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• 2005-06-10
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• Leslie
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• as in school? a poetry award...the rest "top in class x" awards (teacher;s pet)
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• Cardcaptors came on WB...awful dubs now *shudders*
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• Kaliedo Star and Chobits. Oh! and .hack//sign...all others start to blend together to me
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• To inspire someone
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• swimming, tennis, drawing, listening to music, being lazy, schoolwork...cosplay
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• Sucking up? None that I'm aware of
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Friday, November 18, 2005
While I was away some people did some major critic bashing...
My turn to defend them. I understood his comment. I entered the "desert rose" poem and, after lurking around the poems for about a week, i found how choppy it was. You know how people from other countries kinda skip verbs? I do to try to ryhme and not get too crazy with syllables. I've learned quite a lot and i hope to whatever diety that it helps me in english class. =P They are cool people and look as you as an equal. There are some who just bash you but I wouldn't get upset about that. Just, going through revising poetry is difficult(ugh), and every time i get shot down i have to raise my standards. So this next one is revised to have more flow!! yay!
Went to a physics day- wonderful feild trip, might i add. but~ there were no lines so you realized how little was there. we did most rides 2-3 times each. some 4. + eating + worksheets in 7 hours. some lovely people took carmeras on water rides and got them ruined heh heh heh...-cough-
And...despite my cheerful mood, I feel like poking my eye out. I entered into something I shouldn't have, and I hurt someone I cared for.
The first time,
if failed.
The second?
I bailed.
I just myself unready for this emotion.
okay, actually revised poetry.
Tea leaves
Tea leaves, when swirled in water, hold
Fortunes they have yet to unfold.
Their magic seeps into their drenched brew-
Left, undefined, for chosen few
Who can unravel their secrets.
Beware how much, though, is believed;
Manipulation has deceived
Translation of the greatest reading;
Trivial mistakes are feeding
The incomparable regrets.
if any bad comments on it, I'd like to know. before i enter it to be torn to shreds =)
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