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Wednesday, August 25, 2004


My Language Arts Story
I don't like it but I feel like posting it.Also this isn't the best I can write.Its for school so if it SUCHS don't think that I can't write story.Its just that my group said that it was going to be about dogs then it was gona be a fantasy so I started a fantasy story then during lunch jeffery told me that they changed it back to dogs so I to write a whole new story.And the story I wrote which I hate

THE EVIL DOG
"Here boy, come on just hop in in the car," Said Blaze. His dog carelessly skid through the ditch and under the fence. As Demon (the dog) jumped in the car he growled at Blaze and slowly turned his head and put it out the window. Blaze tried to drive as fast his sturdy car could go while Demon was biting and scratching him the whole ride. When he got home he was happy to be to be there but he was in lots of pain. Blaze made a drastic attempt to quickly get out of the car. As he did Demon sat as tall as he could and pounced on to Blaze. He had to either fight off his dog or be bit, and scratched. Right before Blaze made his choice his girlfriend came and told Demon to go to his shack and leave them alone. She then helped Blaze get up and they walked and talked. Then they looked at the sun.

The End
Ok after I revised it some it made more sense. If you liked it just tell me. Any way thats my story.

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