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Monday, October 23, 2006

My past...

i wrote this poem for a class assignment. it has to be about our favorite place and it could be a story, essay, poem, etc. i did a poem about my past. please tell me what you think cuz this is a rough draft. so i need to fix it and add more but i just want to see how it is or will i have to do it on something else like the mountains instead. i need advice and critism! please and thank you! i appreciate this!

My past…

My favorite place is my past
I miss it very much
The times when I was most happy
I smiled because of that one person
For that person made it so wonderful
I love every moment of my past
Although I can only be in my past within my mind
I think of all the cheers and laughter that I felt
My memories of my past are a bit painful
I still like to think of it whenever I can
Because the past cannot repeat itself
I constantly wish that it would
So my mind plays those images over and over
I love it yet I hate it
But it doesn’t matter
I love my past either way
As painful or joyful it was
I think of it at least once every day
For my favorite place would be my past
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