Friday, September 3, 2004

5 fan-fic: Naraku's Entrance (this one is long... just to warn ya)
Chisaki walked as fast as she could, repeating to herself that she just needed to keep on going. On and on this went through her mind. All morning she would only allow herself to think about the mountain top and her reward at the top. Why weren’t those trees getting any closer? When the sun was way up in the sky and blaring its heat on the top of her head she decided to sit. To her relief there was a small creek running down from the West Mountains and she sat next to it. Chisaki drank from is only to spit it out. She could taste her own dried blood mixed in with it. Refraining to use some choice words, she splashed her face in the cool clear water. She tried to rub as much blood off her face as much as she dared due to the throbbing pain is caused to touch it. She was on her hands and knees, eyes closed, face above the water. She smelled the freshness of the air and she started to relax.

Chisaki finally opened her eyes. She looked at her face in the water pooling around her hands. She slapped the water, hard. She had never seen herself in such a condition. Though there was no broken skin, she had bags under her eyes, one half of her face was bruised, and trails of dried blood came from her nose down her neck. She should be in no condition; she had never fought with an enemy. She drank some water after cleaning herself. After a few more moments she got up, still fuming about her looks.

While walking she found herself following a well traveled trail going toward the mountains. She didn’t realize this until she had almost run into another demon who seemed o have no interest in her what-so-ever. She glanced up at him angrily as they passed each other. He was very tall, and his silver hair reminded her of that half-breed Inuyasha. What bugged her even more about him was that he barely looked at her and kept on walking by as if she wasn’t good enough to even be seen next to him. Then she blushed as she walked by a toad-like demon followed by a human girl both stood, starring at her.

Chisaki’s stomach grumbled. She finally realized she hadn’t eaten anything since the night before. She looked at her surroundings. The first stars of the night were coming out even though the sun still had about and hour to go before it set. But the thing she was happiest about was that she was near the forest! She would have someplace to sleep besides the ground! She walked along the trail that followed the edge of the forest for a while. She walked passed a well that seemed to be dry. The wind swept her face and hair. She looked up toward the sky and saw that giant cat with flaming feet soaring through the sky. She quickly jumped into the closest tree and watched with the up most attention. She heard a rhythmic clicking. Chisaki investigated the ground to see the Kagome woman riding a weird looking contraption with Inuyasha standing on the back. Chisaki looked up to the skies again to see that the cat flew away in the distance but Inuyasha and Kagome were heading strait toward her.
Chisaki knew better but her curiosity got the best of her, so she stayed to see what would happen. Kagome stopped at the well. “I wish you would just let me stay tonight Inuyasha. It’s the new moon!” Inuyasha picked up her bag off the pink slim thing they were riding on. “You think I don’t know that? I’d feel better if you were safe, back in your own time.”
Chisaki’s ‘over-hearing’ was interrupted by a rather menacing voice. “Now, now, spying is very rude you know.” Chisaki nearly fell out of the tree. She looked down at a demon dressed up as a baboon. How he snuck up on her was very curious, due to his potent smell, but than again, he was down wind from her. “Who might you be?” She asked him. “My name in Naraku. I’ve come looking for the half-breed called Inuyasha.” Chisaki didn’t like this at all, he seemed too cool about everything, “Why would you want anything to do with him?” She could imagine him smiling under that weird mask of his, “Because he and I have some unfinished business.” Chisaki raised her eyebrows as if to say ‘Oh?’ Naraku continued, “You see…” Chisaki cut him off, “Take off your mask so I can see your face, I’ve been taught not to trust anyone who hides their face during a conversation. If you’re ugly I can understand, but I must see your face. I need to look into your eyes.” Chisaki had remembered one particular story she had heard from her swords smith master Toutousai about a woman named Kikyo who had been murdered by a demon named Naraku fifty years ago. Naraku suddenly became very tall with many new limbs squirming about. Chisaki jumped but he caught her. He started to squeeze her, she couldn’t breath. Chisaki had her hand on Mekoru but couldn’t move enough to use it. She started to get desperate. Her eyes flashed red, her fangs grew, her claws barred. She transformed into a tiger. She bit and clawed at the tentacles holding her and ripped through them easily. She dropped to the ground and leapt at him again only to be thrown backwards out of the forest. She almost landed on Kagome, but Inuyasha pushed her out of the way just in time. Chisaki landed on all fours and started charging into the forest, but Inuyasha held his oversized sword in front of her and hit the ground with it sending a huge wave of fire toward her as he yelled “Wind Scar!” Fearing for her life, Chisaki jumped as high as she could, narrowly escaping his attack. Angered, She charged Inuyasha knocking him down. “No you don’t!” Inuyasha yelled at Chisaki throwing another “Wind Scar” at her. Frustrated she decided it would be best to take the sword away from Inuyasha so she could take care of Naraku. She transformed back to her original state, ran up a tree and back flipped over the Wind Scar. She ran toward the confused Inuyasha and grabbed his sword. An electric shock hit her body and was thrown back. She heard Naraku laughing, and that pissed her off. She pulled out Mekoru and charged Inuyasha one last time. Inuyasha had a smug look on his face, “I don’t know who you are but you are goin’ down!” Chisaki watched his sword carefully and how he held it. He looked like he was going to use his Wind Scar again. She concentrated on her speed and she went faster looking at only the base of Inuyasha’s sword. It was like watching him go into slow motion. Chisaki chose her moment, swung Mekoru around Inuyasha’s sword and sent it flying. Kagome screamed, “Naraku!” Chisaki turned around to look. There he was laughing, “YOU JERK!!!!” Chisaki ran at him, as fast as she ran at Inuyasha, and sliced him into two diagonally at the torso, cutting his heart. She turned around only to find a wooden carving sliced. She picked up a piece and cursed, throwing it at a tree.

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