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Tuesday, November 22, 2005

an eyeliner story - seeing hell
sorry it took me so long but i have been stressed totally out of my mind.
here u guys go.

Billy is sitting on the seat next to you sleeping. His head moving up and down as he breathes, you watch him.
*billy, my bily.* you think smiling to yourself.
You look at the celing and then close your eyes.

A dark coridoor, i was standing in a dark, broken coridoor. Doors and windows smashed, walls covered in cracks and corpses laying everywhere.I walked down to the left, almost standing on the corpse of a young girl, with black hair and a battered teddie.
I leaned down and put my hand on her white dress then i saw something horrible.Her past memories.
"Momma leave me alone please!" she screamed as here mother beat her."momma!"
You quichly withdrew my hand and continued.
I walked into a room with white all round, a man on the floor, he wasn't dead so i walked over.
"____" he breathed.
I looked into his pale face.
"Billy." i whisper.
"Hes here....run...now." his eyes rolled in his head.
I stood up and looked round, the face of satin standing from the darkness.
"Come _____ i will make u feel loved." he out streached a hand and i took it.
He grapped me throwing me into dark water and held me down, i couldn't breathe.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" you scream as you wake up.
Billy and paul rush to help you.
"Its okay, its alreight, you where having a bad dream."
You lay your head back down.
"Your not dead." you say to billy
He looks at you.
"Not that i know off." he replies.
Tears drip from your eyes.
"Iv seen hell." you cry," i swear...i have."

Thats it, by the way the middle paragraph is in frist person.
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