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Tuesday, December 26, 2006


#25!!
Okay, I can't resist. This is leading to a REALLY good part! I can't wait to put it up! It's the best part of the story!

“Ataku, what are you doing?” Lyna yelled beside him, while they were running, the girl still kicking. “I, ow! Quit it!” He yelled. “Unhand me now!! Put me down this instance!” She shrieked, pounding on his head. They turned a corner, and Ataku plopped the girl on the floor. “Lyna, if she leaves, smoke her.” He grinned. The girl looked at Lyna nervously, but Lyna waved Ataku’s comment away. “So, anyway, Ataku, why did you take her with you?” He looked at Lyna, his crow black eyes shining. “She’s a half-bred. We’re holding her hostage.” The girl scrambled to her feet. “Well, if I’m being held captive, will you do me a favor?” She nodded at Lyna. Lyna nodded back. “Will you please, stop calling me ‘the girl’?!” She stomped her foot madly. “My name is Kiichigo. Got it?” She flicked her ear. Ataku snickered. Kiichigo sniffed the air. “They’re coming.” In a flash, Ataku scooped Kiichigo up, grabbed Lyna’s hand, and took off running. “God, Kiichigo, you’re heavier than you look!” He said, as he slowed down to catch his breath. She snorted. “It’s not my fault, most of my weight is from my ears!” She shook her head, her earrings clanking against each other. Fuzuki, Kaoruko…Lyna thought. Where are you?

Be quiet, Lyna. You whine too much. "We're in danger!! My ankle's twisted. Aliens are about to kill me. I'm all alone with a psycho." Wah, wah wah. Too much whining!
L:0_o you call that whining?! What's wrong with you?

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#24!!
Yay! i know, you've all been waiting for it! *Crickets chirping* Oh, I guess not everyone. Or maybe invisible people read my story!! ^^ Cool!
L; You are so weird.
On with the story then!

The machine was screaming wildly, and Kaoruko was kicking the air angrily. “Ataku, let me go!!” Kaoruko yelled. Fuzuki flinched. That were the first words she had said all day. “Who’s Ataku?” Chinao mouthed over the machines yells, and Kaoruko’s continuous cries. Fuzuki shrugged. The door opened, along with the doctor and two nurses, flustered. “What in the world happened here?” He yelled. Suddenly, the machine went back to its dim hum, and Kaoruko silenced. “You two! What happened?” He repeated, his face turning red from tension. Chinao shuffled her feet. “Uh, one of the little suction-cup things fell off her head,” She pointed at Kaoruko. “And we put it back on. Then Fuzuki knocked down a chair.” She motioned at Fuzuki, who held her foot up. The doctor sighed, pointed his long, crooked finger at Chinao, and closed the door behind him. Chinao sighed. “That was too close!”

yes, too close!
L:*throws shoe at Choco*
Even way closer!!
Ack!! Run away!

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Monday, December 25, 2006


   Merry Christmas!
I hope you all got what you want! I got a new sketchbook, and penicls, and everything! I'm going to draw a lot, so be ready! ^^
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Sunday, December 24, 2006


#23!!
Yay! This is the part where-
L;Stop telling them everything!!!!
Okay, okay. Touchy.
L:Touchy?! How about a be 'touchy' all over your face with my fist?!
...okay then! On with the story!

“Lyna, hang in there! We’re going to stop soon.” Ataku’s feet had a soft rhythm, and Lyna felt her eyes trying to give way to her will. “I’m…trying.” She yawned, the pain returning to her foot. Ataku slowed down. They were outside of the large building, hiding behind an oddly shaped bush. He set her down lightly, and Lyna wished he wouldn’t. Her foot was throbbing, but her heart was pounding. Ataku crouched beside her as she sat in a comfortable position. He looked around, then at Lyna. “Wait here. I’ll be back in a minute.” He gave her a smile for reinsurance, then stood up and ran. She sighed. A rustling sounded from over to her left. She moved her good foot forward and nudged the rustling bush. A head popped out. “Boo!” It yelled. Lyna yelped, jumping at least a foot away. The head laughed. It scrambled out and sat up, smiling at Lyna. It was an alien, but it wasn’t Kyuu, it was a girl. “Hi! Who are you?” She asked. Lyna looked at her eyes, and saw they were a deep green, staring back at her. The weird girl awkwardly messed with her pointy ears. “Lyna!” Ataku yelled. “Ataku? Where are you?” Lyna yelled back, attempting to stand up. She turned around to face the girl, but she was gone. Her foot stung her, but she hobbled over the bush to see Ataku running towards her, the same weird girl she had just met under his arm, kicking and screaming.

Okay, i can tell you now!
L:*mumble*
^^ This part was about Kiichigo! Yes, Darkangel666's kiichigo! ^^
So, happy new years everyone! See you later!

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   I'm a doll!!
Wow, she looks...different. I'm bored here, people! ^^ If I was a doll, I'd probably look like her...

elouai's doll maker 3

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   Merry Christmas!!!
I am so happy! I asked for DDR for christmas, and I have to open presents today, and I got it! And a new PS2!!! YAY!! So happy am I! I hope everybody gets what they want for Christmas! ^^ Merry Christmas, happy holidays, and happy new years! ^^
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#22!!
yes, Lyna and Ataku are in a tight situation, and i know you want to see what happens to them, but...oh well!
L:What?!
C: Yeah, you heard what i said. Oh well. Too bad. So sad. On with the story!!

