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Monday, March 1, 2004


Poetry
I wrote some poems last night... I was crying when I was writing them so they sound stupid. I never can write a good poems. So what if two of my poems got published. They both suck! I think the editor was blind when he/she read them. Anyway here are my poems...Do tell me what you think of them.... If you guys think of anything to make them better do tell me.

Poem 1. (I haven't named them yet)
Body's shaking
I am breaking
Falling away again
I hear voices
So many choices
I can't breathe again
I'm so numb I cannot feel
Pain attacks and I'm forced to kneel
Will I ever live again?

Poem 2.
I want to die
I want to cry
I want to sleep again
I want to dream
Of things unreal, not as they seem
I want to give away my life
I take the knife
And tear into my skin again
I close my eyes
Try not cry
It's happening again
Then I wake up and see again
Then my life begins
And I'm born again

*sighs* I feel so silly writing about death and cutting

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