Thursday, September 7, 2006

   Hi Hi It's here Chapter 6
Hi Hi here's Chapter 6 of my story:

Chapter 6

*it the weekend*

*Ding Dong*

Mina: Don't bother getting up Ol I'll get it.

*Ol still sleeping*

*Mina opens door*

*looks disapointed*

Mina: Get Up Ol your friend is here.

Ol: Hey Eichi what's up did you find the place okay?

Eichi: Yup pretty close to our school so ain't too bad that way you won't be late anymore.

Mina: O Ol's always late no wonder.

Ollie: Cold.

*Mina Glares*

Ollie: Anyway Mi howda you know this was my friend?

Mina: O his entire appearance gave it away.

*Eichi is stabbed*

Mina: And he looks like the type you would hang out with.

*another arrow in Eichi*

Mina: And Besides I'd care less about him.

*Eichi faints*

Ollie: HA HA HA Too many stabs there Mi.

Mina: anyways why is he here? Do you always go out together every weekend? WOW Pathetic.

Eichi: Th-Th-That's Not it I just wanted to check out where Ollie lives and his new roomie.(Hitting/flirtous way)

Mina: You'll never get anywhere with that pass.

*Eichi heart broken*

Eichi: Howda know?

*Ollie and Mina stare at Eichi*

Eichi: What?

*Mina and Ollie in own little world*

Ollie: wow I didn't know he was this stupid.

Mina: I'm not suprised somehow.

*Mutter mutter*

*Eichi is stabbed to death*

*knock Knock*

Ali: Hi Hi Mina, is it okay if I come in?

Mina: O Ali come on Come on

Ollie: Who's she?

Mina: She's my best friend, I just invited her over so she can meet you Ol.

Ollie: O so it isn't only me (trying to tease)

Mina: Guess Not but I only did cuz she kept begging it was annoying.(unaffected)

Ali: Well um let's not be rude and I'll introduce myself, Hi I'm Alissan Sakureal, Mina's bestfriend.

Eichi: Yo I'm Eichi Nayogua, Ollie's pal.

Mina: Mina Toji, owner of this apartment.

Ollie: S'up Ollie Toji and ..Wait did you just say owner?!

Mina: Yeah I pay the bills and I paid for this place so I'm the owner.

Ollie: Then what am I?!

Mina: A boader, O that reminds me you have to pay me your rent for this month next weekend. which is let me see um 250.

Ollie: 250?! How the hell am I suppose to come up with that?!

Mina: mind your manners we have guest.

Eichi + Ali: ... Leave us outta this.

Ollie: Kay how bout this what if I pay for half the bills? then we can call it even owners.

Mina: Hmmmm......NO.

Ollie: What?! Why?

Mina: cuz the bill is like 300 and I have a nice job and I want to be owner.

Ollie: But if I pay half then it will be 150.

Mina: O so you can do math fine okay we'll pay half but if you start and can't pay your half then it return to be owner and boarder got it.

Ollie: Got it so um when does the bill come out?

Mina: 3 days.

Ollie: 3 DAYS?!

*Ollie's dead*

Mina: Sorry about that well should we go to a movie or something?

Ali + Eichi: .... kay but is ollie okay.

Mina: Just fine besides you guys should be happy he's paying for the movie.

Ali + Eichi (thought); Heartless.

Ollie: What, I'm paying?!

Mina: well yeah it's only natural for the guys to pay.

Ollie: Eichi, buddy pal help me out here.

Eichi: Sorry man no can do I got no cash.

*Ollie leaves to fish for his wallet*

*Mina and others are leaving and Ollie catches up*


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