Saturday, October 15, 2005

   More and more chapters! Again!
Chapter 11:
“Hello,” Kai said as he answered the phone.
“Hey Kai,” Nicole sniffed. “Chelsea just died.”
“Serious?” Kai asked. “Holy shit! Hang on a sec, let me tell everyone else.” There was a lot of gasps and lots of murmuring in the background.
“Hey Nicole,” Ray’s voice said.
“Hi Ray,” Nicole said and sniffed again.
“You handling it okay?”
“No. What do you think? She’s, like, my best friend,” Nicole replied and *once again* sniffed. “I am so sorry how I didn’t really care about Max. I am really sorry.”
“Hey, don’t worry about it. You’ll live. How did she die? I mean she was fit and healthy and doesn’t really have a reason to die right?” Ray asked, wondering if it was connected to Max’s death.
“Yeah, you’re right. She didn’t have a reason. She was stabbed, just like Max. Do you think they’re connected?” Nicole asked, realising what Ray was thinking.
“Possibly yeah,” Ray said. “Look, I gotta go okay? I’ve got an interview thing with some of those Crime Lab people. Bye.”
“Bye.” Ray hung up the phone and walked out the door, prepared to say he had absolutely nothing to do with Max’s death. Nicole sighed and walked out of the hospital with her friends.
*Next day after everyone has been interviewed by a group of policemen. They all said they didn’t kill them and were out or not with them the night they were killed*
“Is it just me or is someone after us?” Kai asked Nicole.
“I know. It’s like we’re being hunted eh?” she replied and Kai nodded his head. “And I just can’t believe that I murdered Chelsea!”
“Who do you think killed them both?” he asked.
“Well, I guess it could be Brooklyn.”
”Hello! Wake up Kai! Ethan shot him remember? He can’t have killed them!” Nicole said, just about yelling.
“But what if he-“ Kai began.
“Didn’t shoot him. What if he lied,” Ritchie finished off for him. Him and the rest of the people had come out.
“What? How did you know?” Kai asked as Ritchie came up to Nicole and put his arm around her.
“Think about it.” They turned around and walked out with the other thugs following back to their room at the record company. Inside their new room, they found a note stuck on the door. It said, ‘IM COMING 4 U NEXT’.


Quote for Chapter 12:
We are outta here!…… and we are already in trouble!


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Chapter 12:
The thugs (including Ritchie) packed their bags. There was no way that they could stay here. They had to leave, get out of there. They were being hunted. If they didn’t get out of there, they would be stabbed to death too. The others (Tyson, Kai, Ray, Hilary, Emily and Kenny) decided to come too. They boarded a plane and left for a very long flight to Magadam. There was rows with three seats in each. Luckily there was 12 of them so no one had to sit by strangers. It went Kai, Nicole and Ritchie in the first row, Tyson, Eddie and Hilary in the next, then Ray, DC and Emily, and after that Kenny, Voke and Diana. Everyone had found himself or herself something to do, like reading a book, listening to music, talking to each other, sleeping, checking out the view, or annoying people, like Tyson for example. He had started to annoy Kai, who was sitting in front of him, and now he couldn’t stop. Kai was trying to sleep, but wasn’t having much luck.
“Would you stop it Tyson?” he asked, turning around and practically yelling it to him. Tyson quickly turned his head and his attention to the lovely view.
“Huh? Stop what?” he asked.
“You know what. Stop it,” Kai said in a very stern voice keeping his face straight. He turned back around to face the front. Eddie looked up from his book, exchanged glances with Tyson and then poked Kai. He quickly returned to his book as Kai spun around again. “Stop it Tyson!”
”But I swear it wasn’t me!” he said.
“Seriously Tyson, you’re acting like you’re a five year old,” Eddie said and Kai agreed. “Act your age man and stop annoying Kai.” Kai turned back around and Tyson looked at Eddie with a ‘Why did you do that?’ look on his face. Eddie grinned and once again returned to his book.
*That Late Afternoon Wandering In The Streets*
The sun was setting as they went for a walk. It was just Eddie, DC, Kai, Ritchie and Nicole.
“Psst! Come here!” hissed a voice from a side street. They all spun around and saw Ethan standing in the middle of the alley. “Come on, I’ve got to show you something! It’s really important!” Ritchie shrugged and followed. Being a guy who had lived on the streets, he knew what Ethan could have found. That meant that he also knew he could be lead into a trap and be killed, but it was just about always worth following someone. The others followed Ethan and Ritchie and they came to a big blank space surrounded by the walls of buildings.
“What is this about?” Eddie asked as he looked around. Quickly, Ethan grabbed his beyblade, let it rip and called out his bit beast, Cobra Copello. Of course, a huge cobra snake with armour, a headset and a blade tail appeared and hissed and flickered its tongue. “Thanks for answering my question.”
“I think all of this ends now, doesn’t it?” asked a voice from behind them. They all turned and there stood Brooklyn. “After how many years this has been going on for and finally I get to kill you. Well actually, Ethan does, I get to watch.” With a blink of the eye, Nicole was pinned up against the wall. The cobra’s mouth opened to reveal very sharp teeth covered in venom that with one small bite would kill anyone and anything. The same icky green coloured venom was on the tail blade. And for the very first time ever, they saw something else in Nicole’s eyes. It wasn’t determination. It wasn’t love. It wasn’t anger. It wasn’t hatred. It wasn’t happiness. It was fear.


