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Saturday, January 29, 2005


   Protecting the weak till my day of death
I wrote a poem! I became very inspired yesterday.

~~~~~Til Death Do Us Part~~~~~
Does marriage have any meaning,
In this day and age?
Does life have a purpose?
Are we all trapped in a cage?
Does life need a meaning?
Do we all need trust?
What is the point love,
When the world is full of lust?
Can a broken heart be healed,
Of all the heartache and pain?
If these questions were answered,
What would we really gain?





tah-dah! I think it's rather good. If anyone thinks somethings wrong with it lemme know. Constructive critism only though. If you don't like tell me why. I'd rather know why and be able to change it then to not know and have it suck. :)

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