“Fuzuki. Wake up.” Chinao whispered. Fuzuki’s blurry eyes cleared. “W-where am I?” She rubbed her eyes tiredly. Chinao sighed. “The hospital, I’m afraid. You fell asleep beside Kaoruko.” She pointed to Kaoruko, who was still lying still breathing eerily. Fuzuki stretched out her legs, which were sore from sitting in the uncomfortable chair. “Is Kaoruko doing good?” She asked, wiggling her fingers. Chinao sighed again, and bit her lip. “Yeah, she’s fine.” The two looked at Kaoruko. Suddenly, the machine made a very odd sound. “What the…” Chinao yelled, over the noise. Kaoruko winced, and moved her head side to side. “Kaoruko! Hang in there…” Fuzuki yelled, fumbling over the chair.

Clumbsy Fuzuki. Oh well, what'cha gonna do? ^^ Next part comin' out! Merry Christmas eve, everyone! ^^

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#21!!
Another part of the story...with Lyna and Ataku!! All alone....what will they do?
L:SHADDUP!!
^^ On with the story!! (Before Lyna kills me...)

“Oh crap.” Ataku muttered into Lyna’s ear. In front of them was Kyuu, his eyes red with anger. “Sorry, Lyna. It’s business!” And with that, the darkness around him moved forward. But it wasn’t darkness. It was a whole herd of Kirema Anima. “Oh crap!” Lyna repeated, with a Anima jumping at her. Ataku scrambled to reach Lyna, then they both burst through the door that they had came through. Ataku tightened his grip on Lyna’s hand. “Oof!” Ataku froze. Lyna froze. Lyna’s foot had given way to her, and she was on the ground, staring in horror at the Kirema Animas. “Dragona Alona!” She croaked out. The staff innocently appeared in her hand. With only seconds till the Anima attacked, Lyna jumped up, winced, and hobbled towards Ataku, leaning on her staff. “Lyna! Let’s go!” He hurriedly picked Lyna up, and carried her through the twisting hallways. Lyna’s foot kept bouncing against her, but oddly, she couldn’t feel the pain anymore.

Aw, that's so sweet! no pain for Lyna! Just...
L;Say it, and you will feel pain! Lots of it!!
O_o; okay then...

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Saturday, December 23, 2006


#19!!
Poor kaoruko...let's see how Lyna's doing! On with the story!!

“Great! Just what I needed, more hallways!” Ataku yelled furiously. Kyuu must have pulled a red alert or something, because a very annoying red light and noise where flickering. “Run, Lyna!” He yelled over the noise. She nodded firmly. They could faintly hear Kyuu screaming behind them. Lyna screeched to a halt right before a large door with writing all over it. Ataku moaned. “Okay, so how do we open it?” he yelled. “I don’t know! Why are you asking me? I’m like, 5 billion miles away from anything I know!!” Then it hit her. “Allaformatagona!” She yelled. “What? That’s..” Ataku’s voice was drowned as the door disappeared into thin air. “Cool.” Unfortunately, there was nothing cool behind the door. “You!”
“Is she going to be okay?” Fuzuki asked the doctor nervously. He smiled. “Yes, she’s in a coma, though, so she won’t be able to hear anything you say.” Fuzuki’s heart sank at the word ‘coma’. Kaoruko’s in a coma…she thought. Coma…He put his hand on her shoulder briefly, but all Fuzuki could feel was death. She shuddered. The machines by Kaoruko’s side buzzed with her life. Chinao was seated in a chair beside the bed, silently crying while she was fidgeting with her fingers. “Chinao,” Fuzuki cooed softly, choking on her words. “I’m okay.” Chinao stuttered. Kaoruko lay limply on the hospital bed, her hair combed down, with a single braid pulled behind her ear. Chinao had braided it so Kaoruko knew that she had friends in the spirit world, and come back to join them. Or so she told Fuzuki. Kaoruko looked oddly asleep. Fuzuki leaned over Kaoruko. “Allaformatagona.” She whispered in Fuzuki’s ear. It was hoarse and calm, but Fuzuki was stunned. “She…she talked!” Fuzuki sputtered out to Chinao. She cocked her head. “Fuzuki, Kaoruko’s in a coma. She can’t talk.” Fuzuki whirled around to face Kaoruko. “Hang in there, Kaoruko.”

hang in there...don't forget!
L:Stop telling them everything!!!
But its helping!
L:Stop it!!
*Princess Ichigo slaps Lyna*
L:That..hurt!
Too bad. ^^

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Friday, December 22, 2006


#18!!
Happyness!! Pat 18, which is a tiny bit. Just about Kaoruko...oh, I miss her! *cries dramatically* Waah! Oh, *sniff* get on with the story!!

“Gone? What do you mean, gone?” Fuzuki’s voice shook with terror. Chinao stood on her feet shakily. “No! Not gone, gone. Just kinda gone. She fell over when I was talking to her. She’s like in a coma or something like that. She’s breathing, but she’s not sleeping.” Fuzuki ran to where Chinao stood. Kaoruko was lying crippled on the ground, her hair flying in the wind. Fuzuki fell to her knees, beside Kaoruko. “Wake up! Wake up, Kaoruko!” She shook her gently. Chinao gave a pat on the back. “C’mon, we better get her to Ko Kou.” Fuzuki didn’t even ask Chinao how she knew about that. Amazingly, Chinao scooted Fuzuki over and picked up Kaoruko. Kaoruko looked limp, and a frown was on her face. “We have to change back, so no one will notice us, Fuzuki.” They transformed back, and walked back down the grass path.

Wasn't that sad?
L:You are a b-i-g- b-a-b-y. Got it memorized?
Don't do that!! That reminds me of...Axel!!! Darn it, Axel, why did you have to die???!! *WAAAAH!!!!* I miss Axel...ZO Axel...Axel...*sniff*
L:V_V;

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