Quote for Chapter 13
Saying good bye.




Now Chapter 13 is the last chapter. The last you will ever hear of The Thuganomics and Ritchie. The last you will hear of Maria and Ty, Maria is redvixen's specially created charecter and Ty is her boyfriend. Thank you redvixen for your cool charecter, the story wouldn't be the same without you in it.


And so *sigh* here is the last chapter of Beyblade T-Revolt.

Chapter 13
She stared up in shock at the monster. ‘This is it. This is the end. Say bye to your friends girl, cause you are so dead, and you haven’t won,’ she thought to herself as she closed her eyes. She was so ashamed of herself. She knew when she had had a gun pointed at her head that they wouldn’t shoot, but this was way different. This was the end, and she knew it. Someone was going to die, and it would be her. But of course, the guys watching on the side had to grab their beyblades and try to do something, even though it was pointless. The snake lashed out quickly with its tail, defeating them all. Kai, Eddie and DC picked up their beyblades that had landed at their feet, all frowning. Eddie suddenly jumped at the snake, but he cut open on his arm by the tail and was poisoned.
“Argh!” He fell down to his knees and DC grabbed him.
“Call an ambulance, he’s bleeding fast and is poisoned,” DC ordered Kai and he obeyed quickly. DC picked up Eddie and they all ran back down the alley, knowing all was lost now. ‘Hey Nic, I’m sorry, okay?’ Kai thought-said to her. ‘I know. I’m sorry too. Keep fighting for me though okay?’ she replied. ‘And accuse Brooklyn of injuring Eddie, cause once he’s caught and locked up in jail, even his powers can’t get him out!’ ‘Okay, I’ll do that for ya. Bye.’ ‘Bye,’ she replied, and broke their contact.
“Damn!” Ritchie said.
“What?” Kai asked.
“I forgot my Beyblade! Brooklyn will probably steal it! I need to go back!” Ritchie took off back down the alley, despite DC and Kai’s calls. He ran and ran and spotted Nicole, still alive standing by his beyblade. He looked up at the bit beast that glared straight back at him. Then the ambulance’s sirens were beginning to be heard, sounding like police’s sirens.
“Quickly, kill her and leave him alone. No one will believe him! They’ll think he’s nuts!” Brooklyn ordered and climbed up the wall. “Hurry! We need to go!” Kai heard a sharp, small scream from Nicole echo down to him and he sighed. It was finally over. He imagined the blood covering her hands as she placed them over the wound. He imagined her crying as she faded away. He imagined what life would be like if she was still here. The ambulance pulled up and started to give medication to Eddie, who was in a lot of pain. They drove to the hospital, and it was then that what had happened hit them in the hard in the face.



*Sniff* Isn't it sad? Well here is a bit of Need To Know information I typed up to make it a bit clearer for everyone about what actually happened then.


Ending The Story:
What Happened That Day: Nicole actually lived, and it was Ritchie that died. He jumped in they way of the bite and the snake left straight away. His blood had covered Nicole’s hands as she put her hands over the wound. She cried and cried as he faded away from her, and she started to fade away as well, soon passing out.


