Tuesday, January 27, 2004

paper
This is a piece I'm working on that's supposed to reveal alot about me...More than those quizzes, I hope ;) Anyways heres it with the names changed around...By the way this took place freshman year 2 years ago.

Boy killed by beam
A 14 year-old Fairbanks boy was killed
Sunday evening when he was crushed by
a beam at a construction site in North Pole.
According to a North Pole police officer,
the boy was working with his father at a site
when the accident happened at about 5:45 p.m.
The two were working with others at the site
to lift a house so a new foundation could be
constructed underneath it.
He said the boy was crushed when a 2-
foot tall, 50- to 60-foot long I-beam fell on him.
The boy sustained severe internal injuries
and was pronounced dead in the ambulance
at the scene.


Oblivion. The void parted as colors and shapes materialized out of the infinity of imagination. Souls floating in a miasma slowly condense into bodily form. They become people without names, shifting position around one person who ignores them.

The single person opened her eyes, and all she sees is a boy running away with figures in white. Gone were the multitudes of people shifting around her, never to surround her again. In a panic, she ran after the boy, hoping to regain sight of him, but she stumbled into a forest that had materialized in front of her. A cracked table lay among thorns and dead foliage.

Disbelief and confusion left her unsure of what path to take through the forest.


Girl finds out horrible truth
Monday morning Danni learned of a school
mate’s death while she sat down at the very
table they had eaten together.
Earlier in the morning, another girl came
into her Biology class and in-formed her friend
of the event without her knowledge.
“I asked her what the matter was, but she just
left with a distraught manner and tears in her
eyes,” reported Danni, looking down as she did.
“I guess she never heard me ask her. Nobody
seems to hear me, however loud I shout”.
The whole class had gone on, the friend
absent, and Danni left wondering what had
caused her friend to leave class.
When the lunch hour had come, Danni
approached their table, and picked up her
friend’s conversation. They were saying that
they couldn’t believe that he’s dead. Danni,
shocked, asked details of the accident.
Assessing the news, Danni was unable to
process her reaction. She could do nothing,
despite the panic within her.
She sat stunned until her schoolmates got up,
leaving her. She followed as she chose to,
unasked.



This is the first part of my 7 part paper, which is not done, even though it's supposed to be...Any suggestions and comments on teh paper is very much welcomed.
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