Tuesday, January 10, 2006

To those who care
I seem to find myself no longer in the grace of friends I once had here. Sad really and I guess expected. I see that I will no longer have the support of all my fellow friends and admirers of my stories and that I have lost touch with you. So, for now on, I will only post for those who care, if any are here.

[ The giant slashed his sword down at the Wanderer intending to split him in two. The wanderer, finding the opening, rushed the Sword bearer and spun around to send an elbow into his chest. Slamming into the Giant's diafram, the wanderer quickly lifted his leg and brought it backwards, slamming it onto the giant's knee. Falling to that knee, the giant was now kneeling, his other leg holding support. The wanderer then used that support to throw himself up and where he did not have to jump to hit him in the face. With his bandage hands, he began to punch the giant with exzubberant force, blood now flying from the cuts and bruises the wanderer was making on the sword bearer's face. Finally, he stops his berrage of attacks and steps down from the Giant's leg and walks around his body to face the other two. Blood dripped from his bandaged hands. ]

[ Kicking the beaten Giant, his lifeless body fell forward and hit the ground with a thud. Pools of blood forming on the spot. ]

[ The other two, seeing this act, began to howl into the air like wild beast and the flush of red formed on the visible bare flesh. With the blood pumping hotly, they both charged in madden anger at the wanderer. ]

[ Taking no time, the wanderer saw from his perefial a table with a cup of chop sticks sitting on top of it. Running to the table, he grabs the chop sticks and turns around just in time to dodge the Giant 2 Fist. Grabbing his arm, he ducked under it and went to the outside, taking a two chopsticks and stabbing them on both sides of Giant 2's elboy. With the elbow locked in place, he ducks back under the arm just in time to dodge Giant 3's leg, grabbing the leg and pulling it around Giant 2's waist and placing two chop sticks into Giant 3's knee. Sliding under Giant 2's legs, he places two more chop sticks into his lower spinal cord and paralyzes him, then pushing him over where he slammed his face into the table, forcing his nose to shove into his brain. Giant 3 fell with him, forcing the chop sticks to shove and shatter his knee from the force and weight of Giant 2's body. Taking the last two chop sticks, the wanderer then finish's Giant 3 by severing his spinal cord from his brain, killing him instantly. ]
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Sunday, January 8, 2006

A new update
[ The giant slashed his sword down at the Wanderer intending to split him in two. The wanderer, finding the opening, rushed the Sword bearer and spun around to send an elbow into his chest. Slamming into the Giant's diafram, the wanderer quickly lifted his leg and brought it backwards, slamming it onto the giant's knee. Falling to that knee, the giant was now kneeling, his other leg holding support. The wanderer then used that support to throw himself up and where he did not have to jump to hit him in the face. With his bandage hands, he began to punch the giant with exzubberant force, blood now flying from the cuts and bruises the wanderer was making on the sword bearer's face. Finally, he stops his berrage of attacks and steps down from the Giant's leg and walks around his body to face the other two. Blood dripped from his bandaged hands. ]
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Monday, December 19, 2005

Update
[In the moments the Swordbearer closed in on the terrief victims, The wanderer dashed infront of him, staring with great inetent on him]

Wanderer: [ Bowing ] "Please sir, leave them be. There is no reason to kill innocents."

Giant 1: [ Keeping the sword high ] "Move! This has nothing to do with you. These people are traitors, decievers to this great city. Death is there only call."

Wanderer: [ Shaking his head ] "I am sorry, I can't do that."

[ Growing the Gaint grunts to the others, who come up to the wanderer. One slugs him into the stomache and the other elbows him in the back, sending him onto his stomache on the ground. Woman and children scream. They then kick him into the wall of the building and bows to the swordbearer, letting him through. Walking forward once more, he stands just above the cowering victims, a stare of death in his face. ]

[ Standing up, the wanderer dashes at the swordbearer, sliding under the falling blade and using his fan to strike his arm away. Forcing him to miss, he jumps up with ease and strikes a knee to his face, knocking him backwards. ]

Wanderer: [ In a fighting stance ] "Get out of here! Run and turn back!"