What Has Happened Since: Nicole has had a baby girl (Kylie 7 years old). She still sings with her friends as The Thuganomics. Emily was pregnant and had twins (both boys called Todd and Daniel 7 years old) and lives alone as well. Tyson and Hilary have had a baby girl (Sandy 7 years old) and boy (Reece 4 years old) and are about to have another baby. Ray married Maria and have had a baby girl (Larissa 6 years old). Kai, Eddie and DC are still single and are dating (Eddie the most) and Diana and Voke finally got married and had a baby girl (Hailey 6 years old). Everyone lives in a huge mansion and Emily and Tyson and Hilary are neighbours.
The End.



So that's it! And just to keep you interested in my writing, I have a new story started. PM with what you think about it and any ideas I could add into it.




“Okay, I need a drink,” I said and stopped running and pulled out my drink bottle I was carrying.
“Come on!” came the voice of my beyblade trainer, Dylan, but he also stopped. “This isn’t good enough Kara. You need to push yourself harder if you want to be in the championships. The rest of the team have already passed you! Hurry up!”
“Okay, okay!” I put the bottle away and took off down the hill with him right behind me. He was right. I needed to make it. I slowed down on the flat ground as it lead me into the bush, letting me weave in and out of the trees. There wasn’t any track to follow and I did my best to stay straight. I jumped over the stream and went up the steep hill. I reached the top and saw the boys just going down again. I speed up, and by the time I was going down again, they had reached the bottom. I continued running as they jumped into the river. They had made it and now got to rest. I continued, but stopped just before reaching the river and sat down on my rock. Dylan pulled up beside me.
“Great times. You boys got 1 hour and 12 minutes, well done. Kara, 1 hour and 13 minutes. All of you are at least two minutes better than last time. Keep it up.” He glanced at the boys that were puffing hard in the river and cooling off. “Tala, I expect you to be in charge and everyone to get back safely okay? Ten minutes at the most.” Tala nodded and Dylan set off towards Biovolt and I sighed a sigh of relief. Back at Biovolt I would be able to catch up with Darcy, my roommate. At least I wouldn’t have to hang about with these goofs anyway. They were only in my team, thank God for that. Kai and Bryan belonged in the blue group, and Tala and Spencer belonged in the red group. I was in the yellow group, and so was Darcy. There was also the white group where all kids go into to start off with when you first come at 6 years old. Then when you are 8 or 9, you go into red, blue or yellow. And then after that, you can go up into green, and then a special group, black. It is the highest group and only about 10 people are in it. Green has only about 20.
“Hey, I’m going back now,” I said and stood up.
“Nah, you’re not. You’re waiting on us,” Tala said as I started to walk in the direction of Biovolt. “And I’m in charge, so you’re doing what I say.” Man I hate that attitude I thought to myself. They all had one and so did I, but I wasn’t that bad.
“Fine,” I replied giving in and sat back down again on the rock. I glanced at my watch. I still had, like, nine minutes left. Yay. I looked back at the guys that were just chilling in the river and talking about guy stuff, like how hot Jasmine was. She is in the black group and just about every guy thinks she is hot. And she is blonde and just about every guy thinks that blonde girls are hot. Finally Tala announced that we had to go back and I quickly jumped up and headed in the direction of Biovolt. The other guys followed dripping with water, but slowly drying in the heat of the sun. We walked back and I went straight up the dark staircase to my room I shared with Mandy and Darcy. Mandy was a very annoying girl that won’t shut up. She is only 10 years old and sometimes looks up to Jasmine (what a surprise). I looked at where Darcy’s bed is and realised that she would be out doing her run now, and I’d have to wait for a while. I glanced at Mandy and she smiled back. She was far too cheerful to be here. She had to learn to be darker, not bright and bubbly.
“Joshua told me to tell you that you have to see Mr. B at 1:20 sharp in his office,” Mandy told me as I sat down on my bed. I tilted my head to the right slightly as I looked at her. Her voice was so high and chirpy; I hated it. Joshua was a highly ranked guy in the black group. If anyone in the black group told you to see Mr. B, you did it.
