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Tuesday, October 24, 2006
a poem: my favorite place...
thank you all for your advice, comments, and criticism on my other poem. well i changed it and this the one i'm going to turn in for a grade. i like it cuz it includes parts of my other poem, dealing with memories. i decided to change it because the other one made some poeple cry and i didn't want a person to read it. but i really like this one and i'm turning it in tomorrow 10/24. but i just want to know what you think. please be honest!!! i really appreciate this!!!
My Favorite Place…
My favorite place would be my mind.
Where I dream impossible dreams,
Think beyond words,
Create images that cannot be seen in reality itself.
Within my mind, I see pictures,
Pictures of the past, present, and future.
I play memories, both happy and painful,
Seeing what has happen that cannot repeat.
I can do so many things within my mind,
Of some that I cannot do in reality.
My mind is an escape from my everyday life,
As well as a tool that is needed in everyday life.
My mind is where I like to spend my time just thinking,
Whether it is something that has happened or merely a fantasy.
I find myself merged into the deep thoughts, dreams, and memories I have.
Sometimes wishing that they would really happen.
My mind is a wonderful place where I can explore.
A perfect place that brings me happiness.
However, this place exists only for me.
For no one else can enter my mind,
Except me.
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