[ Thanking him, the woman and children run away. ]

Gaint 1: [ screaming heavily, a cold and deadly face of darkness covers his face. ] "How dare you! We were going to spare you, but if you wish to be a traitor, then a traitor you be. Yeah!"
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Friday, December 16, 2005

update
[ The wonderer goes only a little more ways down the street before suddenly he hears the screams of a woman and children. Showing a sign of concern in his eyes, he races off to where the sound came from. As he approaches one of the buildings, he sees two figures standing outside its door. They were large, bulking men who stood high above anyone he had every seen, dressed in black gi with hoods over their heads, faces hidden in the darkness, muscles bulging through the fabric. On there chest was a symbol of a blue bulls head. Inside, screams could be heard and it was not a moment later that two small children and a older woman was thrown out onto the street. Following them was two beaten men, dressed in the clothes of a magistrate. Walking out behind them all was another large bull man, holding a large wicked Katana in his hand. Gesturing to the other two giants, they walked over to the magistrate and lifted them off the ground and forced them to bow forward. Raising the Katana, the bull man swiped down over their necks and decapitated them. More screams came from the woman and children, backing away from the men. Turning on the woman and children, the sword bearing giant lifted his weapon and began to walk towards them. ]
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Friday, December 9, 2005

Script!
Ok... here is a small portion of the opening scripts. All the action, blah blah blah.

Chapter 1: The Wanderer's Path

[ Opening Scene: Its Midday. Blue skies. High sun. The area is filled with hills covered in high green grass surrounded by mountains. A long wide dirt road is set in the hills, going straight into a mountain pass. Through this pass goes to a city that sites on what was a bare mass of rock. Its a huge city with towering buildings and large palace visible in the higher reaches of the mountains. Walking this pass is a figure wrapped in the robes of a priest, his arms folded and the right arm pushed under the long wide sleeve of the other. He wears a straw hat upon his head and a silk scarf around his face. His dark gray eyes are the only visible thing, but only barely under the straw hat. He also wears a necklace of beads and wooden figures around his neck with a large steel circlet at its bottom. He finally makes it to the door of silver and gold, standing about 20' high and 15' wide. Closed, it bore men who resemble nothing of guards, but more like thugs, with clothes worn by martial artist. Their clothes are black, a visible semble of a red dragon on their chest, and carried Katanas on their sashes. One of them, presumedily the leader, stepped forward. He had short ragged black hair and eyes of trickery. A grin placid on his face like he had won something special. Stopping, the wanderer stares at the man. ]

Thug: (( Looking the man up and down )) "Well, looky here. Where you heading, stranger?"

Wanderer: "No where in perticular. I am just a humble priest who walks around aimlessly to preach peace of mind and of happiness."

Thug: (( A look of surprise jumps in the man's face. )) "Heh. Well isn't that interesting. Pointless. But interesting. Well, this city is Kin Kon Kitsu. If you wish to preach your madness, go on ahead."

[ Believing that to be his passage in, the wanderer bows and begins to head towards the gate, only to be stoped by an outstretched arm of the thug. ]

Thug: (( Laughing )) "You can't enter yet priest. First you got to pay the entrance fee into the city. Which, by the way, is every piece of gold you have on you. So pay up or suffer the consequences, stranger."

Wanderer: (( Looks at the man with cold, hard eyes )) "So... your saying that if I don't pay, I can not enter the city, nor turn around and walk away? That, if I refuse, I die? Correct?"

Thug: (( Laughing again )) "I see you get the point. We really don't care who you are, but if you want to enter this city of hell, then we wont stop you. But, we just can't let you get away to tell others about this place. That could create all sorts of problems for us. So, make your choice."