“Okay. Thanks,” I said, my voice cold, unlike hers. I then decided to glance at my black watch. It went with my clothes really well in my opinion. I had a tight, dark grey, halter neck top on and slightly lighter grey pants with lots of silver zips on it. I also wore a thick, black and dark maroon belt that had thick, black and maroon pieces of thread hanging down on my left side to just higher than my knee. I occasionally wore a black jacket over the top if it was cold with lots of silver zips on it. My shoes are black with maroon laces, I have a few small silver and maroon necklaces on and also a few small maroon and silver bracelets on, all being so quite tight so they didn’t fall off or get in my way while training. I have green-blue eyes and dark maroon lipstick on all the time. My hair is straight, long, black, tapered and is always tied back for training and I prefer it to be out, even though no one has seen me with it out. And now you might see why I am so dark. I look like a Goth, I kind of am, and I’m also a girl not to mess with. Darcy’s hair is black as well and hers is long and wavy. Darcy about an inch taller than me and I think she is just about ready to go up to green, maybe straight up to black if she’s lucky. Anyway, I checked my watch and it read 1:15. I swore out loud and ran out of the room and up a lot of stairs. You never can be late for things like these. I reached the top of the building and waited at the big door. I checked my watch again and it told me I had one minute left. I let out a sigh of relief and stood there waiting. Suddenly the door opened and Jasmine came out. She turned and walked away down the stairs I had just come up. I walked into the room and sat down on the chair that faced Mr. B. I kept my breathing steady as his chair turned around. I couldn’t see his face because the only windows in the room had curtains pulled over them, barely letting any light in at all.
“You have some good news Kara,” said the cold voice of Mr. B. I kept quiet. Over the years I had learnt what to do and what to not do. He continued. “You and your team will be competing in the World Championships tomorrow. The others will be going through intense training for the rest of the day, so leave them alone.”
“What about me sir? Do I go through training too?” I asked.
“No. These boys need to get their act together.”
”I don’t understand sir. I’m always behind them in every bit of training sir. They are always beating me in everything. I might be only a few minutes behind, but I am still behind them sir,” I said.
“No. That’s not true. You are far ahead for a girl of 16 years. For example, these boys are expected to be at least half an hour away from you in the run. They aren’t. You were only two minutes behind them today and you are the one who is ahead. And with beyblading, they are ahead for their age and so are you. This team is going to win the Championships and go far. I want you to go to the entrance door in about 10 minutes. There I will get a mini bus for you and the boys to travel to a hotel, stay there, and go and compete the next morning. Do you understand me now?”
“Yes sir.” I paused. “Do you really mean that sir?”
“Yes. Now go and pack. I have talked to the other boys, but you don’t say a word to anyone else, understood?”
“Understood sir.” I stood up and walked out and shut the door behind me. I walked down the stairs and saw Kai coming up them.
“You ready?” he asked me as he walked past.
“No.” I continued to walk to my room and packed my bags.
“Did you get up to green class?” Darcy asked.
“Uh, no. I’m just going on a trip,” I said, remembering I couldn’t say a word to anyone.
“Okay.” I could tell that Darcy knew that it wasn’t the real reason why I was leaving. I could see it in her eyes. She knew something was up.
“Bye,” I said and walked out of the room with my bags. I went downstairs and met the other guys at the gate. It was a black metal gate and was padlocked shut. At the top (like the fence that surrounded the grounds) were sharp spikes with a lot of rumours evolving around them, like Timmy. He had tried to escape, but the spikes had made sure he didn’t, killing him quickly. No one was ever able to get out of the grounds unless it was a special occasion or if Mr. B trusted you enough, like the black class. Jasmine came up behind us, unlocked the gate, and pointed to a mini bus.
“There’s your bus. Take it and make sure you win,” she said coldly and we walked out. She slammed the gate shut, locked it and walked away. We pilled into the back of the mini van, and then we noticed the driver. It was Hayden. He was another guy in the black group, but he was Kai’s mate, and he let him and his friends get away with anything. I sighed. This was going to be a long trip.



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A bit of good news, Edge Hottie decided to not quit the otaku. And redvixen, do you have the pic of The Thuganomics ready yet? Cause I would like to see it, especially since they are history now. And Kara and her team are ready to have pics drawn too now. You know what they all look like and I would love to see some cool pics of them. I was ind of dissapointed though cause no one has drawn a pic of The Thuganomics, so please draw one of Kara and her team. Kara is also my charecter, just like Nicole was.

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BISC
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