A white haired ninja lays sleeping dressed in all black, in and all black room, with black sheets.

sora tooi sora
tsubuyaita koe
anata no yume wa ima
hoshi no sharin wo mawas…

He reaches over at hits the alarm clock button, he sits up, yawn, then stretches, his big crimson reds eyes open wide.

“I love that song, but somehow it waking me in the mourning kinda ruins the appeal.” He says in an optimistic tone.

He gets up and looks down at his clothes, black pants and a baggy black hoody.

“They’re comfortable, why not sleep in your clothes?” He says smiling.

He picks up a black sheathed Kodachi and slides it onto his belt loop. He puts on his green Jonin vest and a tight black choker with his Konoha plate on it. On the hilt of the Kodachi hangs a small black fur “fox tail” with a white tip.

He goes into the bath room and brushes his teeth, we see how white they are, and how his canines are kinda fang-y. he spits and washes his mouth out then wets his hands and pushes his hair back, which springs forward into a perfect style, sticking out a little and falling over his eyes, Yamato Ishida first season style bangs, second rest, he looks at himself with his soft blue eyes eyes.

“Crap! I gotta get to the academy! Maybe I got her in my group!”

He takes off from his room, grabbing his gloves and boots on his way then goes out the open window, clear over his balcony guard rail, and puts on his boots before he lands on a nearby roof. He holds his fingerless gloves in his teeth which he quickly put them on over hands his glittery baby blue painted nails stick out fully displayed.

“Why does this always happen?” he continues jumping fluently from each roof to the next, even while lost in thought. “Possibly it’s just a bad omen; maybe I’m not going to get her in my group, what if I get one of those little fools in my group? Saskue Uchiha, that wannabe, Sakura Harano, clingy weakling know-it-all, Naruto Uzumaki!” he growls in doing this he clears the Academy entrance and starts falling towards the ground, he looks down and sees a girl directly in his landing point.

“Move it baka!” he yells, nothing. “May as well take my opportunity, so I can find out where the hell I’m going!” He makes a brief hand sign and disappears, then re-appears a few steps ahead to the side of her, he walks up casually.

“Excuse me could you tell me… ooof!” the girl walks right into his stomach. He laughs and looks down.
“Well you’re friendly!” he looks and sees 3 other girls “Well can any of you lovely ladies tell me where Squad 8 is and if Hinata Hyuuga is in it?” Silence. “Fine I’ll go check some place else!”

He leaps up into the air.

“We’re squad 8!”

Fe falls on his face. Before anyone notices he jumps up and dusts himself off.

“Well, if you’re squad 8, then I’m your Jonin, Jin Makida, to you its just Jin or Makida Sensei, but everyone calls me Bikou Kitsune Ken!”

Silence.

“Fox-Tail Blade?”

Confused looks.

“Look at the charm on the sword!” He sees they get it. “Alrighty, now that’s out of the way let’s begin!” he turns away from them, looks up at the sky and thinks “So Hinata isn’t in my group, that’s fine, second best isn’t worth it anyway, there’s only one for me…” Jin looks over at Anko, who’s yelling something random a few yards away. “if only I was good with women.” He sighs and faces his students.

“So what I’m going to do is test you, to see how strong you are, after I decide that you’re strong enough, I’ll apply for missions, until then we don’t do jack, ‘kay?”

“Okay!” Makenjii, Anberu and Tamaoyo chime in.

“What the hell!” the last member says.

“Oh, spunk, who said that?” Jin says intrigued.

Yuri steps forward looking a bit unhappy.

“We graduated basic training! You know we’re good enough what else do you want?” she states powerfully.

“I just want to see where you’re, so I can judge what you’re capable in battle, I don’t want to expect too much or too little of you, now all of you, go home, the rest of the day is yours, do what you wish, tomorrow at noon we meet in the clearing in B13 section to have your test, dismissed!” and with that Jin is gone. He jumps up into the trees and runs over to spy on Anko.

“I guess all I can be… is you’re secret admirer, but one day… I promise to be more.” He disappears again. He reappears in another tree watching Hinata and her group “I would have liked to train you, but it was not my fate, I hope you grow into a strong person.” He disappears and reappears again this time on the other side of a roof watching his 4 students walking together.

“Well, well. Lets see where my team is going together, maybe they’re going to train, I must have hit the jackpot!”

Suddenly they all duck into bushes and cover.

“Nice! But what the hell are they doing”

Then Saskue walks by, he hears sighs and sees little hearts float up from their hiding places.

“I should have known!” he says annoyed clenching his fist, eyes closed. “I know.” Jin reaches into his shuriken pouch and whips a Kunai a couple inches away from each of them, they all jump up screaming, Sasuke, who’d seen Jin since the beginning just sighs annoyed.

“Surrounded by idiots” He mutters under his breathe as he strolls away casually.

“Perfect!” Jin says happily as he laughs into his hands, and then disappears again.

