’mon Nicole! Tell us where you are!” Eddie shouted. “We can help you!”
“Can’t, say. Must, live. Can’t, live. Bye guys…”

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