[ Nodding to the thug, he removes his hands from under the sleeves and reaches into his robes. Retrieving a large bag of gold pieces, he hands it to the man, who thanks him and ties it to his belt. Giving a signal to open the gates, he stands back and bows to the wanderer. Slowly, the gates open and the wanderer steps inside. Just as the gates are closing though, a flash of light cuts through the air and a bag of coins flies through the gates and into the hand of the wanderer, a piece of thin wire, barely visible in the light of the sun, attached to it. He replaces the bag and continues walking. ]

[ At the entrance of the city, there are three directions he can go. Straight, right, and left. They all seem to be the same. Building, most likely houses and shops, follow down each path, empty from people and sound. Everywhere seemingly deserted. It would only be by surprise that he sees someone of life, a small group heading towards him. Unlike the people outside though, they are dressed in kimonoes, with green shirts and lavender skirts. On there center breast, there is a symbol of a snake covered in a jade color sparkles. They carry Kitanas and Scis on their belts. Also, there faces are covered by shalls and their black hair pulled back in ponytails. All are female.]

Female 1: (( Spotting the man, she stops and points at him)) "You! Stop where you are!"

[ The wanderer stopped just as she commanded and waited as they approached.]

Female 1: "Why are you walking the streets and not at the factory?"

Wanderer: (( Bowing )) "Please forgive me, but I have just arrived her into the city. I know nothing of this factory nor the rules you set about. I am just a simple preacher of peace in the mind and happiness."

Female 2: ((Laughing)) "Do you hear this man, sisters? He comes here to THIS city to preach PEACE and HAPPINESS. What a fool! There is no peace or happiness here, not for the likes of you and the commoners that live about. Here, this all you find."

[ Walkind up to the man, the second female speaker tears off the straw hat from the wanderer's head, allowing the flourished silky steel gray hair to fall from his scalp and over his face. She then backhands him, sending him backwards to the ground. Then, she stomps him on the chest, pinning him to the ground. Through all of this, he makes not one sound of pain or retaliation, just stairing through his hair up to the sky, as though dazed in his own world, to ignore this one. ]

Female 2: (( Laughing, she throws the hat upon him )) "This man is pathetic. Coming here to preach his peace and happiness, eh? All that will get you here is more of this Priest. Anyways, I am done playing with you. Maybe next time, if your alive, I might continue our little engagement. Hahaha!"

[ With that finished, the group continued walking towards the gate, now ignoring the wanderer. Standing up, he pulls his hair back and pulls down the scarf, blood seeping from the wound she placed upon his lip. Swipping it away, he could not help but notice a prying eye from behind a closed shutter, staring at him. Shaking his head, he touched a scar the scar that ran down his left cheek, remember something in his mind. It was a deep scar, dark and red, never really healed, going down under the scarf he hid it under. Replacing it the scarf, though blood still stained upon it, he continue to walk down the passage.]
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Thursday, December 8, 2005

Last of the characters!
Ok, people... this is the last of the character that I am going to share, for now.

Yoka Nioma - A rounin samurai and a friend of Mistuhashi. Though, it seems they also hold a mysterious path with each other, dealing before the war of sepperation.

Timo Ki Quan - This is the priest of priest. The strongest, most powerful spiritual man to live. By destroy all five of his sense, he has learn to adapt to the world in what he calls "Divine Inner Peace". There is nothing he can't do while in this state and makes short work of any who oppose his belief or the nation.
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Wednesday, December 7, 2005

More Info
Alright, so far I have given you three major characters and five not so important but still play major roles characters. Now, in this line up, these are main event characters and truly major to the storyline.

Jinko Wen Cho - The leader of the third and most powerful of the three factions, The Sapphire Oni. During the war of sepperation, he was one of the leaders of the rebellion armies and the darkest of them. He is also a link to the stranger, Mitsuhashi's past. His skill are unknown, the weapon he uses belonged to the legendary Musashi Himself.

Shin Omninaka - During the war of sepperation, there was one man who stood out among all the rest. A man of such incrediable skills that he was given the title of "Death's Minion". Shin Omninaka. He is also another key to Mitsuhashi's past, seemingly the most obvious. He is a master of the Martial arts, two sword style, and secrets of the Osarai Twin Dragon religion. His weapons are Ren and Zen, the two dragons.
(( Just to let you guys no, He is also one of the true main characters who has his own story besides this one.))

