Friday, June 2, 2006

his life was only beginning.

I have made a story about dn angel!over a new ending.please tell me what you think of it.
[satoshi,risa,dark,krad daisuke and yes me [jaine]are all in the story.

Today the balance between good and evil would be decided.daisuke knew that he was physically ready. He had been training.he had told his friends of the prophecy. However, he didn’t know if he was emotionally ready. He knew that krad was evil,that he would kill anyone he could if given the chance. He knew that he,daisuke, was all that stood between krad and the rest of the world.In spite of knowing all this,he still hated the idea of having to take another life.
daisuke turned and looked at his friends.satoshi stood next to risa,with a look of determination on his face that daisuke had never seen before. It was as if something had been lit up inside of him,something strong,primal.daisuke knew that satoshi was ready to fight by his side as he had always done.He then looked at risa, who had a look on her face that matched satoshi’s so well that daisuke had to wonder why they ever doubted they were right for each other. He then look at dark,He did not see one measure of doubt on his faces as he looked steadily back at him.It was a great source of comfort.He started to think If they know without doubt that I can do this,maybe I should know it too.Finally, he turned to look at his beloved jaine. Their relationship had started out slowly at first.daisuke couldn’t remember when he didn’t love her. He had never say the words.but He knew that jaine understood how he felt, he just didn’t think it would be right to tell her those words. For him, they were a promise, and until he was sure it was one he could keep.
I love you,daisuke,jaine said softly.
I know, he replied. He sighed, and then walked over to her. He took her hands in his and said, I don’t know what is going to happen out there. I just wanted you to know what you mean to me. jaine, I-She silenced him with a gentle finger on his lips.When you get back, you can tell me.jaine,I am not sure,he started, but she silenced him again.I am.I know you,daisuke.I know your strength and your courage and your heart.I know that you will win, and that you will come back for me. I will see you after it is all over, my love.
Just promise me this,said daisuke.Be careful out there,please.Give me something to come back to.
I will,I promise,jaine replied,tears in her eyes.That goes for all of you,said daisuke.I want to come home to my friends,not their bodies.
satoshi spoke,daisuke,we will do anything we can to help you out there.I will be careful,I promise you that.But I am willing to-
I know,daisuke interrupted.The fact that you would means everything to me, really.But still, be careful, okay? If I lost you,I would-
Lose your best friend,we know,said risa.
No,not just my best friend,daisuke replied. I would lose the two people who literally saved my soul.Without your support,without your love and understanding,especially through the last years,I don't know what would have happened to me? Not only would I have been incapable of being with jaine,I would have been incapable of emotions.Without you two my bitterness and anger would have taken me over.Without you,I would be krad himself.We never would have let that happen daisuke,said risa firmly,in that know-it-all way that both daisuke and satoshi loved so much.
I know, but still,thank you.replied daisuke.
Dark cleared his throat,and said,I am terribly sorry,daisuke, but he’s approaching.We have to go now.daisuke nodded.He stood up, and satoshi and risa either on his side.jaine stood behind him.They have said their goodbyes earlier to there family's.Then with Dark guarding everyone’s backs,they silently filed out to meet their destiny.daisuke?
daisuke groaned.His head was pounding, and he could tell that he had a couple of broken ribs. He struggled to open his eyes, and as his vision cleared, he realized that an angel was standing over him. His angel.jaine,he gasped, looking at her face. He noted the bruises and sat up suddenly,ignoring the pain.What-what happened?
It’s over,my darling.We won!
But satoshi and risa and- he started, but she interrupted, saying,They are all right.Just banged up,like us.It’s over,daisuke said, in disbelief.He repeated himself,It’s over. It’s over.It’s over!he finally let out, with a joyous whoop.It’s over,we’re okay!
Yes,replied jaine,laughing.He grinned, reached up,and pulled her down as gently as he could. He kissed her with all of the passion, all of the anxiety, and all of the joy that he was feeling. She was Losing herself.she started to push her hands up underneath his shirt.He started to push his hands under hers as well.They kept on kissing, until-daisuke,the press is looking for a statement said Dark,coming over to his bed. He stopped when he saw what was going on.and said So I shall tell them that you’re, ahem, still recovering then?
daisuke looked up, beet red, and managed to choke out,Uh, that would be a good idea,dark.
Dark nodded, and walked off.jaine began to laugh again,and for the first time in a long while,daisuke joined her. He looked at her, and said the words he had wanted to say for years, jaine,I love you.
I love you too,daisuke,she replied.
He kissed her again, only lightly this time, and she lay against him, listening to his heartbeat through his thin cotton T-shirt. As they drifted off to sleep,daisuke thought in amazement how only a few hours ago,he thought he was saying his final farewells. Now, he realized with a measure of hope that he hadn’t known in quite some time, his life was only beginning.

bye now.
jaine niwa.

ps.to al my otaku.com friends
have a great weekend!


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