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Monday, January 31, 2005


   This way or that way?
Just to clue people in, I have been writing a story. It's called In A Dream. I don't know if it's very good but I'll put a scene in here for you all to see what it's about.


~Marie stared at the clouds with tear filled eyes. Looking down at the grave in front of her, she remembered the days of her youth. She sighed in frustration at the fact that she could never subdue her tears. She had been coming to this place for over 10 years. Ever since she was 17. Now she was 27 with twin daughters. Times really had changed ever since HE left. Looking at her watch, Marie decided it was time to go. When she got home that night her daughters questioned her.
"Where were you mom?" asked Anala, the older of the twins.
"I was at the cemetary," Marie said is dismay.
"You were there again?!" Pheonix, the younger twin yelled in anger.
"Hush Pheonix, there is no need for anger," Anala said calmly to her sister.
"Whatever," Pheonix said and stormed off.
Anala gave her mother a knowing look and followed after Pheonix. Marie watched her children go without a word. Anala looked exactly like her mother except she had her fathers hair color and eye color, while Pheonix looked just like her father except with her mother's hairstyle and eye color. Both of them had a mix of their parents temper.
Marie sighed once more and went up to her room and layed down in her bed. Dreams slowly filled her head as she silently wished to never wake up. Images passed through her mind as she slept. Her children, her husband, her best friend, and the boy she loved and lost. A single, solitary tear ran down her cheek.~

Well thats one part of the story. It's near the beginning but not exactly at the beginning. This is the end of chapter 1. Chapters 2 through 6 are done. It's almost complete but I don't know how to end it. Well I'll update later. Maybe with more of the story if I feel like it.

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