Jin runs back to his house, jumps over the balcony, slips out of his boots, gloves, vest, sword and choker and flops down on his bed.

“I live a solitary life, but not by choice, I’d like to change it, but I’m okay until I do.” Jin lies there for a while staring at his ceiling, his pet fox Chibi jumps up on his chest (think Kilala only a black and white fox with baby blue eyes)

“Yo Chibi,” Jin says softly. Chibi squeaks the lays down on his chest.

“I guess I’m not completely alone.” Jin pets Chibi, “But I really wish I had more along the lines of female human companionship.” Chibi squeaks a little sadly and licks Jin’s face.

“Thanks, great pet of the infamous Bikou Kitsune Ken!”

Chibi and Jin both look very happy.

The next morning at about 10 Jin arrives at the meeting place, he notices he’s alone. He shrugs and stretches.

“I though at least one of them would get here early, but I guess I put too much faith in these rookies.” He sits down against a tree and rests. “Oh well, I guess I’ll just beat them more severely when they get here.”

About 2 hours later the rookies show up from four different paths. Jin gets up to address them.

“So you arrive right on time, from different directions? Wow you’re sure starting off good!” Jin states sarcastically.

“But you told us to get here at this time?” Makenjii says confusedly.

“And you didn’t say anything about coming together,” states Anberu.

“Yes, but you should have thought of those things, you know when the enemy will appear, so do you wait and arrive with no plan, or do you get there early for an ambush an coordinate your efforts? God, if you can’t figure that out you’re not going to last long!”

“So we’re already losing,” says Yuri “Not good.”

“Well now that we’re here we may as well do this, the name of the game is make me draw my sword, I’m going to fight you without my main weapon and name sake, get my in a bad enough spot I need my weapon and you all pass, don’t and I’ll fail you all not to mention beat the crap out of you, and you’ll have to do it all over again, and PASS before you get even a D mission.” Jin states, he draws a Kunai and assumes a stance :now lets begin!”

the four candidates go to draw their weapons but in a second he’s on them he drop kicks Makenjii then whips around and back hands Anberu, then heel kicks Tamaoyo, Yuri tries to escape but he hits her from behind with a round house to the stomach, they all go flying and Jin sends out a shuriken at each nicking their cheeks, they all catch themselves and Jin stands assessing them.

“At least you landed well. Now let’s do this again.”

From four points shuriken and kunai rain down on him, Jin jumps into the air dodging most of them and deflects the rest with his Kunai. Suddenly he sees Anberu focusing her Chakra.

“This is starting to get interesting.”

“Pink Fox Fire!”

Pink fire like Chakra pours out of Anberu and she launches off the ground bearing down on Jin in mid-air, he goes to block and is blasted into the ground, Anberu bring her fists down into the crater Jin just created.

“Did she get him?” asks Tamaoyo.

As the dust clears we see Anberu is alone in the crater, well except for a crude plushie version of Jin.

“I know I could just use a rock, but those little guys are so cute!”

Jin stands at the top of the crater behind Anberu. She turns and jumps at him.

“Nice try.”

Jin hits her in the shoulder and thighs with Shuriken, she falls out of the air.

“Jin, don’t worry, you’ll live, they’re just flesh wounds, oh crap.”

The shuriken fall out and Anberu heals, and she lunges at him, he crosses his forearms and takes the blow, he goes flying back through a small tree into the forest, Anberu goes to follow up and is about to leap when Jin whooshes forward nailing her in the stomach then drop kicking her back, he whooshes again and kicks her into the ground riding her across the ground like a surf board.

“That was a good hit, but you can do it once, I can do it every time!”

Anberu swipes at him, he jumps off and she hops onto all fours.

“You still don’t get it.”

She catches up and swings wildly at him, he parries each swipe.

“Blind rage can’t defeat the analytical mind.”

Jin sends her into the ground again, she goes to get up.

“Not this time.”

Jin lands and kicks her in the side of the neck before she gets up, knocking her out.

Jin sighs “That was fun.”

“Pay attention!” Yells out Yuri. “I’m going to beat you, sword or not I’LL KNOCK YOU OUT! LILY DRAGON WIND!”

A huge Chakra Tornado forms around her.

“Lets see what this does.”

A huge dragon forms and heads for Jin.

“Too easy.” Jin says as he leaps into the air, the dragon follows.

“I’ll show you my first Jutsu.” Jin clutches his right wrist, focusing his Chakra, eyes closed, the Dragon is just about to hit when his eyes shoot open.

“IMPACT BUSTER CLAW!”

He brings his hand down in palm swipe formation.

“Splitting the breast.”

He shreds the dragon down to Yuri. He lands right in front of her, she goes to react, but its already to late.

“BLAST!!!!”

He thrusts his palm into her stomach, her eyes go blank and a giant Chakra blast sends her flying back and skidding across the ground for several yards. Jin looks at his hand that is now smoking.

