Friday, January 27, 2006

   Something I wrote
Something I wrote, even though I'm supposed to being doing work. I wanted to post it, so leave comments and take a look! Please tell me what you think:

My name is Elion Frema. Stars had always fasinated me ever since I was a small child. At the age of ten I had made astrological discoveries that most people hadn't even thought of yet. I was known as the most inteligent kid on earth, and though I was an orphan, I was soon able to support myself when I reached the age of fourteen. The called me a child prodigy, though I never paid much mind to it. I was just really happy that I was able to find new things in outer space, and be close to something I found truly inspiring. I also did this because it was the closest I'd ever get to outer space. I thank my asthma for that... Basically if it wasn't for the asthma, and the fact that my social life was, well, non-exsistent, I was quite happy. But I never expected that my dream to visit outer space, and get a social life, would end up with me keeping the balance of the universe, and saving it from crazy weirdos. Here's what happened...

It all started one night, a few months back. I looked up towards the night sky as I laid on the green grass, which shimmered slightly in the moonlight. My jeans were a bit dirty, as was my blue short sleeve top. The stars twinkled brightly in the sky as if they were little diamonds, each one different in it's own way. The cool, evening breeze tickled my face, blowing my long, dark brown hair about, as if it were caressing it gently. It was a beautiful night for star gazing and the calming effects of the evening washed over me. My mind drifted freely as I watched this beauty float above me; my imagination inspired with new ideas. I took a deep breath, as my large chest heaved up and down, and closed my blue eyes for a moment. Looking to the side, I saw the glass of wine I had been drinking. Picking up the glass, I gently brought it to my lips, and took a sip. The warming affects of the drink rushed through my body, and I curved my pink lips into a small smile, as I gazed at the moon's reflection in the wine. I put the glass down again, and put my tan hands behind my head, my hair wrapping around my slender fingers slightly. Everything was perfect, simply perfect. At least, I thought so...
Soon enough I heard a crash. Upon hearing it, I sat up instantly, knocking down my glass of wine. I muttered a few curse words, and then stood up, looking for the source of that large sound. I walked back into my house, and grabbed the kendo sword I kept in the closet. Getting into a firm battle stance, I walked outside to the front of my house. As I took a couple of steps, until a bright light came into view. Sheilding my eyes, I walked over to it cautiously. Muttering to myself, I said in my soft yet musical voice, "What in the hell...?"
As I got closer, I looked down into the small ditch only to find a boy, who looked to be about sixteen, the same age as me. He shimmered in the darkness of night, and looked up at me with emotionless green eyes. His hair was tied up in a low pony tail that reached his mid back, and his hair was a light blond. His lips were lush, and his skin was pale; his body, thin yet slightly muscular. All he wore was a pair of blue pants, and a silver choker on his neck. Next to him laid, what appeared to be, a large panther, and the boy sat close to the large beast. I stared down at the pair in awe, and pointed at them with my kendo sword in fear. I put on a brave front, and asked them in threatning tone, "Who are you?"
The boy looked at me with a dead expression and stayed silent. Still I pushed him, and shouted, "Who are you?!"
I put my kendo sword to the boy's neck, and nudged him with it. The boy looked down at it, unafraid, and grabbed it with one hand, and broke it in half. I looked down at the broken sword in fear, for it was the only means of defense I had. I threw the wrecked piece I had to the side, and backed up slowly. The boy jumped out of the ditch, and walked into front of me, the panther following him. I soon stopped, too stuptefied to move, and stared at the boy. Since the boy was slightly taller than me, he stared down at me, unflinching and uncaring. After a long period of silence, he said in a soft monotone voice, "I am...Secro, and this is Kiro. The Intergalatic Star Foundation has sent me to do a mission..."
I stayed quiet, too confused to say much, and scared that if I said something the panther, known as Kiro, would have me for a midnight snack. The silence continued, until Secro continued on with his orders, in that empty voice of his, "I have a message for you, Elion Frema. Due to your large knowledge in stars, you are to come back to the Interglactic Star Foundation with me to become an official Star Guardian."
And that was the straw that broke the camel's back. My head spun out of control, all the things that didn't add up, pushing themselves into hmy head too fast. And with that, I soon fell over, and fainted from shock...

Well that's all I have. If you want me to write more, or if you have any suggestions, please leave me a comment! Sayonara!
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