Monday, December 4, 2006

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my good friend felicia ryder wrote these....she would like feedback and i am spreading the word....lets just call it my good deed of the day


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Biting my own lip raw I watch my youth die away

Admist the mess you see, there is shame and hate

Another hour was killed today.

Of your promise, I am grateful but what do you want with me?

I could never break my end know that, I myself will break first.

There's no holding this back any longer,

it's been growing inside, becoming stronger long enough

I won't die gasping for breath under your hand

i won't sacrifice my will as I'm being choked.

Hope may be suffocating, but my soul will live.

So will you watch my life fail or plan your escape?

Cracking the broken wall will go down,

Cold lies have been told,

Observe as I tear away unaffected in mind, body broken.

Rather than becoming another product of your life,

I see through you and I will struggle for anything for this is hell.

Rebels may live, and angels may cry,

Saints may sigh and gods may lie

But you haven't won the battle nor the war.
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ugh i dont know...<-she named it not me



i pour out my soul in torrents

words wasting slowly away

desire going for ambitions so high

how is it you fling them down

you claim to know me

but do u even know yourself?

i thought you were there for me

i thought you had my back

i never thought youd be the one to dig the knife in so deep

never thought youd make me bleed

though now its just a cut

it feels like so much more

ive never been left alone before

o why the glances of hatred it seems?

why the ignoring grimaces?

what didd i do to deserve

this vow of eternal silence?

all i wanted was for us to be happy

yet isnt it ironic?

the thing i wanted so badly

seems to be killing me now.

these tied ends unraveled now

when did the world begin to blur

we had alot in the palm of our hands

and now were left with memories

memories that hurt and sting

memories that dont seem to faze you

have you even begun to understand

that id still die for you?

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he knows who he is, he knows but it wont matter.


you say
you wont drag me on the ground
but before i even met you
i was the one crawling around
you wouldnt be wasting your time
id be the one with time thrown away.
stop running oh wont you stop running through
the empty minutes of my day
cuz then cant forget you, ive tried everyway
almost alike that is kinda ironic
two caught up in lies, shame, pretenses
two falling.

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there ya go comment and stuff please and thank you!
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