“Ow that hurts!” Jin looks and sees that the tornado is still around him. ‘Hope I didn’t hold back to much?”

the wind slows and dissipates, he sees Yuri’s body laying yards away and whooshes over to check it out, her body is motionless, but she’s still alive.

“Well you fought pretty good, two down two to go.”

Out of the corner of his eye he sees a glint; he reaches up and catches a Kunai.

“Nice try, ooooof!”

out of no where Jin gets kicked in the ribs, he jumps back and stabs with the Kunai, but it goes POOF! The his Kunai goes POOF too, and its Tamaoyo clutching his wrist, she whips around and kicks him in the head, as he flies back he throws Tamaoyo hard and both land in a three point stance skidding.

“Nice trick” Jin says, cracking his neck.

“Haven’t seen anything yet.” Her hair is over her eyes, it blows away showing she bears the Sharingan.

Sharingan? This will be interesting!”

They both shoot forward meeting closer to Tamaoyo

“IMPACT BUSTER CLAW, BLAST!!!, BLAST!!!!!, BLAST!!!!!!” their hands meet and they both go flying back, again and again, then rush towards each other, they meet blow to blow, fist to fist, kick to kick. They both jump back and throw Shuriken and each meets dead on with each other, knocking them out of the sky. They both start running at full speed parallel to each other

“Damn that’s annoying, but copy all you want, I’m still superior!”

Jin draws a Kunai and whooshes in and slices at her, but she meets him with one of her own, they clash blades then Jin jumps back, secretly doing hand signs in his hoody sleeve, then throws his Kunai she throws hers, they’re heading for each other when.

“Million Knives! Hmmmph.” Jin’s Kunai spreads into dozens of Kunai, but so does Tamaoyo’s.

“I see.” Jin says and moves his index finger a little bit. They both jump as the Kunai pour down and a wet splattering noise can be heard. They both land with a Kunai imbedded in their left shoulders.

“You may be able to see my movements, my Jutsu and attacks, but you’re still far behind me, you can’t match my speed…”

Jin disappears.

“You have less Chakra than me…”

He appears behind her, he’s pulled the Kunai out of his shoulder, and Tamaoyo’s shirt tears open and a slight scratch appears across her stomach.

“And you’re eyes are two slow to keep up with me.”

The is still an Jin in front of her and as he makes the final hand sign six other versions spread out counter clock-wise from the two of them.

“Bikou Kitsune Ken, Shadow sword Jutsu.”

They all whoosh forward striking with they’re swords in the sheaths still, they all cross to the opposite side they were on, then slide back into one standing in front of her, sliding his sword back onto his hip.

“Non-lethal Version.”

Tamaoyo falls.

“Never drew my sword either.”

Makenjii comes flying at him.

“Damn! Million Knives!” Jin frantically throws Kunai with his one better arm.

“One arm can’t move, my other hand is fried from so many Buster Claws, so all I have now are cheap parlor tricks.

“300 swords!” Makenjii calls out knocking the Kunai out of the air, Jin keeps throwing Kunai, then Shuriken, till Makenjii is right on him, he deflects her fists with his blade.

“This isn’t looking good.” Jin says. Then Makenjii knocks the Kunai out of his hand, and her other fist comes at his face.

SHEEEEEEEEEEN!

Makenjii’s fist is stopped by Jin’s Kodachi, at this moment the other three wake up. Makenjii steps back, smiling, so does Jin.

‘Looks like you pass.” Jin states happily.

“Looks like we do.” Says Makenjii shutting her eyes giggling and tilting her head.

“I’m kinda disappointed though, Tamaoyo, you were so close, why’d you lose?”

“You were too fast.” She says still holding her battered torso.

“What’s the golden rule for out running some one faster than you?” Jin asks impatiently.

“Don’t try?” he hears weakly from one of his battered graduates.

“Stand still.” Jin says sighing “Because they always come to you.”

“Ooooooooh!” The unanimous consensus of his team.

“Rest up and meet me in front of the Academy tomorrow at noon.

They all go off separate ways. Jin goes back and barely can jump back into his room, he flops down on his bed, Chibi comes over holding a roll of Med-Tape in his mouth.
“Thanks man.” Jin takes the tape and Wraps his right hand, left shoulder, and patches up the minor cuts, then passes out into a deep sleep in his pants, boots, and neck band, and nothing else.

The next morning Jin gets there and sees his team has been waiting for a while.

“Yo guys, when’d you guys get here?”

“8 a.m.” says Yuri.

“Why?” Jin asks.

“Because we wanted to be able to assess the situation in case it was a test.” Chimes Makenjii

Jin just looks confused. “You have to be the weirdest four people I ever met, but you’re pretty good Kunoichi so lets get on with our first mission!”

“YAY!!!” The Genin ring out.

“OKAY! OKAY, OKAY, OKAY OKAY!!!!” Jin states getting into the happy move.

“Team 8 movin out!”
this chapter was not produced by chibicage inc, but by JD Person



p.s. shinobi don't run away, they retreat and reasses!
p.s. shinobi don //Makenjii