Uri Bonjo - A mysterious ninja who has come to Kin Kon Kitsu following an almost unfollowable trail of the man named Mistuhashi. Seemingly another a main figure in his past. Marked with the sign of the Koga Ninja.
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Tuesday, December 6, 2005

More characters ^_^
Paff Erio - The leader of the Crimson Dragons, this man was once a member of the Yakuza. Breaking off from the famed group of thugs, he came to Kin Kon Kitsu and was the reason for the whole war that now wages in the city. Not much is actually known about him, but rumors are said that he is a master of martial arts and a spear style combat.

Oranus Erio - Another leader of the Crimson Dragons, she is also the sister of Paff. She was also a member of the Yakuza and broke off at the same time as her brother, following him to the city Kin Kon Kitsu. Unlike her brother, she is not very secretive, loving the night life and the sensation of lust and greed. Though, she is a wild card, no one likes to get onto her badside as she is a very cold hearted reaper of death in her moods of madness. She uses two Kamas connected together by a 10 foot chain.

Haki Erio - The last leader of the Crimson Dragons, he is also the brother of the two other Erio and the most openly evil of the three. Unlike the other two, he never belonged to the Yakuza. Much older of the three, he had learned all of the arts of Erio name and was a prized warrior in the name of the Fuedal lords. He was a hero to many in the war of sepperation. It was after the war that he fell out of grace, his thirst of battle strong within his blood. He had become so drawn to it that he began to hunt down warriors and slay them without purpose or meaning other than his own sick desires and became so accustom to it that he started to kill anyone and everyone. In the end though, he was force to flee into hiding. How he came upon his brother and sister, no one knows. He is a master of Martial Arts, Two single headed axes, and His long bow staff.
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Monday, December 5, 2005

More Info
I am pleased with all of the comments I have gotten today and is pleased to give you some more characters and info.

Chimio Lut - Once the most deadliest assasin during the war of sepperation, she is now the leader of the Jade Snake Organization, one of the three factions in the city ok Kin Kon Kitsu. A master of assasination and poison use.

Gange Yaikor - The personal body guard and hesband to the graceful Chimio, he is also a master of the Yaikor Martial arts, a skill that turns the body into an almost inpenetrable armor of muscle. With the master of this technique, one must be able to control every muscle in their body and must endure months and months of brutal and disfiguring innitation.
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Sunday, December 4, 2005

Hello!
Alright everyone. What I am posting is what is going to become a web comic that me and a friend is doing. I want your thoughts on the idea. K? ^_^

Gung Ho Mitsuhashi
Setting: A futuristic fantasy of a warring city in the tides of a broken fuedal Japan.
Storyline: An epic tale of a mysterious wanderer on a quest for answers, meaning, and most of all, redemption. But that doesn't seem possible as he comes to the city of Kin Kon Kitsu, a place of conflict and war between three factions who want control. From the moment he steps foot through the gates, he is thrown into the chaos that is Kin Kon Kitsu with no regard to his own wishes. Becoming a game of life and death, he becomes involved with a fleeing princess, reaquanted with an old enemy, and reminded of an ancient past. So, to his own dismay, he reweaves the patterns within in his soul and takes up the skills that kill, for in these moments of his life, its not about being the good or bad person, its about the person who survives.
Characters
Mitsuhashi Heito - A mysterious wanderer who by chance came to the city of Kin Kon Kitsu. At first, he is nothing but a pacifistic preacher of peace. But soon he becomes a Gung Ho Samurai/Ninja with skills that can only be called incrediable. A master of Bushido and Koga Ninjitsu, he leashes out a fury of hell that is only matched by the torment of his own mind.
Kakillo Titsumon - She is the daughter of the Lord of Kin Kon Kitsu, but also the only survivor of the blood bathed attack on the palace. She is a delicate girl with no understand of what is happening and is drawn into deep depression and mental problications. It would be a faithful day when she ran into the mysterious man who calls himself Mitsuhashi.
Sekio Merimore - The vigorious and brutal body gaurd of the Princess Kakillo. Being raised within a family of warriors, he was always taught to never give trust anyone and always be ready to kill without mercy. Such a strong belief it was as he slayed each person who stood in the way of escaping princess and to any who he believed to be suspicious. To him, there was nothing past battle and death. He began to think differently after he met that mysterious man.

Oh and what do you think of the Background? And no, I will never change the Avi, even if it is 20 years from now.
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