Sunday, October 16, 2005

   Poems have been judged!
I'm sad to say that only 5 people entered, but iguess I can't really ask people to write when they don't want to and that just gives those who entered a better chance of winning. Thank you to the five who entered! Before I tell you the top three poems, I will tell you how I judged. I judged with my own personal taste so if you disagree with my judging, I understand fully and you may consider some poems better than the others. I chose the ones I liked. I also judged on the way the words flowed from line to line, the emotion that it brought out, and the way the words described the feeling. Two people didn't get to the top three, but they will still receive banners. ^_^ So, without further ado, the winners!
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The third place winner is.....
Together by Magnus Lensherr!!!
Together
A word that symbolizes so much
So much happiness for those who have it
And so much sorrow for those who don’t

I am in the latter
Those deprived of their companion
Their hopes
Their dreams

I yearn to be with you
To see you when i wake
And before i sleep
Just to be with you

Together
I think of you often
Oh what life would be like
If only you were here with me

I know though, that you and me
That you and me can never be
We live lives so far apart
That surely can’t come together

And yet as i lie awake at night
I can almost imagine you beside me
Sleeping soundly
I imagine that we are together forever
And that my dreams have come true.

Congrats Magnus!
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The second place winner is......
Summerwolfdemon's poem!
Waiting…Searching
Waiting…searching…what is it I seek?
My lust, my greed, is that what’s holding me back?
I stand here staring at the stars, but don’t join them,
In the heavens above. Why, do I linger on?

Waiting…searching…what is this pain I feel?
Watching the stars, why can’t I join them? Heavens above
Looking down at me, why do you leave me here?

I have lived… and now…I have died, but my soul
It suffers watching the stars above, but one day, I shall be
Up there too.

Waiting…Searching…I feel nothing, not the softness
Of my dress, the breeze in my face, nor the warmth of the sun.
What is it I seek? My soul is wandering the earth is that what I’m
Left to do? Forever? I shall wait here for you to give me what I seek.

Is what I seek even there?

Congrats Summerwolfdemon!
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and the best poem of the bunch is.....*drumroll*.....
Words of a Borken Heart by loki the Wolf!!!!
Words of a Broken Heart
It’s hard to see what you tried to show me.
Night’s of life, so soon become, my every wish.
For every wrong I’ve done you showed me the meaning.
Tell me why I can’t be there where you are.
There’s just something missing, walk with me and tell me.
So many words of a broken heart, you showed me the meaning.
Life goes on, but they never end cause love is endless.
It’s hard to see through this foggy glass, there’s no control.
It’s getting harder to breath my guilty role has it to an end.
Is this the feeling I need to walk with, you showed me the meaning of
Being lonely, now I surrender my heart and soul.
Though how can it be your asking me to show things you never showed.
These are my words of a broken heart.
There is something missing in my heart, I surrender my love.
There’s nowhere to run I have lost all the places to go, now I can see.
Why you told me, “It’s time you learned the meaning of being lonely.”
Is this the feeling I need to know now?
These are my words from a broken heart, I have no place to go, I give you my
Mind, body, and soul.
You were missing in my heart. Showing the being lonely, there was something
Missing in my heart and now I know the feeling.
These words are my answer…
“The meaning of Lonely- no one.”

Congrats!
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Thank you those who entered! Mayura Ashita and Xx beth xX also entered, and they will receive banners as well.
Give me a couple days to create your banners!!!
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