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Sunday, October 31, 2004


The closest poem from my heart.....
This poem's last line does not apply anymore.....so do not pay much attention to that....it was meant for somethign that didnt happen....i'm crying as i type this btw .....it hurts to do this..but i want to show the best poem in my opinion that i ever wrote....it is really long so bare with me.....here it goes...It was written for Rayea.

Forever Love

Beauty is it the eye of the beholder,
And my eyes behold it in you.
Even though everyday we grow older,
Everyday our love becomes more true.

I see the beauty of your soul
When i look so deep in your eyes.
I've seen a beauty so, not since times of ol'.
So now I wish you hold you by my side.

Having you there keeps me strong
And helps me to be my true self
It helps give me teh strength to go on,
And gives me a different kind of wealth.

It's the kind of wealth that can't be held,
Because it is a wealth of love.
And this love I hope can be felt
As I hold you in my heart full of love.

My love for you is that of true,
And I wish to always be with you.
So consider this my promise to you.
That I will be faithful through and through.

As the years continue to pass by
I know out flame will keep it's glow
And that our love will never die.
No matter how old together we grow.

Forever together I know we will be.
With our love growing everyday.
And our love that began in highschool they will see,
Can go on forever and a day.

I give my thanks for all you have done
Because you have helped me be who I am.
You helped me see how I'm not like everyone.
That I can be myself in life's game.

I might not be able to give you money,
And I may not be able to give you gold;
But I know I can give you all of me.
So now there is something I must ask so bold.

I know we are young, but thats fine to me.
Because I always want you to be able to see,
How wonderful life can really be.
So now I ask, will you marry me?

-Bradley Alan Mills

I wrote that a couple of months ago...while rayea was still mine... I gave her a copy but never read it to her and never let her answer because by the time i saw her agian....it was over and it wouldnt have mattered.....i hope you all enjoy it...please comment of how you feel about it....may the dragons watch over you always....farewell for now my friends....


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