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Thursday, February 24, 2005


Question
okay, one of my friends thinks she's a poet...she's not bad but she asked me what I thought and I'm not really sure. Here it is. Tell me what you think.

Dark and Light

For every wrong
There is a right
For every shadow
Shines a new light
Balanced is this world we walk
Thoughts of hate we think
Words of peace we talk
Surrounded by lies
A world drowning in fears
The eyes of the people
Are filled with tears
Hate and sorrow
So many feeling they know
Yet so few they show

But in their broken hearts
There is a weapon so strong
A consience, a care
That knows right from wrong
The key to making a difference
Lies in thier heart
However small it seems to the world
They never give up, they do thier part
All that will matter in the end
Will be one small light
Coming from ones heart
Filling the world with it's light.

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Okay. Personally I think it runs on...but it's a start if she likes doing it right?
Oh well...I hope she doesn't mind that I'm posting it o.0 uh,oh

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